Typical Americans - the most important thing after food & basic shelter is - a television! Problem sentence: "Dalton & her shared a room" No,no,no. "She and Dalton shared a room" The ways you can tell which to use are
#1 Is the person performing an action or is something being done To the individual? "She went to the store". He took her to the store".
#2 .If two person-words are in a sentence, leave one name out and see how it sounds then. Which sounds better "Her shared a room" or "She shared a room"?
It was funny, that even while being afraid for her life, Buffy was concerned about how big a mess she might make, fighting six vampires! I would be, too, altho since I'm not a Slayer, the "mess" I would have to clean up would be caused by panic.
Oh, is Dalton making a mistake, not checking Buffy carefully for wounds? Or is he doing the only safe thing, because what if Spike found out and misunderstood and got all "Grrr"?

Author's Response: Ahh, I'll have to fix that. Thanks. I think he's afraid to Spike and his grring nature heh. I'm thinking I would be too actually.

aww...Dalton is really nice...so protective and caring.

Author's Response: Buffy is really lucky to have Dalton. He's a good minion/friend to have.