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Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 08:43 pm Title: Long Story Short

Really good chappie, hon. You've got Faith's voice down pat. Poor Spike has to deal with bitchy, hormonal Buffy*eep* Buffy has to be more careful now that she's pregnant,hope Faith keeps her secret.

I'm so sorry you had to go to the hospital..hope everythings OK. *sends good thoughts your way*

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! I'm so pleased to hear that I'm writing Faith ok! It's kinda hard to write her. :) I'm doing ok. My doc put my on Vicodin but sent me home. I don't have gallstones. I just think my gallbladder hates me. LOL

Reviewer: hope Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 07:54 pm Title: Long Story Short

Oh-ooooooooooooooooooooo! It will be all right, right? Thank you for all well writen spuffiness!!!

Author's Response: Hehe...you'll see! Thanks!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 07:40 pm Title: Long Story Short

Wonder how Buffy will react now. Can't wait to find out. Great update!

Author's Response: :) If I could get myself to start writing the chapter, maybe you'll find out...hehe...:)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 07:05 pm Title: Long Story Short

That really didn't go well with Faith at all and now she knows about the baby too I hope she can be trusted. Hope you get better soon too :)

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! I appreciate that!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 04:20 pm Title: Long Story Short

Well, she couldn't keep that a secret forever. I'm not worried about Faith, though. Sure, she's a bitch, but I do believe she has changed and I know she wouldn't tell the council about that, not when she's running from them as well. I hope Buffy and Faith can work together, I always like it more when they're friends and not enemies.

Author's Response: Thanks Tammy! Yeah, Buffy's secret definitely wasn't going to be kept for long. Now, the only thing is...what happens when the council finds out? Dun dun dun.....!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 06:19 am Title: It's Been a Long Time

Great chapter. I like the part where the girl at the store was flirting with Spike right in front of Buffy. Some women are just classless. He is with his pregnant wife that means he is taken. The nerve of some women. I'm surprise that Buffy didn't go all Slayer on the girl. That would have been fun to read. I also like the Spike and Faith fight. I love the couple of scenes that Spike and Faith had on the show.
Also, two thing that I wanted to say. One is that I love that you update fast. That is always great. Second being is that hope you feel better. I didn't read before that you might be going to the hospital. It is good to know that you didn't have to. But I wish you good health.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) Yeah, the woman in the store was pretty class-less. But Buffy knew she didn't have anything to worry about, even if she is a little insecure about her burgeoning belly. :) As for my health, I was up until nearly 4 AM with pains, and I almost gave in and went to the hospital, but then the pain subsided and now I feel ok. I just want to get to Pennsylvania and see my sis and then whatever happens next happens. :)

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Date: 03/17/2009 - 02:17 am Title: Hold Me



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Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 02:07 am Title: It's Been a Long Time

So cute..loved the visit to the Dr and the shopping spree. Can just see Spike holding her purse.haha. And of course the shopgirl had to flirt with Spike, even with his pregnant wife there.No can resist the hotness that is Spike*smirk* Loved the scene in the cemetery with Faith and the line from S7. Hope Faith doesn't cause trouble for Spuffy when she finds out they're married.

Lovin it as usual. :) Glad you didn't have to go to the hospital and hope you continue to feel better.

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! :) I'm glad you liked the shopping scene! I had fun writing it...especially the 'hot mama' scene. Hehe...:)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 12:39 am Title: It's Been a Long Time

Well, is Faith the good slayer or the bad slayer.. and under whose control?

Enjoying.. you are on a roll.. hope you're feeling better..

Author's Response: Thanks Pam! :) I'm nearly finished with the next chapter. My motivation is to keep my mind off of my illness, so I'm whipping these chapters out, apparently. :)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 12:20 am Title: It's Been a Long Time

How did I know Faith would come back. I'm glad that Buffy got to Spike in time. Can't wait for Buffy to find out why Faith is there. hope your feeling better.

Author's Response: Thank you, Jenn! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 11:25 pm Title: It's Been a Long Time

Heh - you already have a new chapter :)
Awe :) The shopping was fun till it got interrupted.
Didn't expect Faith to be there already. She didn't recognize Spike, huh?
Hopefully she can convince Buffy and Spike that Dana is in danger / and dangerous now.
Looking forward to more - take care of yourself.

Author's Response: Thanks cordy! Yeah, well Faith and Spike only really had one little encounter, when she was in Buffy's body. But she'll remember him pretty soon. ;) Glad you liked the shopping trip! :)

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Date: 03/16/2009 - 10:56 pm Title: The Pratts

Sorry to hear you not well again; hope you're better some time later. Or go to the hospital to have it checked up (because it's coming back?). No clue what you have - *sends "get better again"-wishes*

The way things are at the moment with Dana I'm glad that Faith got away.
Mmmh and I hope they can keep their private collection really private - a lot of blackmail material *g*.

Glad to see Buffy and Spike so happy :))

Author's Response: LOL, thanks cordy! :) Yeah, I'm not sure what I have, but I'm about 80% sure it's a gallbladder problem. My grandmother, mother, and sister all had to have theirs removed. *shrug* I'm hoping to hold off on the doctor until after I get back from Pennsylvania next week. As for the private collection, I'm sure that'll come up again sooner or later. :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 10:46 pm Title: The Pratts

Glad the drug didn't work on Faith and that she was able to get away. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks Photography Nut! Well, Dana gave her the drug while she was unconscious, so it may have worked, BUT, it wore off. That might come into play later in the story. :)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 08:55 pm Title: The Pratts

That was awesome. :) I loved that there going to have there own little private collection of pictures and it's so sweet when they said goodmorining to each other. Poor Dana I was hoping that Faith could help her but I'm glad that Faith got away and hopefully she can get Buffy to understand the situation. I hope your pain has gone away and that you didn't have to go to the hospital.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! So far, no hospital, but I don't wanna speak too soon. I'm working on the next chapter right now, and it seems to take my mind off of things. :)

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 06:39 pm Title: The Pratts

Wonderful! Can't get enough of this story. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Pet!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 02:44 pm Title: The Pratts

Oh I forgot..love the new banner, but I've loved all of them! You're really talented.:)

Author's Response: :) Aw, thanks!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 02:41 pm Title: The Pratts

I love that they can take pics of Spike, now he can see himself whenever he wants..it's so cute. The sex was hot and they're both so happy to be married.:)
Good that Faith got away, but now I'm really worried about what Dana will do.

And of course you have to go on ,this story is sooo good! I hope you feel better and that you don't have to go to the hospital, that would suck.:(

Loved the chappie!


Author's Response: Hehe...thank you! Faith is gonna have a bigger part in the story pretty soon...but not to worry...Bitty Buffy won't be harmed in the making of this fan fiction. ;)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 02:18 pm Title: The Pratts

Poor Faith and Dana...

And yes for the happy couple.. but when will the Council find out about Spike and the Baby.. Bad ..

Enjoying.

Author's Response: :) Thanks!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 01:31 pm Title: The Pratts

One more thing, I see you have another banner. I've liked all of them, but I think this one is my favorite. Do you make them yourself? If so, I may be tempted to have you make a banner for my new fiction...lol!

Author's Response: Oh yeah! Thanks! I do make them myself. This one's my favorite so far, as well. :) I'd be happy to make you one. Just lemme know what pix you'd want me to use. My e-mail is myimmortal329@gmail.com. :)

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 01:26 pm Title: The Pratts

Aww, your Spuffy always makes me smile, which I really need at the moment. It also makes me incredibly jealous, I wish I had me one of him, but unfortunately, I don't think they exist. *pouts*

Author's Response: Thanks Tammy! :) I'm glad you liked it. I hear ya on needing to smile. I'm having a pretty crummy week, so writing fluff always tends to help. :)

Reviewer: immortalangel08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 01:19 pm Title: The Pratts

I love it and yes you should go on. Can't wait to read more of what you got cooking in your head.

Author's Response: :) Thank you...I really appreciate that!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 11:01 am Title: Love You All My Days

Don't know what to say, except for 'aaawww'. What a beautiful chapter! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks Pet! :) Glad ya liked it!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 12:35 am Title: Love You All My Days

I loved it! They got their beautiful wedding and it was all legal. Spike is officially an "Undead American" hehe So good of them to do that for Spike and Buffy. And you gave Spike JM's birthdate. so cute. I love how they took pictures and Spike showed up in them..cause yeah I think it's only mirrors that they can't be seen in. Loved the fluffy Spuffy, cause I have a feeling things will get intense now. Please , don't let anything bad happen to them, didn't like Spike's sense of foreboding:(

Thanx for a great chappie, and I hope you feel better soon. =)

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! I'm glad ya liked the "undead American" bit. Haha..:) I recall somebody uttering that at some point, but I don't remember when or who! LOL

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 11:38 pm Title: Love You All My Days

OMG I LOVED IT. I can't believe Xander, Giles, Tara, and Williow all helped to make the marriage legal that was just so sweet. This was honestly the best chapter ever. Totally perfect. I hope you feel better soon too :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, maybe they wouldn't have done it had it just been Spike, but it's Buffy, and it was her night, so that counted. :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 10:49 pm Title: Love You All My Days

This chapter was amazing! Couldn't wipe the grin off my face if I tried! Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: Hehe...:) I'm glad you liked it! Yay!

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