Date: 03/22/2009 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
The Specter spoke! And Spike is gone! I need to read more right now (work is, for lack of a mature term) stupid - as I have to leave now.
Brilliant by the way.
Date: 03/19/2009 - 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 9
poor buffy and cassie but another great chapter, off to read more
Date: 02/16/2009 - 12:03 am Title: Chapter 9
The plot is very promising, but please get a beta reader. There are some mistakes in your story that could easily be avoided if you had someone to re read the chapters before you posted them. Those mistakes might seem little, but to me they are very distracting.
It's not my intention to offend you or to be mean. I'm giving you constructive criticism so your story will be better.
Date: 02/15/2009 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love how you wrote that scene. It was so much better than how it actually went on the show. So I take it that Dawn is supposed to come and that Glory will be looking for her key. I just hope that Buffy won't have to scarafice herself in the end.
Date: 02/15/2009 - 08:23 am Title: Chapter 9
Hey Fantastic story cant wait till its finnish
Date: 02/15/2009 - 02:01 am Title: Chapter 9
Surprised Spike hasn't put two and two together in regards to the specter and Beth. Can't wait for the next update!