Date: 08/08/2009 - 05:38 pm Title: Ask For Answers
Excellent, believable dialogue in this chapter. I like how this Buffy isn't avoiding the issue. They're attracted to one another, but there's a big level of wrong having been raised as brother and sister. Spike has also just come out of his forst long term relationship. It's all a delicious mine field.
Author's Response: Thankyou I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far :)
Date: 04/22/2009 - 09:41 pm Title: Ask For Answers
Great chapter, even tho Spike was bad and lied to Buffy lol :-)
Date: 04/10/2009 - 10:03 pm Title: Ask For Answers
Finally a good, New author to lik forward to. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thankyou so much!
Date: 04/05/2009 - 11:25 am Title: Ask For Answers
Ah... both are back in denial aka Spike didn't tell the truth but know very well what the reason was that he didn't tell.
Not telling the truth doesn't help him to figure out things.
That won't make things easier in the future; looking forward to read.
Date: 04/05/2009 - 10:47 am Title: Ask For Answers
Ah yes the handwringing...familiar spuffy territory I know and love. I liked how you built the tension, especially at the beginning...I liked that single line lyric...Just thinking of the placebo songs adds to the mood
Date: 04/05/2009 - 12:08 am Title: Ask For Answers
I just want to smack Spike and Buffy's head. They are so in denial about their feelings. I hope one of them is at least brave enough to say the truth and soon. Something tells me that is is going to be Spike first that tells Buffy how he really feels because Buffy doesn't seem brave enough to.
Date: 04/04/2009 - 11:13 pm Title: Ask For Answers
Spike's running won't get him anywhere. Can't wait for the next update!