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Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2012 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 5

Okay, this is going to sound really lame, but I'm a grammar fanatic, and one of my pet peeves is all the fanfic writers who use sunk as the past tense of the verb sink instead of the correct sank. You're one of the very few to use it correctly. Bravo!

Author's Response: I think I may be a grammar fanatic myself :D I check obsessively for spelling typos and grammar mistakes. I’m so glad you think I’m doing it right. A couple of my own pet peeves are ‘lightening’ for ‘lightning’ or the use of ‘decimated’ for ‘annihilated’ as in ‘the entire army was totally decimated with no one left’ - because to ‘decimate’ means to destroy one in ten, so there would always be nine out of the ten standing. I’ve seen both mistakes even in newspapers where there should be no excuse.

Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter 5

I'm enjoying this, but then again, I usually enjoy your work. :) I liked the updates... I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job in making the series work for your purposes!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you like it! I used canon because I wanted to show how much more effective Spike's methods would be than Angel's. :D

Reviewer: SBLuver Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2009 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 5

Okay, I totally loved that one. lol And I so knew Spike was going to give Buffy CPR. Freaking idiot Angel.

But aww, Spike realized he wanted to be with Buffy. And Buffy realized... And now he's gone. But since there's more to come I 'm not going to be so disappointed just yet. I'll just wait excitedly for what's to come.


Author's Response: Angel really threw away every chance he had to help, didn't he? And Spike can never stay away from Buffy. Season 2 coming and the romance starts heating up. I'm so glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2009 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for the treat to find another update today :)) (my time)
The story was the last I've read yesterday and the first I read today :)
I could get used to it. ;)

*phew* That was a close call but I'm glad the Joyce remembered not to invite people in.
Uh-huh... So Darla set a trap. I feared the first until Spike arrived. But I didn't expect Spike to stake Darla. He's very possessive :D (even if he sees it as protection in order to kill Buffy himself).
Oh the other prophecy. At last Buffy survived, thanks to Spike. (No points for Xander in this story, huh?) Another slayer called now? (Buffy said she felt different. Looking forward to find out if that was important.)

Mmmmm and both notice that they want something different instead killing the other.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Monday and Tuesday are my days off, so I was able to post more. No Xander, because he wasn't needed (Don't understand why he was needed in canon except for dragging Angel out of his apartment - Angel could have given Buffy CPR) And why was Angel hiding in his apartment anyway? He should have known what was happening and gone to help, like Spike did. Season 2 now and the romance will start heating up.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2009 - 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 5

This is so good! Both Darla and the Master are dust, Spike saved Buffy.Yay! And now Spike is so terrified of his feelings that he's leaving. I guess you'll be going into season 2 now?

More. more, more ...can't wait to see what happens now. Brilliant story.

Author's Response: Yup! Season 2 and the romance will be the focus. I'm so glad you're enjoying this! Thank you!

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2009 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 5

Yes, Yes, I'm still loving this......more please!

Author's Response: Thank you! More coming.

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