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Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2009 - 04:45 am Title: Waking Up

yay! can't wait to see if it's evil demon spawn or just lucky Spike spawn!! LOL loved Giles' description! can't wait for the next chapter!

Monica

Author's Response: LOL, thanks! :)

Reviewer: mscotstar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2009 - 04:37 am Title: Hold Me

Great chapter, Looking forward to reading some more.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2009 - 01:35 am Title: Waking Up

Glad Buffy told Spike and Giles. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: :) Thank you!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2009 - 12:20 am Title: Waking Up

I loved i'm so exctied for Buffy and Spike and i'm sure that the baby is human and will be fine. can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2009 - 12:02 am Title: Double Checking

I thought she was going to tell him. I loved the update though and buffy's second opinion,

Author's Response: :) Thanks Jenn!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 11:18 pm Title: Waking Up

Heh - now Buffy doesn't have to think how to tell Spike any longer ;))
Awe :) @ we're gonna do this together. And I mean together. You're so not going to get out of diaper changing or rubbing my swollen feet, ok? :)
Would have been good for Buffy if Wesley had told Buffy about the other vampire pregnancy but I think Wesley could reassure Buffy enough that her child is human.
Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks Cordy! Yeah, I have no plans of bringing Angel into this story at all, so the least he's brought up to Buffy the better. Of course, if he knew she was carrying Spike's baby, he'd come charging in, so he has no need to know. LOL

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 11:01 pm Title: Double Checking

Ah Buffy, you little coward. Not telling Spike - I wonder how long she can hide it, especially if she is so moody *g*.
At last Travers isn't forcing Dana to go back - but he wouldn't mind if she did. (He could control her better this way.)
But a good try to let Spike find out by himself ;)

Author's Response: Haha...thanks Cordy! The next chapter might surprise you! :)

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 10:57 pm Title: Waking Up

That was exactly how I expected Spike to find out. I knew he was going to find the pregnancy test and assume it was Dawn, it was too funny. As for the baby being anything other than human, I'm not worried about that, I agree with it being a miracle. Those two couldn't have anything else.

Author's Response: Thank you! That's cute that you figured he'd think it was Dawn's! I wanted him to find the test, but I didn't want him to automatically think it was Buffy's. LOL

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 10:43 pm Title: Birthday Plans

Wow, three chapters for me to read today :)
Good but now I'm so way behind :D

Buffy was a bit moody but also dizzy again - not good to see (worrisome).
Ah too bad Spike hasn't the ring of Amara any longer then he had no problem to get to Buffy in the daylight to the hospital - at last with less danger than only using a blanket.
And you're sneaky, Buffy is indeed pregnant :D With the claim thing (and not answering to my comment) you've distracted me.

Author's Response: Hehe...yeah, I try to be sneaky whenever possible! Thanks!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 09:34 pm Title: Waking Up

Wow... I like the latest developments in the story and I honestly can't wait to see where you're going to go with all of this.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so excited you like it!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 08:41 pm Title: Waking Up

AWW I loved Spike's reaction! He would so make a great dad, he just loves with all his heart. Good to know that the baby is human,:) I hope Giles doesn't cause any problems, he sure doesn't seem to want Buffy to have the baby.:(

Lovely chappie, this just gets better and better.

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! I love writing daddy Spike. :) He's totally a big fluffy puppy. Hehe...yeah, Giles isn't too keen on it, but maybe he'll warm up if Wesley has good news for them next time. :)

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 06:18 pm Title: Double Checking

Love this twist with Buffy being pregnant, but please don't let her keep it from Spike too long. Can't wait for more of this!

Author's Response: Thanks Pet! I think Buffy might surprise you!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 05:42 pm Title: Double Checking

I'm starting to become suspicious of Travers and the Watchers Council. Something seems pretty fishy. Dana needs some sort of super psychologist/therapist who knows all about demons because therapy would definitely be helpful. Poor Buffy seems pretty scared. Love the scene where she tests if Spike has super vamp hearing. Happens so often in other stories, it was pretty funny that he didn't hear anything. Can't wait for the next one. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks Demona! Spike might be able to detect the heartbeat later. It's just so early in the pregnancy. I've been researching, and apparently heartbeats can be detected as early as 4 weeks, but I guess not very often. Still...you never know what to expect with a Slayer and a Vampire's child!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 03:19 pm Title: Double Checking

OMG I loved this chappie! So Buffy is really pregnant,but she's totally freaking out. I don't blame her, but she has to tell Spike or he's gonna get upset that she kept it from him, especially if he does hear the baby's heartbeat.
Didn't like Dana's convo with Travers, especially his comments about Spike, it's making me nervous for him.*eep*

Loved this chappie, more when you can and I hope you start to feel better soon!

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! Glad you liked the chapter! I'm nearly finished with the next one...don't worry...Spike finds out soon enough!

Reviewer: DayWalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 02:16 pm Title: Double Checking

I wish Buffy would just tell Spike already! But I understand the whole scary impossibility of it...so she's forgiven...for now. I liked that Xander's getting better @ being civil to Spike. I'm loving this story and I can't wait for more. Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry! Spike finds out soon enough! And I'm glad you're enjoying the nicer side of Xander!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 01:36 pm Title: Double Checking

aww c'mon! i can't wait for him to find out! this is gonna be great!

Author's Response: : ) Thanks! Spike's finding out is a fun scene...you'll just have to wait and see!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 01:24 pm Title: Birthday Plans

haha! i was right! now i can't wait to see Spike get all "grr" protective! great chapter!

Monica

Author's Response: Hehe...thank you!

Reviewer: carrot Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 10:07 am Title: Double Checking

Thank you for such a regular updates! Your story is wonderfull and I fell in love with it a bit more with every new chapter/

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 05:11 am Title: Birthday Plans

Buffy's b-days are always full of drama and surprises, I think this may top the rest of them.

Buffy also can't hide this for too long....i think spike will realize something is up when he hears 2 hearts when he's sleeping right next to her.

Author's Response: Definitely right, you are! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Jaden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 03:54 am Title: Birthday Plans

Yes! I knew pregnancy was on the horizon! I just hope its not some vampire baby that wants to feed on her organs. Isn't that in the 4th Twilight book? I haven't read it but my sister has. And wow, off topic. Anyway, great chapter! Really looking forward to new developments. Bravo!

Author's Response: LOL, thanks Jaden! Yeah, there's a vampire baby in the 4th Twilight book. In Twilight, the vampires have skin that's like hard as stone or something, and the mother is human at the time, while the baby's part vampire. So, the baby's really strong and is surrounded by the granite-like skin stuff in the womb. So everytime the baby kicks, it like breaks another bone in the mother's ribs. FUN! No, Buffy won't have anything like that. LOL! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 02:57 am Title: Birthday Plans

Ah! I knew it! I knew this is what you had up your sleeve. :) I like it! I'm guessing prophecy? :D

Author's Response: Thanks Rainey! Perhaps a prophecy...perhaps not! :) More to come soon!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 01:29 am Title: Birthday Plans

I love domestic Spuffy, they're so adorable together. :)

And now Buffy's pregnant, that's so great, but I don't think Buffy is quite believing it. I hope she tells Spike soon ,cause he definitely would want to know sooner rather than later.

More soon please, things are about to get really interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! Buffy's definitely in denial mode, and she's gonna make sure for herself. I believe the line in the next chapter is: "The voice of reason told her that a test at the hospital would be far more accurate than a home pregnancy test, but the voice of Buffy kicked the other voice’s ass.":

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 01:07 am Title: Birthday Plans

Wow! I hope she tells Spike and doesn't deny the truth! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks! She's gonna find out for sure if she's pregnant or not in the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 01:06 am Title: Birthday Plans

I knew it. i'm happy that buffy is pregnat and i hope that when she tells spike that he will be too. great update and i can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! Glad you enjoyed it! Lots more to come soon!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 12:31 am Title: Birthday Plans

A mini Spuffy sprog! Love how she is in total denial. Can't wait to find out if she actually tells Spike or lives in Denial for a longer amount of time. And what an improvement that Xander actually called Spike and told him what was happening!

Author's Response: Thanks demona! ;) I'm glad you liked that chapter! I hope that you'll continue to enjoy...and we'll find out if Buffy's right to deny it or if she's just totally in shock.

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