Oh. I didn 't know they meet before. Interresting.

I liked this first chapter. I thought it was really well written and had no idea that it would end up that Buffy and Spike had a history.

C-M

OOoooo very very interested in this one! Buffy knowing Spike from LA was totally unexpected! Keep writing please :-)

Is your muse on a diet or can she eats everything :) ?
I love this start - have to say I'm looking forward seeing Spike and Buffy hide behind closed doors! The bad part is that I don't think Dawn will be too pleased if she sees them together. Bad for Buffys friendship too but I have faith in you and you will write a good story!
Is this enough food or do you need more?

Author's Response: Hmm, you know, I think my muse is getting pretty full. She can be such a pig sometimes...lol! As I've already written the chapters when Dawn finds out, I'll just say it definitely won't go over well, but I'm working on how I can make there be a happy ending. Why bother with anything else? Thanks for reading=)

You're an evil and extremely talented writer! You got me hooked in one chapter. At the end of my read I was all, "How? What? How?" like silly Xander. They just won't be able to help themselves, no matter how much they both love Dawn. It's going to be angsty!

Author's Response: Thank you, your comment just made me smile. I love being called an evil writer, there's no better compliment. It will get angsty later on, that's kind of hard to avoid in this situation. And nope, when it comes to those two, they'll never be able to resist. I hope you continue to enjoy it=)

I'm interested - big time.

Author's Response: Always good to know, I hope to keep you interested=)

No, don't lose heart, keep going. The premise for this one looks good. And although this type of plot line has been done before, I'm sure you can keep it real and write it with enough originality to make it seem really fresh. The fact that there's already a relationship between them will be a big help in driving the plot forward. This is a good opening chapter to what looks like a promising story. Keep going :))

Author's Response: Wow, another review from you, I feel all honored. I actually don't think I've seen this idea done before. It was a challenge response, so I guess that's possible, but I try to make things as unique as I can. I hope you continue to like it=)

holly s**t!!!!
from where did you bring that story???
love the idea! so different from what u usually write but still sooooooo gooood!!!!
(and if people dont review is because they hate to write the same "i love it " again and again :) )

Author's Response: That's what I keep telling myself...lol! As long as someone enjoys what I write, it's all good with me. I like to keep branching out from what I normally write. I've gotten way more smutty than usual, but I doubt you guys would have any complaints about that;)

Can't wait for the next chapter! I

Author's Response: More coming soon=)

evil cliff hangers... more please?

Author's Response: Evil cliffhangers are just so much more fun when I'm doing them...lol! I hope to have more soon=)

All I can say is...MORE PLEASE!

Author's Response: I shall do my best;)

I like this. Very interesting start can't wait to see where you take it next.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading=)

awesome start, can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you=)