Reviews For She Never Told
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Reviewer: spuffyistruluv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2009 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter One

Hmm.. a little curious about the guy at the start..

and Buffy and Spike together without him knowing about the guy.. hmmm

Gonna read more now, liking story so far;)

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2009 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter One

OMG my heart broke for Buffy it that moment and clearly Spike doesn't know what's been happening i hope she can open up to him.

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 05:00 am Title: Chapter One

lol

“That’s never safe” Buffy grinned at his glare.

I love that lol. Great chapter. I cant wait to virtually smack around the bloody tosser who is behind the rape tho! Must read more!

Reviewer: Lucifer Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2009 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter One

ooooooo I hope he gets a healthy dose of Dead. ZOMG write moar!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter One

Strong start. Spike's going to have a fit when he finds out what she's hiding from him.

You mentioned it's unbeta'd, so thought you might like to know about one inconsistency that I noticed: in the first para you write, "Taking one last look over her nude form he stepped out...." In the next para you write, "She hurriedly shed the over-sized t-shirt she had been wearing, balling it up and tossing it towards the garbage can."

Thanks for posting. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter One

Yikes! This fic is definitely deep and dark. You really "went there" in chapter 1. Just wanted to let you know that I think it has potential. I get the feeling that Spike has no idea what's going on and will surely blow a gasket when he finds out because I don't think they're intimate yet. This seems like it was the escalating tipping-point event of Buffy's abuse with the sheet stain. Hope you get a beta to help you with story development--it will be a better story for having a beta.

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter One

Oh my, I am so glad buffy has Spike to help through the tough time. I fear though that she is just hiding that it actually happened from her and Spike. I hope for more soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter One

love it so far...cant wait to see more =)

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 - 02:18 am Title: Chapter One

Jake, you made me see I'm guessing John Ritter raping Buffy in my head.. ewwwww, but well done ;) keep going. Cant wait to see where this goes

Reviewer: .....! Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 - 01:51 am Title: Chapter One

i LIKE THIS CANT WAIT TO SEE WERE YOU TAKE IT

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