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Date: 04/13/2009 - 12:03 pm Title: Keeping Shop

Uh-huh... Travers in the house? Not good, neither that he warned again. Things will go worse if he has his way (hopefully they can stop him in time).
Ah good - Hank went to the Magic Box.
With Buffy on the way they can talk about what to do - if nothing happens to her on her way to it.
~ I must say I'm sorry to see this story go soon.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2009 - 10:02 am Title: Keeping Shop

I've really enjoyed this story. Can't wait to see how it ends.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2009 - 06:19 am Title: Keeping Shop

Oh God now Travers is here. Hopefully Spike and Buffy will truly kick his ass! Liked the Dawn and Hank scene.Spike minding the store was funny, lol.

I love this story, sad to see it coming to an end but can't wait to see what happens.=)

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2009 - 06:07 am Title: Keeping Shop

No, I don't want the story to be over! But I guess it'll have to happen eventually. You've done such a great job with this fic. And this chapter was great. I was really happy to see another update so soon. :)

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2009 - 05:22 am Title: Keeping Shop

Glad that Dawn didn't go all 'Well you aren't part of my life anymore' to her dad. Thought she would have done that. And Spike manning the shop? Dear lord...Anya must be having a heart attack somewhere.

I believe it's showtime with Travis... :)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2009 - 01:54 am Title: Explanations

I loved Buffy telling off Angel and letting him know she was in love with Spike and he was all she needed. Yay! Buffy. don't know why they didn't do a scene like this on the show. Stupid writers.Hopefully they'll be able to find Dana.

Great chappie! =)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2009 - 12:18 am Title: Explanations

I'm glad that Angel called Buffy and told her the truth finally. I'm also glad that Buffy told Angel that she had really moved on and that to only call her when needed. I seriously hope they catch Dana soon before something worse happends.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! :) I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 11:16 pm Title: Explanations

Wow, Angel's confession did went well - I'd thought Buffy would take it harder. She's right - Connor is good in his eyes but Buffy's child not?
Good for Spike to be able to hear Buffy's opinion of Angel :D

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought about extending the conversation and making it a little worse, but I figured that I needed as little Angel as possible. I really didn't need to bring him in at all, but I wanted a little moment there with Spike hearing for himself how Buffy feels about Angel. :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 10:44 pm Title: Explanations

Glad Buffy gave Angel a piece of her mind for spying on them. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! :) Glad ya liked it!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 06:01 pm Title: Explanations

Love it. More please. It is good to see Spike happy about Buffy telling the things she did to Angel. Really who can blame Spike for feeling the way he does about Angel. Even when their were evil Spike must have always felt second best. Although, to me Spike is so much better than Angel. But I also think that some people(and Spike LOL) don't think about how Buffy must feel too. Meaning Dru. Spike was with Dru for over 100 years or so. He had a relationship with one woman for a super super long time. You know if I was Buffy i know I wouldn't help but to think about that. Doesn't mean that I would doubt his love for me. But I couldn't help to think that my man has a long history with this woman and so many memories with her. Not just any woman but his sire which is a big deal to vampires. So yeah, I love the story. Just need more Spike please.

Author's Response: Thank you! I know what you mean. Spike did love Dru, but it was a much different love than what he had for Buffy, IMO. With Dru, I think he wanted it to work, because she'd made him who he was. She'd turned him into a killer, and she'd fed that part of him for so long. Of course, he happened into Buffy's life, and the killer part of him eventually faded away.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 05:53 pm Title: Explanations

Good for Buffy to tell Angel off. Glad Spike heard as well. Great update!

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks Pet!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 01:22 pm Title: Surveillance

Uh oh! Dana got away and nobody knows her state of mind or what she might do! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Faith'll definitely be on her trail...no worries...or not. ;)

Reviewer: SlayerisSpikessexslave Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 06:37 am Title: Surveillance

Well, Angel was a little creepy with the cameras.....but not surprising lol.

Author's Response: LOL, yep...serious creepiness! :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 01:15 am Title: Surveillance

I never expected that gift to be from Angel that is kinda creppy. I hope that Faith catches Dana before she does something stupid.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! Yeah, it's pretty creepy, and Buffy will definitely let Angel know what she thinks about that in the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: Jaden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 12:17 am Title: Surveillance

Dude! Angel is such a creeper! I actually did not see that one coming. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Haha...everybody's got the "creepy" thing down in terms of Angel. I feel bad for him...just a little. Ok, not at all. LOL

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 - 09:42 pm Title: Surveillance

OMG I'ts Angel who sent the carousel? Didn't see that coming. And btw creepy and gross. He can be such a moron and damn Wes couldn't keep his mouth shut.I'm worried now that Dana has escaped, hope they catch her.

More soon please, still lovin' it. =)

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! Yeah, Angel...LOL. Definitely creepy. That's a word I believe I use a lot in the upcoming chapter. Haha. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 - 09:08 pm Title: Surveillance

And there I wondered if Buffy had forgotten about the carousel she brought with her - she definitely did. But it seems it was from Angel. Did he wanted to watch the baby? He saw what he shouldn't ;)
He'll be in trouble!
But so is Faith now with Dana on the run (and not remembering much it seems).

Author's Response: Thanks Cordy! Yeah, Buffy tends to forget certain things when she's otherwise engaged, eh? :) I actually had this huge plot in mind where Angel loses Connor, either to death or to kidnapping, and he and Cordy are distraught and go after Spuffy's baby, but I just couldn't make it plausible in my head. LOL

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 - 06:21 pm Title: Waiting Game

Buffy is really stressing over the whole situation. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 - 02:35 pm Title: Waiting Game

Ooh, so happy to see an update! Excellent, intriguing chapter, as always.

So...maybe that carousel isn't from Travers after all? But the question is, who else? I'm still not completely convinced that "Look Within" ONLY means the council. Hm...

Author's Response: Thanks Albie! Well, I can say without a doubt that "look within" was originally intended to be to look inside the group, pertaining to Dana, but that doesn't exactly mean it's the end of it...;)

Reviewer: Jaden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 - 01:22 pm Title: Waiting Game

Yay! I've missed this story. Everything is unfolding brilliantly as usual. But I hope you're feeling okay. That's obviously most important. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thanks Jaden! I'm glad you're still enjoying!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 - 07:51 am Title: Waiting Game

I was actually thinking of this story recently. So happy to see an update. Hope you're feeling better. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks Pet! I'm glad it wasn't forgotten during my little hiatus! :)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 - 01:17 am Title: Waiting Game

I'm still loving this story. I hope that your ffeeling better and that it's not anything serious. Can't wait to see where you take this next.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 - 01:14 am Title: Waiting Game

I'm so happy to see this updated..I was missing it cause I love this story. And I'm sorry to hear you were ill again, hopefully you'll continue to feel better.:) My God can't those people figure out what's wrong?

Anyhoo liked this chappie, the girls and their dad are getting along, that's good. And waiting for Travers to come is nerve wracking, hope he doesn''t do something worse.

Welcome back, hon! *sends good mojo your way* =)

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 - 12:57 am Title: Waiting Game

Lovely chapter. Lets see what plan Buffy and Spike can swing to protect the baby and themselves along with friends and family.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2009 - 11:20 pm Title: Waiting Game

There you are - thought of you these days, thinking you hadn't updated for quite a while and wondering if you're okay.
~ Hopefully their little plan will function. When Dana will wake up and be okay they'll know more. If she wakes up and remembers.

Author's Response: :) Aw, thank you! I appreciate that!

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