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Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 05:17 am Title: Chapter 12

F'n harmony GAAA

you gotta be kidding me!
she sucks so bad

BUffy and Spike each laying in their own beds thinking about each other... *heart feels squeezed*

More!

Author's Response: Your up to the angsty parts now! = ) I NEED ANOTHER UPDATE OF PTF!! *huggles*

Reviewer: PinkSatin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 07:15 am Title: Chapter 12

OMG. Harmony. wtf. She's a total Skank and now Buffy's on her way over there. Bad-ness. I see it. It's not going to be great...

Ugh. Now I can't wait for the next Chapter..

Keep up the great writing :)

Author's Response: thank you PinkSatin! there will be two chapters later on today when Pari validates it! Thanks for reviewing, I will read your dix soon! RL is hectic right now! but i promise to review = ) *hugs*

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter 12

Don't apologize for adding some complications! I like stories that aren't all roses and sunshine lol It's way more enjoyable if there are obstacles to overcome. With that in mind...

Damn that Harmony! lol Can't say I blame her, but I see a BIG Spuffy misunderstanding coming in for a landing!

Can't wait to see how it plays out! *huggs*

Author's Response: Yeah I wanted to make it as realistic as possible. I know that If i had my heart broken twice in the past andhad trust issues I would react the same way! *RUN AND HIDE FROM THE MEANIE* even if the situation could have been the total opposite, if that made sense lol Yes, Harmony shouldn't be in his bed... but I couldn't resist lol. It was either Harmnony or Dru, but Harmony is easier to hate I find lol. *hugs* In chapter 13... look for my announcement lol.. it will make you smile!!

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter 12

Zomg! How would you be? I just Buffy doesn't witness Harmony being there. Your evil you know that? I love it.

One thing that stuck out for me, was Rein check. Im guessing its a typo but I thought I would let you know.

Author's Response: *grins wickedly* I'm writing the next chapter as I reply to your review and I am sooooo excited to post!! Im so proud of where I'm taking this story and I cant wait to see what everyone thinks about it! = )Im glad you loved this chapter hun! *hugs* Thanks for that burnkitty. Will fix it now. = ) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 12

All hell's going to break loose when Buffy arrives at Spike's apartment!! Harmony has nerve and how did she get in!! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Just wait an see hun!! Its a good next chapter dont you worry!! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 12

Ah I wondered... first trouble in paradise (Buffy really should just talk to him if she isn't ready to visit her parents but it should help her).
Evil cliffhanger... when Buffy catches them together her trust in Spike will be tested. I hope she'll believe him.
Till next part.

Author's Response: yes Im excited to finish this next chapter for you all to read! Im having alot of fun writing this story and im so happy ppl are likeing it! Thanks for reviewing! I hated writing that cliffhanger... but its all part of the story *giggles evilly* Till next chapter = )

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 12

Thanks for the update... :)

Author's Response: Your welcome! Another coming soon! Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: laemda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 12

OK the only way I will forgive you for putting that bitch in his bed is to update now!!

Author's Response: lol update soon I promise!! Thanks for reviewing and not throwing things of the vegtable variety at me lol

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 12

Uh-oh! This can't be good. The nerve of that bitch! Need next chap now! :)

Author's Response: very soon! All the reviews im getting are making me write faster! I love that everyone is enjoying it and it is awesome to read everyones thoughts on my story! *hugs again*

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