Date: 03/17/2009 - 02:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I've just started reading this fic and this first chapter is very interesting.
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 01/31/2009 - 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmm....not one of your better starts I'm afraid. Tell me, If (and I quote) 'Dru hadn't made a sound since they were attacked the day before' - how come her crying and wailing had been reverberating around their prison driving Spike nearly as mad as she was? And also how did he spread his duster over them with his hands shackled? And why treat them like shit, only to give them a bed and fresh blood, it doesn't make sense.
Author's Response: like all my tales it will twist and turn and all will be explained
Date: 01/20/2009 - 12:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Just found this story and I love it!! Wonder who the people holding them are? And what do they want?
Looks like a good ride, now on to chap 2!!
Author's Response: it'll be a ride, my muse is playing..glad you enjoyed, more soon
Date: 01/18/2009 - 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooooooh, what's going to happen next??
I reall like it so far. keep oing J_L
Author's Response: thank you and i will
Date: 01/15/2009 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah - missed a "r"
http://community.livejournal.com/buffyversetop5/214786.html
That should work :)
Author's Response: nope still not working, must be me....but thanks for trying
Date: 01/15/2009 - 02:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting concept. Can't help but wonder where they are and who has taken them. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: next chapter next week.. hope you enjoy it.
thanks for the review
Date: 01/14/2009 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'll keep my speculations to myself - Where are they? Just why does Spike's blood taste so good? Who is the polite man with the devellish sprinkler system? - and simply wait to enjoy a long, detailed, original and enjoyable story. Yum. Oh and thanks.
Author's Response: please speculate, i love em...
more next week...
thanks for the review
Date: 01/14/2009 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter, Vara. Can't wait to see what you come with.
Author's Response: thank you, more next week and it will be twisted, but not too angsty
Date: 01/14/2009 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it! keep going, ....well done :)
Author's Response: thank you..more next week
Date: 01/14/2009 - 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't mind a long story :D
Uh-huh.. they were efficient - first a poisoning with garlic then a Holy water sprinkler system. Sadly clever. Plus they know their names.
Interesting start (makes me wonder who the humans were - the council? or a private group?).
It didn't hurt to know that Dru saw the sunshine floating around Spike either ;)
PS - a link for you too: http://community.livejournal.com/buffyvesetop5/214786.html
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it...
but the link didn't work:(
this story is going to twist and turn...too mant plot bunnies born of late night chats on the box
Date: 01/14/2009 - 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhh interesting, I can't wait to read the next chapter find out whats going on!
Author's Response: thank you...you might enjoythis given your name:)
thanks for the review