Can't wait to read more!!

please update again like now!!! it's really good, i'm def enjoying it!!

I was like to apologize first for offending you about my 'trashy' statement in the last chapter. I would never be comfortable dancing dirty with my friends because they are my friends. I don't want to get down and dirty with them so I wouldn't want to dance dirty with them and grind my intimate parts to theirs. That is just me though. If you feel comfortable with that then by all means do it. You also shouldn't care what I think. I do think it is trashy for people to dance dirty with lots of different people that you don't know. I think it is different if it is a couple or soon to be couple dancing dirty though. That is just my opinion and the way I was brought up which is why I probably feel this way about dirty dancing. So, again I'm sorry you got offended with what I wrote because I didn't mean to offend you. But it is my opinion about dirty dancing and that hasn't changed. You also tell me that Buffy didn't dirty dance with this guy because she was trying to make Spike jealous. But that she was letting out some steam. I'm sorry, but I don't buy that. I think anybody who dances dirty with one person in front of the person that they are in love with. It is for one thing and one thing only. To make the person that they really want jealous. If Buffy would have done that and Spike wasn't in the club as well. Then I could see it as just blowing off steam. But she danced dirty with another guy in front of Spike. I see that as trying to make him jealous and trying to hurt as well. I think it is pretty petty and childish to do something like that. . Again, that is just my opinion. Buffy has done nothing for me to show that she is a great person. Nothing. Even in this chapter. It is Spike once again makes the effort to be with her. Bringing ice cream and movies to her house to spend some time with her. Yet, it is for Buffy to spend some time with Parker or dirty dance with some guy. I see this Buffy making no efforts with Spike. I see this Buffy feeling not guilty for anything she did to hurt Spike. I see this Buffy not able to see anybody else pain but her own. So, that makes her selfish in my eyes. I don't even think I can say one thing that I like about this Buffy. At least nothing that stands out. While I love this Spike more and more. I hate this Buffy more and more. I'm sorry if that bothers you. But that is just my opinion. Why do I continue to read you ask. I guess mostly because of curiosity. I think it is them main reason. I do kind of enjoy it. But I'm curious to see if Buffy is every going to do something I like. I don't think I would ever like this Buffy but she may do something that I like for once. I think Spike is too good for Buffy but sometimes in life that happens. One person may be too good for the other but are a couple and love each anyway. I see that for this Spike and Buffy. Spike is way too good for Buffy and I wouldn't want him with this Buffy. But I know that is where it is heading since it is a Spuffy story. So, it isn't like I'm going to be disappointed to read that. That is why I read this story. I'm sorry that me hating Buffy in this story gets to you. I dont want you to take it personally. But I do hate her and I know that I say all the time. But that is because I'm surprise that by each passing chapter and I still can't find anything I like about her. I'm sorry about everything but I do hope that you dont take my reviews on Buffy and the story seriously. They are just my opinions.

It was an interesting chapter and I agree with the others about the spelling mistakes. I noticed you put 'cretin' instead of certain. I know you already have a beta but from this I don't see that.

Just caught up with a number of chapters. Great work! Looking forward to Spike's story.

1st chapter you said Parker ADAMS. Now it's Abrams? Seriously, you need a beta.