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Reviewer: ROSE Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2012 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 5

No the caps were not a mistake, and yes as i said, on the whole the story isn't bad at all of what i have read. Though i have chosen not to continue to read beyond the 5th chapter due to not being a fan of the whole step brothers and sisters (whether they are raised together or not, that still is what they are) getting together thing. Its not something i can just gloss over.

Reviewer: ROSE Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2012 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 5

Well, i gotta though it is an ok etory on the whole. I'm really not a fan of the whole Spike's parent (normally dad who is normally Giles) hooks up with Buffy's parent (normally Buffy's mum Joyce) simply because if things go well for the parents then ultimately Buffy and Spike will become STEP SIBLINGS, which people either tend to forget,gloss over or it doesn't bother them that they will have steps shaking up together....I'm just saying. So i'm not a fan of these types of stories if it is obviously leading down that path.

Author's Response: Yep, they might become step siblings.. did your caps lock go on by mistake? but they haven't been raised together and it is pretty common actually... hope you find something you do like

Reviewer: Deb and Jon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2009 - 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

Still loving this - just catching up!! On to the next!!

Author's Response: thanks...more soon, i hope

Reviewer: Sotia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 5

Hee! He can't watch Janus, cuz he'll be PLAYING with them.

WOOT!!!

I love it, Vara. More, please!!!
*hugs*

Author's Response: more on its way, glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 5

Still with you!

Author's Response: :) more soon

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2009 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 5

Love the title, and I just loving this sweet and gently layered story. Giles and Joyce are just too cute together...(and am I shooting in the dark here, but is there a chance Giles is actually Ripper in this story? Dying to know)


I'm still not 100% clear on all of William's backstory, hoping for more in up coming chapters, and what I've read so far I like. The age difference works just great for me. And I love how you introduced him to 'HIS' car, :) Buffy is bubblegum princess and just right for your William. I can't wait to read more of their story, or more of the drama you're setting up. More soon, please ;)

Author's Response: more and more will become obvious as the story develops...i love unwrapping it slowly, teasingly, think of me as a naughty stripper:) glad you liked and left me a review, of all people i love your stuff. more soon

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2009 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh, just loving this sweet and gently layered story. Giles and Joyce are just too cute together...(and am I shooting in the dark here, but is there a chance Giles is actually Ripper in this story? Dying to know)


I'm still not 100% clear on all of William's backstory, hoping for more in up coming chapters, and what I've read so far I like. The age difference works just great for me. And I love how you introduced him to 'HIS' car, :) Buffy is bubblegum princess and just right for your William. I can't wait to read more of their story, or more of the drama you're setting up. More soon, please ;)

Author's Response: answered

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2009 - 10:07 am Title: Chapter 5

The dinner was fun, loved the interaction between Joyce and Giles. I think it's good thing that Joyce didn't recognize Giles, this way Giles (Joyce too for that matter) will know her feelings are real and not just some fangirl crush. :D Still when she realizes Giles' secret it's gonna be blast... lol! Great chapter!

Author's Response: thanks for the review, and lots more to come, promise, glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2009 - 06:05 am Title: Chapter 5

That was a lovely chapter. I can not wait for more from this story. Both Giles and Spike are musicians.

Author's Response: like father like son is so many ways. more soon and thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2009 - 01:39 am Title: Chapter 5

Good that the dinner went well and Giles and Joyce are getting along.Wonder when Joyce will recognize him from Janus? Love the banner, so cute.

Glad your muse is back,more when you can. :)

Author's Response: would you recognise him if you didn't know how warped and twisted i was?? glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2009 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 5

So... Giles - in the band Janus..
and son, William, followed in Dad's footsteps in the group Vampire's Kiss.. To Mom's dismay perhaps.. Money- not a problem..



Author's Response: love your guesses, more soon and thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2009 - 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 5

Adults getting along.. Now about Buffy and William ..

Enjoyed.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2009 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 5

Glad to see your muse is back from your holidays. :D
But something is wrong with your chapter, I saw it before. It looks like you forgot to close the [/center] tag and the link tag [/a] naturally. Because the chapter is centered and a link but the font is changing the size = shows big for me. *on to the read*

Heh Joyce likes Giles, huh? And vice versa (counting the fact that he didn't move first).
Awe @ birthday cake.
It's good to see both pairs to go so well along.
What a coincidence, huh? That Giles has to go to England when Janus has their concert. :D
I'm sure Giles won't have time to watch the concert, that's sure.
But maybe Janus will come to play in the U.S.A. at some point ;)
I thought for a moment Joyce would recognize Giles, maybe when he was singing. Wonder when she will notice it.

Author's Response: Thanks for all your comments Cordy, as for the placment of typing, i'm not sure how to alter it..sorry, love your guess and i think you may be right

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2009 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 5

Joyce and Giles seem to be getting along well! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: thank you, glad you enjoyed

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