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Reviewer: Buffy Convert Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter 37: Research & Chapter 38: Again?!

I think it is interesting how you show us a truly "pouncy" Angelus, more interested in his goal of world domination, than in sex or mayhem. You are developing Darla well - she seems very "vampiric" if I may say so. More interested in the "now", yet willing to go along with Angelus because - he's the Alpha, right?
PROBLEM SENTENCE: "She wasn't fond of the idea of hell on earth, but she figured food would still be a readily source and people could still be tortured so she went along with the idea". It would be better as "she figured food would be readily available & there'd be plenty of people to torture..."

Author's Response: I'll have to look at that sentence. You have a very good point. I had fun developing Darla. I kind of wish I could have done more with her. Some story I write I'll have to add her in as a vampire and really see if I can have some fun with her.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 - 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 37: Research & Chapter 38: Again?!

Help me out here: You've made an error - could you please check?
In your own chapter count 36 is the same as 37 is -
so do I miss chapter 37 completely or did you just post it twice as 36+37?

Ah bad, so the cross didn't help and Buffy is kidnapped again. At last the spike works, one good thing then.

Author's Response: I had some issues but it was because one time I somehow ended up labeling the chapters wrong and then proceeded to copy 36 twice. I actually had two copies of this story on my computer and in one story I saw the chapters were short and combined them. I think this was around the time I combined them. I just double checked and it appeared all the chapters were there just some were mislabeled. Sorry :(

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