Ahh, sorry I haven't reviewed since chapter 1, but I just seriously could not stop reading. Seriously amazing. Now I understand why chapter 1 was at such a fast pace. But I personally think it would help a lot if you still slowed down the overall pace. But I understand its really hard to pace yourself when you have all these ideas jumping out at you, believe me. I'm really happy she's finally being referred to as Buffy. Beth just....it doesn't work the same, you know?