Great interaction between the characters in this chapter, Spike had wonderful scenes with both girls. And I loved the poem/song. :D Good update!

Author's Response: thank you. the song is when dolphins cry and its one of my favs

Nice chappie, still enjoying. Loved William's poem/song. And their friendship is progressing along.Liked the "Spike" engraved on the Zippo. lol

Can't wait to see where you take this. =)



Author's Response: its call when dolphins cry and i love it....more soon and thanks for taking the time to review

Have a feeling Faith will be the first to recognize "Spike" .. could be Willow though.

And a nice developing relationship. But for now I think Spike just says... friend maybe.

Enjoying.

Author's Response: i think he looks at the age differnece and refuses to look at anything but friends!! glad you liked and thaks for reviewing

Still with you!

Author's Response: :) more soon

Oh, just loving this sweet and gently layered story. Giles and Joyce are just too cute together...(and am I shooting in the dark here, but is there a chance Giles is actually Ripper in this story? Dying to know)


I'm still not 100% clear on all of William's backstory, hoping for more in up coming chapters, and what I've read so far I like. The age difference works just great for me. And I love how you introduced him to 'HIS' car, :) Buffy is bubblegum princess and just right for your William. I can't wait to read more of their story, or more of the drama you're setting up. More soon, please ;)

Author's Response: answered

That was a lovely chapter. I can not wait for more from this story. Both Giles and Spike are musicians.

Author's Response: like father like son is so many ways. more soon and thanks for reviewing

So... Giles - in the band Janus..
and son, William, followed in Dad's footsteps in the group Vampire's Kiss.. To Mom's dismay perhaps.. Money- not a problem..



Author's Response: love your guesses, more soon and thanks for reviewing

Glad to see your muse is back from your holidays. :D
But something is wrong with your chapter, I saw it before. It looks like you forgot to close the [/center] tag and the link tag [/a] naturally. Because the chapter is centered and a link but the font is changing the size = shows big for me. *on to the read*

Heh Joyce likes Giles, huh? And vice versa (counting the fact that he didn't move first).
Awe @ birthday cake.
It's good to see both pairs to go so well along.
What a coincidence, huh? That Giles has to go to England when Janus has their concert. :D
I'm sure Giles won't have time to watch the concert, that's sure.
But maybe Janus will come to play in the U.S.A. at some point ;)
I thought for a moment Joyce would recognize Giles, maybe when he was singing. Wonder when she will notice it.

Author's Response: Thanks for all your comments Cordy, as for the placment of typing, i'm not sure how to alter it..sorry, love your guess and i think you may be right

Another puzzle piece in its place (or so I think), but OMG, no more updates???

Please update soon, pleeeease?

(Also, having read this far, I'm guessing WIlliam's past holds a Spike like the one in the banner, so yay me for not being that far off :D)

*huggles*

Author's Response: love the banner, absolutly love it, and glad you are enjoying the story so much it sparked your muse

Hahahahahaha, I loved William's confrontation with Angel!

What had him worried earlier, tho? Did he see Dru somewhere in the crowd? Dun dun dun duuuun!!!

And is Ripper, Giles here too?

Loving it!
*huggles*

PS. Yes, still at work, shame on me!

Author's Response: I really love your guesses, they make my day.....more soon promise

Whooohooo yeay for the brilliant update! can't wait for the next chapter!

I hope your book does well hun x

Author's Response: thanks

Ah it IS chapter four - looking from here it is called chapter 5. Thought I'd missed one :)

That was a mean thing to do - taking the college money of your children. Hank sank very low.
And I still wonder what job William had before. Fun when he teased his father about Janus. :D
Ouch - William's mum was murdered? So maybe he was a celebrity before (a singer of the band that Willow mentioned).
Though there is a downside to your chapter - I want to read on and can't now ;))
Enjoyed the update and looking forward to more.

Author's Response: love your guesses, you are reading me well more when my muse gets back from holiday

Aww, poor William. Can't wait for more of this story! Loved the chapter.

Author's Response: thank you for reviewing, and more soon.