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Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2010 - 09:52 pm Title: Sept. 19, 2008: 128 Days Later

Just a quick note: "It was the same argument everything they spoke."
I think maybe you wanted "every time" here.
As for the story, loving it so far!

Author's Response: It's been fixed. Thanks for pointing it out. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2009 - 02:38 pm Title: Sept. 19, 2008: 128 Days Later

Like Dean said I can't understand that Buffy rather is miserable than happy....
Loved protective Dawn. Dean seems to fit in well with Spike, helping people. Good for him they have a lead now where Sam is.

Author's Response: I never understood her reasoning either. But this is Buffy we're talking about. Anyway, thanks for the review. :)

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