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Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter 11

*dances in blooming relationship*

your writing improves with every chapter, *pats back* well done


must read more...

Author's Response: Thank you kitten! *pets kitten* Go read more! I will have another update soon, thanks to your advice! *cuddles*

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter 11

Wooohoo! *hugs & squishes you* You little minx, I thought you were going to wait a while longer before any more naughty ;) Wow, that was hot *and* a nice surprise!

*giggles* Go, Buffffy! Nice deep throating skillz! :P I'd do my damnedest too if I were her heehee Love the mucho well-endowed Spike too, verrrry nice!

My favorite thing (besides the actual bj) was how she thought a penis never looked so "appetizing" hehehe Loved that line! Her pretending to be asleep to tease him a little was lots of fun too :D

*Smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks PB!! Im glad you like it! I wanted Buffy to become more comfprtable with her so it would be a bigger blow when she finds him with Harmony the night of the bj. Because I'm mean to my charaters like that! lol. I'm currently writing the 14th chapter and will have it postd soon and chapter 13 is already posted. I liked the line appetizing too lol She was about to gobble him so I thought it was fitting! I give you full permission to use it if you like! *huggles and smoochies!* Im glad you enjoyed = )

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 11

Wonderful chapter! On to the next... :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy Pet! Thanks for reading and reviewing! *hugs*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 11

Heh heh even if Buffy teased him very hard, she made up for it. Really fair ;))
Good to find two chapters to read today. Enjoyed!

Author's Response: Im glad you enjoyed it cordykitten! Thank you soo much for reviewing it is awesome to read your thoughts about my stories. = ) *hugs again*

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter 11

Oh what a sensual chapter! I love it how they are connecting on such a deep level, learning about one another. I can SEE what your writing, its like I am almost watching a movie its that good. Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means alot to me!! I'm glad you enjoyed it = ) Thanks for reviewing! *Huggles and smoochies!*

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter 11

Thank you so much for another update!

Author's Response: your welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed and thanks sooo much for reviewing! It's well appreciated = )

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