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Reviewer: victoria2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2009 - 06:27 pm Title: chapter 2

Oh I'm such a sucker for William stories. Really enjoying this J.L. Can't wait for an update.

Author's Response: thank you and more soon, when i get 5 mins peace

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2009 - 05:39 pm Title: chapter 2

Loved it! Angel sure got what he deserved. Yay William! :)

Author's Response: more soon and thanks for the review

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2009 - 04:57 pm Title: chapter 2

Great story. I will definately be reading. One thing, why didn't they meet up with "the girls" at lunch like Buffy said?

Author's Response: the girls on the way. thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2009 - 02:31 am Title: chapter 2

Just read both chappies and I love it so far. Ok, why is William so strong? And why did he space out while talking to Buffy? The Greatest Hits of JANUS? That has to mean something.lol Questions , questions. ;) And of course Angel is a total prick, hehe.
BTW..just a small typo, at the beginnig of the chappie William was wearing jeans and while they were eating suddenly he had on loose fitting trousers. Thought you'd want to fix that.

Great story .more,more soon pleaz! :)

Author's Response: do not rewrite chapter more than 3 times when tired...now write that out 100 times vara.... thanks for the catch, both my beta and i missed it

Reviewer: five fish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2009 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter One

collage - art of taking scraps of paper and arranging them before attaching them to something like cardboard.


college - institution of higher education

Author's Response: missed that one completely..will change it now

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2009 - 11:00 pm Title: chapter 2

Fabulous first two chapters. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Just thought I'd point out though that you have him changing clothes in the middle of the chapter. In the first part of the chapter you said he was wearing blue jeans and a white tee. Later in the chapter you said he was wearing loose fitting trousers as jeans would be crippling. (Sorry don't mean to be annoying or anything especially if someone else has already pointed that out.)

Author's Response: late night writing is bad...very bad:) i will try and do better

Reviewer: SlayerisSpikessexslave Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2009 - 10:43 pm Title: chapter 2

Oh I love it! Go William Go. Freakishly strong and knowing awesome grappling moves. woohooo. I like this Spike already manhandling football players like they are what he eats for breakfast every morning cuz Wheaties was too wimpy for him.

Author's Response: thanks brett, there's more to come as well

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2009 - 10:08 pm Title: chapter 2

*big grin* Love that Angel gets his.. and in front of thoses snotty girl! couldnt be better! cant wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: yep, right in front of all his 'fans' more soon

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2009 - 09:34 pm Title: chapter 2

Was worried at first that William wasn't going to help Buffy .. Angel the whimp now? And what makes Spike so strong?

Author's Response: hehehe...more questions than answers..just how i love it..more soon

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2009 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter One

Great start!! I shall keep reading

Author's Response: thanks Debs, glad you liked it

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2009 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter One

Sweet. Like the beginning. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: thank you...more soon

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2009 - 03:43 am Title: Chapter One

Nice opening but what does William actually do?

Author's Response: wait and see:) more soon

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2009 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter One

Wonderful start! I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: thank you, more soon

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2009 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter One

Great beginning! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: thank you. glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2009 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter One

Spike a little older it seems..

Guess he will visit the school to see his dad in the library .. LOL

Waiting to see where the story goes..

Author's Response: thank you and glad you seem to be enjoying

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2009 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter One

I like the start :)
So Spike is 25... no high school for him then I guess. But they should run into one another, being neighbors.
Looking forward to read more!

Author's Response: more soon, glad you liked

Reviewer: SlayerisSpikessexslave Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2009 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter One

Oh fantastic start to this story. Williams being the perfect gentlemen. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: thank you..and i will update soon

Reviewer: Stef Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2009 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter One

I LOVE IT!!

Is really good, I like it, the way they meet, the two are in a bad moment in their life, but now thing are going to be better, or I think that.

Sorry for my bad english, I read it very well, but my writing isn´t so good.

I hope that you update a new chapter soon. xD


Author's Response: your english is fine, and thank you for taking the time to review...more soon

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2009 - 09:29 pm Title: Chapter One

*BIG GRIN* loved it! can not wait for an update. Wow, amazing you can write so many differnt types of stories at the same time. SO impressed.

Author's Response: you liked then.. that's good..more soon and this one will only be a short one. i think

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