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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2009 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter 2 & 3

Spike is a persistant devil. And poor Buffy worrying about tweezing.

Author's Response: Yup, he doesn't give up! lol Buffy was worried about her appearance lol. Thanks for reviewing! Chapter 18 will be posted tomorrow!

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 2 & 3

good lord, come on you two!

love the sweetnes an the attraction, hope they tell each oher soon.

must read more now

Author's Response: *giggles* I am having so much fun writing this story! The next chapter is coming soon I just have to smooth out ome rough patches then im good to post! Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 11:03 am Title: Chapter 2 & 3

Really nice start. Can't wait to see more. You alrealy have me hooked.

Author's Response: I'm glad i have you hooked :) I'm trying really hard on this story and im so happy im getting so many good reviews. Thanks a bunch! :)

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter 2 & 3

Great begining! I can't wait to see how this goes. I wonder where Angel is what is going to happen when he comes back into the picture.

Author's Response: :) Surprises Surprises. Answers coming Soon I promise! Thanks for reviewing. *hugs*

Reviewer: Slayerfest99 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter 2 & 3

Ooooh, I love this so far. I will TRY to be patient for the next chapter. :) Update soon pleasssse?

Author's Response: as soon as my betas send me the beta'd copies i will post.. Promise it wont take long :)

Reviewer: TorriM Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 01:47 am Title: Chapter 2 & 3

Nice start, angsty but sweet. Looking forward to the next installment...

Author's Response: Yeah I thought i had some good angst too :) Thanks for the review

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter 2 & 3

Ok sweetie, first off I wanna say the story concept is great. You have done so well for your first fic. However, I felt as though its moved a bit too quickly. Buffy comes across stubborn, yet she went with Spike so willingly. I can understand your eagerness to get to the main part of the fic, but remember things don't happen over night. The fast attraction I can understand coz, num Spike!

I can't wait to read what else happens though and the banner is gorgeous!

Author's Response: Thanks Burnkitty. Im trying to make it as though Buffy really likes Spike and feels pulled to him, but she is holding back because of Angel... She is trusting him because she feels that she can trust him, and because she is tired of being alone. Spike makes her feel cared for and of course.. add the suppressed lusty wrong feelings... *darts eyes around* I dont mean for things to go quickly, but my next chapter has a plot. You might think its going quickly again, BUT you will understand in time :) Thanks for the review. *hugs*

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter 2 & 3

Yay! I wasn't sure if Buffy would go with him or not - cos a lot of guys might try taking advantage - but I'm happy she decided to trust him :D

I'm interested to hear about what happened with Angel, and why Spike's with Harmony. Looking forward to more! :)

Author's Response: *teehee* everyone is so great about my first fic.. im all giddy inside lol im so proud of my chapter 4 and 5... its when all is revealed!! sorta lol Thanks for the review sweetie *hugs*

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 2 & 3

it's an okay start, i just wish buffy would stop being so stubborn and get over whatever infatuation she has with angel. if he cared about her at all, he probably would be the one looking for her, but i doubt he really cares. spike is so sweet here, even though he's with harmony, it helps knowing that he really doesn't care about her. how old is he in this anyway? well, despite some spelling errors, this is pretty good for your first fiction.

Author's Response: All in good time :) Its all going tobe cleaned up a bit with Buffy in the next couple of chapters.. But the real kicker with Angel is coming up :) Hope you enjoy and thanks for the review

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 2 & 3

Huh. I really like this story, it's not so often that you get a story that makes you look at the characters in a new way but this one has got me pondering. I'm really interested to see where you're going with this!

Author's Response: Yup.. I have them all secretive :) Most of the secrets are coming out soon.. Prepare because what I have planned is awesome :) hope you enjoy! thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2 & 3

Awesome fic really liking it so far.

Author's Response: Thank you :) Im really happy with how its turning out.. thanks for the review.

Reviewer: victoria2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 2 & 3

Well written and compelling. Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Author's Response: Thank you.. My first fic and Im happy with how its going... Thanks for reviewing.

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