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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 43: The Wait

Weird... why could Dalton invite the others in and why isn't the necklace/spike working?
*sigh* So Buffy run away in vain. If she had only stayed, she had saved herself some pain.

Author's Response: It's an enchanted house. I think the owners that lived there were a witch so all witch enchantments don't work. Course the vampires and Buffy wouldn't know this. She naturally assumes that it doesn't work. She might be right about the cross not sensing her in danger so not working. Dalton could invite others in because Buffy was calling it their house not just her house. Dalton had been allowed by Buffy to invite others in. Lucky break I think, and yea Buffy stayed away in vain :(

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 42: A New Life

Good that Dalton was near to protect Buffy; Spike won't stay away long now, he must have sensed her.

Author's Response: Yea Dalton is a good guy is very dedicated to his mistress and good thing too. I'm not sure how well Buffy would have made it if she was alone after having been with Spike for so long.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 40: The Plan & Chapter 41: What Now?

Um... wasn't Riley the one that had to bring the wizard back? (Ch. 39) And didn't he get too much sun, fighting Doyle and Dalton?

Ah silly Spike... he better had had a look at Buffy, not Dru. And good that I can read on :)

Author's Response: Yea it was 2 am when I was posting so I stopped and I think RIley did get dusted twice. He was evil anyway. I'll reread that in a second to see what actually killed him and let you know. I'm thinking he escaped somehow outside to enter through the back empty handed but I don't actually remember writing that so perhaps not.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 39: Force Shield

Heh :) The bond seems not only to protect Spike, it protects the other claimed minions too. Very convenient :) Now Angelus will get the surprise of his life *g*

Author's Response: *grins* gotta love it when claims change a vampire into sort of human!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 - 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 37: Research & Chapter 38: Again?!

Help me out here: You've made an error - could you please check?
In your own chapter count 36 is the same as 37 is -
so do I miss chapter 37 completely or did you just post it twice as 36+37?

Ah bad, so the cross didn't help and Buffy is kidnapped again. At last the spike works, one good thing then.

Author's Response: I had some issues but it was because one time I somehow ended up labeling the chapters wrong and then proceeded to copy 36 twice. I actually had two copies of this story on my computer and in one story I saw the chapters were short and combined them. I think this was around the time I combined them. I just double checked and it appeared all the chapters were there just some were mislabeled. Sorry :(

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 - 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 35: Watcher's Assistance & Chapter 36: Trouble

So it was Riley, Darla'a new toy; I wondered.
Angelus was never good with thinking that raising hell on earth could kill the human = no food.

Author's Response: I know! Darla seemed to think it was an ok idea as well but was at least nervous about food. Angelus just was focused on doing something no one else had done. Silly vamp. Just wait until he starves!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 33: Old Friends & Chapter 34: Plans

Trouble moved in to SD with Angelus now... not good. Hopefully Spike's plan works.

Author's Response: Spike's pretty good with plans but not good at following them. I hope Spike's plan works as well.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 31: Scoobys & Chapter 32: Back to Regular Schedule

It's hard to see one's own errors - I mostly catch mine later or when I see something printed out.
Willow and Xander took the news well; sounds as if they will supportive.
Awe :) Spike is looking for solutions to go out into the sun unharmed.

Author's Response: I think he wants to make life as good as possible for Buffy. It's definitely sweet of him.:)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 46: Five Months Later

Awesome fic! Would love to read a sequel!

Author's Response: I've started writing it but I have to admit, I have one finished that will be posted soon, I have lost then found I'm posting and tinkering with as I post and I have two others. One has about 2 chapters that I need to finish up tonight then the other I'll tick off probably this week. Then by the next two weeks I'll dive full time into it and see where I can take it. So anyway it's coming soon!

Reviewer: sus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 09:48 am Title: Chapter 46: Five Months Later

great plot.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 08:37 am Title: Chapter 46: Five Months Later

Loved the story, a happy ending with an extended family. Thanks!

Author's Response: Anytime. Glad you enjoyed it:)

Reviewer: spuffy chick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 08:06 am Title: Chapter 46: Five Months Later

how nice that everybody's happy and there's gonna ba a baby on the way! i'd like to know what's the baby gonna be like--half-vamp, half-human...would he/she have special powers?

Author's Response: *grins* just wait and see. It's what so far the plot is about on the other story. :)

Reviewer: spuffy chick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 07:57 am Title: Chapter 44: Still Waiting

oh, i'm so glad buffy's awake! no more tears for spikey :)

Author's Response: I know! It's cheering time!

Reviewer: spuffy chick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 07:49 am Title: Chapter 43: The Wait

if buffy just stayed, she would have seen what spike really did with dru. now, 2 months was wasted for nothing :(


Author's Response: I know :( She isn't always smart.

Reviewer: spuffy chick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 07:39 am Title: Chapter 42: A New Life

aww...Dalton is really nice...so protective and caring.

Author's Response: Buffy is really lucky to have Dalton. He's a good minion/friend to have.

Reviewer: spuffy chick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 07:32 am Title: Chapter 40: The Plan & Chapter 41: What Now?

oh no...i'm sure spike will be mad as hell when he finds out buffy has gone missing again!

Author's Response: I know! If I was Spike I'd put a return to mate cross on her next time!

Reviewer: spuffy chick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 07:20 am Title: Chapter 39: Force Shield

does Angelus think he can kidnapped buffy and get away with it? :D

Author's Response: Angelus's plan really wasn't that bad just a bit miscalculated. He didn't realize how well Spike would have her protected.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 06:26 am Title: Chapter 43: The Wait

Finally Spike is with Buffy, good to know that he dusted Dru out of compassion for her. Good chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks. Yea I liked that part as well. Showed Spike had compassion even in the mist of danger.

Reviewer: spuffy chick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter 35: Watcher's Assistance & Chapter 36: Trouble

o-oh...trouble is coming on buffy and spike's way...

Author's Response: Trouble is never good!

Reviewer: PinkSatin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2009 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 46: Five Months Later

OMFG.
You seriously left off there?
What were you thinking! That's evil!
I wanna see a sequel here!
I'm excited and can't wait.
This story had so much depth.
I'm sure your sequel will just as much!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry! Originally I had hoped to have the sequel done by the time I finished posting this. That was my original plan but I got into other story plots and I put this on the back burner trying to decide which plot to focus on. But it will be worked on within the next few weeks! Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: sam52 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2009 - 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 40: The Plan & Chapter 41: What Now?

wtf?!?! is she just doing this b/c she thinks this and spike is actually freaking out b/c she's gone missing? or did he actually go back to vamop-hoe? are we going to get to see spike's side???

=)

Author's Response: Buffy has issues with trust I think still and it's showing.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 29: Mother-Daughter Talk & Chapter 30: Meeting Mum

This is a gem of a story, I am really enjoying each and every chapter. The story so far, has really cemented the relationship between Buffy and Spike. I like the fact that the remaining minions of Spike are accepting of the unusual relationship. A functional if not supernatural family at best over the hellmouth. Perhaps, more material is needed to where Buffy gets to know the minions after the glow of being "Mrs. Spike" wears off. So far, she has met Spike's human circle of friends while she is introducing him to her circle. I loved reading where the minions were worried over their master once his mate left the mansion. Dalton and the other minions would make for quite network of information where it would be needed to keep Buffy safe from the watchers council. Funny, how the real monsters are the ones who are driven by their own ambitions staunch arrogance that they are superior over the creatures they hunt via a young girl. Power corrupts, thankfully, Spike being "The Master" of the hellmouth does not have those problems. Any, I digress, really look forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it. I kind of wish I had only half finished the story when reading this but I tend to only post finished fictions but your take on the story so far is really interesting. It's about to take a different turn but I really liked the idea of vampires being able to be working society members and not just to be all staked. So that part of the story will be still upheld just the enemies will change unfortunately. I hope you continue to enjoy it. I'm actually working on a sequel but I was finishing another one I was working on first that really was coming together quite nicely. So I had ideas for a sequel so perhaps I'll cover some more of these concepts in the sequel even! Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2009 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter 29: Mother-Daughter Talk & Chapter 30: Meeting Mum

Oh if you meant this change the title. U = not I. I didn't notice before, either.
But AWE, the meeting went well. Not sure how it would have gone when they would have told Joyce the truth :)

Author's Response: Ahh Thanks. You know I do prove read things but you wouldn't know it by my mistakes. Thanks so much. You're a big help!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2009 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter 28: Reality Check

So the meeting went well - but Buffy didn't spill the truth yet so that doesn't count I fear (for going well).

Author's Response: Good point. I think they were just nervous Joyce would put her foot down banning them from seeing each other. That would have really made things hard for them. At least this way they are able to openly see each other.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2009 - 12:00 am Title: Chapter 27: Talk Time

Time for Buffy to go back on a day schedule with school starting again. I hope Buffy's mom will take the news well (being mated).

Author's Response: I hope so too but you never know with parents. Sometimes they surprise a person.

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