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Reviewer: Buffy Convert Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 12:03 am Title: Chapter 29: Mother-Daughter Talk & Chapter 30: Meeting Mum

I was going to say I don't much like Joyce the way you've portrayed her, but I changed my mind during the chapter. I guess Mom was just tired from her trip and probably also suffering repressed guilt for leaving her daughter alone so much. Teenagers may not need their parents to DO a lot for them, but they still need them to be, well, to be AVAILABLE. Really excited thinking about how Willow & Xander will react.


Author's Response: Well I put her as a busy parent. I was planning to kind of fix things with her a bit and have her be a bit more active in the sequel if I ever can pull it off the way I planned. I wanted a family structure not just a fiction based on two people as it was done this time with two others who popped in. I wanted an enlarged family structure that included a little bit of each of their lives allowing the characters to develop over time to be who they should be. To do that it's taking A LOT more than I planned. SO it might be a while for a sequel but I can see your point about Joyce.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 29: Mother-Daughter Talk & Chapter 30: Meeting Mum

This is a gem of a story, I am really enjoying each and every chapter. The story so far, has really cemented the relationship between Buffy and Spike. I like the fact that the remaining minions of Spike are accepting of the unusual relationship. A functional if not supernatural family at best over the hellmouth. Perhaps, more material is needed to where Buffy gets to know the minions after the glow of being "Mrs. Spike" wears off. So far, she has met Spike's human circle of friends while she is introducing him to her circle. I loved reading where the minions were worried over their master once his mate left the mansion. Dalton and the other minions would make for quite network of information where it would be needed to keep Buffy safe from the watchers council. Funny, how the real monsters are the ones who are driven by their own ambitions staunch arrogance that they are superior over the creatures they hunt via a young girl. Power corrupts, thankfully, Spike being "The Master" of the hellmouth does not have those problems. Any, I digress, really look forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it. I kind of wish I had only half finished the story when reading this but I tend to only post finished fictions but your take on the story so far is really interesting. It's about to take a different turn but I really liked the idea of vampires being able to be working society members and not just to be all staked. So that part of the story will be still upheld just the enemies will change unfortunately. I hope you continue to enjoy it. I'm actually working on a sequel but I was finishing another one I was working on first that really was coming together quite nicely. So I had ideas for a sequel so perhaps I'll cover some more of these concepts in the sequel even! Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2009 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter 29: Mother-Daughter Talk & Chapter 30: Meeting Mum

Oh if you meant this change the title. U = not I. I didn't notice before, either.
But AWE, the meeting went well. Not sure how it would have gone when they would have told Joyce the truth :)

Author's Response: Ahh Thanks. You know I do prove read things but you wouldn't know it by my mistakes. Thanks so much. You're a big help!

Reviewer: spuffy chick Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2009 - 06:18 am Title: Chapter 29: Mother-Daughter Talk & Chapter 30: Meeting Mum

"happy meals on legs"? hahaha! that was funny!

Author's Response: That is such a great line *grins*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2009 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 29: Mother-Daughter Talk & Chapter 30: Meeting Mum

Really loving this fic! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Glad you loving this story. I'm updatin gin a second after I get through these reviews. Not that anyone cares but I have been working on getting into the graduate program at the campus so I've had to write a lot essays and track down people for references so my time has been a bit short as of late but no fear, another update is on the way!

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