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Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 6

Quick updates, lengthy chapters, smoochy goodness... can a reader really ask for more? :)
Wonderful, my dear, as always!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I don't post until the story is completed and only needs to be checked for errors, because I hate to keep people hanging. I'm so glad you like this!

Reviewer: SBLuver Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 - 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 6

Wow! Talk about a nice distraction. lol
So Spike is now the Master of Sunnydale. Good for him. I always knew that boy would make it far. Of course him being master and helping Buffy has got to come to a head sooner or later. Will he choose the yellow pill or the blue pill?

In the mean time I'm glad he's finally met Joyce. And that she likes him. How else is he going to get his hot chocolate? Well I guess he just got something sweet from Buffy. With hopefully much more to come in the future. And, aww. I'm so glad that Spike was finally able to admit his true feelings. Not just out-loud but to Buffy as well. Now they've just got to reach a point where she doesn't fight it so much.


Author's Response: Much more coming! I'm so glad you're liking it! Thank you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 6

(Well Xander doing the CPR set only Angel in a bad light - not sure if Joss wanted to do (to show) that but he did.)

Simple curiosity would make him notice and she wanted to rub it in, what he had walked out on. Illogical. She knew that. Oh but I love Buffy's logic. :D
Good to see Spike back now. :) (And he even had the opportunity to enjoy Buffy's new outfit ;))

Spike has already fallen .... Buffy seems to be on her way, being attracted.
Awe :) Joyce wants to meet him. She was very convincing. ;)
And she noticed Spike's situation regarding Buffy. The eyes of a mother...

Mmmm Spike confessed. At last Buffy isn't rejecting him straight away. Would have hurt Spike. And Buffy doesn't want to do that.
~ Enjoyed the new update :)

Author's Response: Most girls would do a make-over, right? :D Here, Buffy hasn't been damaged by Angel and isn't so cruel and unfeeling as she was in canon. (I hated that!) I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 - 07:35 am Title: Chapter 6

I'm so incredibly happy with what you're doing here. Wonderful chapter , wonderful way of picturing Spike helplessly in love.
The ending scene is so gorgeous , so sensual and passionate it made my heart tighten in my chest.

"He knew how to cherish what he had. To ask for more would be to break the spell. She would come back to herself then and remember exactly how wrong this was. He didn’t expect to ever get more. This was a moment out of time. He cherished it, stored it up in his memory, drowning in her, the feel, the taste, the scent of her, the way her hands fluttered over him, those light, tentative caresses that got past all his defences and touched every hidden vulnerability deep down inside himself that he tried to deny."
Those lines are perfect .

Thank you so much.



Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you like it! That for me is the vulnerable side of Spike, evil or not.

Reviewer: bettyb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 - 06:57 am Title: Chapter 6

I find this story enthralling, and this chapter was especially good, but I am troubled by the fact that Buffy doesn't even seem to care that Spike is probably out eating people whenever he's not with her. At least in your other stories you had them make a deal, or Spike had his Soul, which prevented it. Buffy (and her mother) turning a blind eye to Spike's feeding seems a little too OOC to me.

Author's Response: I thought about that too and hoped it wouldn't hit people quite yet. Buffy and Spike discuss it in the very first scene of the next chapter, and Joyce and Buffy discuss it in Chapter 9. A compromise is possibly and Spike is the one who initiates it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 - 06:56 am Title: Chapter 6

I find this story enthralling, and this chapter was especially good, but I am troubled by the fact that Buffy doesn't even seem to care that Spike is probably out eating people whenever he's not with her. At least in your other stories you had them make a deal, or Spike had his Soul, which prevented it. Buffy (and her mother) turning a blind eye to Spike's feeding seems a little too OOC to me.

Author's Response: I thought about that too and hoped it wouldn't hit people quite yet. Buffy and Spike discuss it in the very first scene of the next chapter, and Joyce and Buffy discuss it in Chapter 9. A compromise is possible and Spike is the one who initiates it.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 - 06:48 am Title: Chapter 6

yay! spuffyness i love this story, absolutely love it! keep going! update soon!`

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thank you! More coming.

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 - 06:15 am Title: Chapter 6

Absolutely wonderful chapter, amazing even. Thank you.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thank you!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter 6

WOW, this was a really great chappie, loved that he came back, cause he couldn't fight it anymore. And even Joyce likes him , tho not as Buffy's bf. LOVED the scene at the Bronze. The emotions and the feelings you evoked, how he felt just kissing her, so sweet and so hot. And that last line... sure Buffy ,keep telling yourself it can never happen again.heehee.

I LOVE this story so much, it's amazing. =)

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! You know Buffy - terrified of connection. But things are gonna happen. :D I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 - 03:43 am Title: Chapter 6

Better and Better!!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! You're gonna love the next chapter. :D

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter 6

yeah, but she has a thing for him too, even before he did, and didn't she say that she wanted to be loved? now that she is, i'm not seeing the problem here, she always has to be fixated on the whole vampire thing, i figured it would be different this time around since she hasn't been hurt by angel, but anyway, we know it'll be happening again.

Author's Response: Part of it is because of that vampire thing - she is a Slayer after all. But part of it is that she's hesitant to love and commit herself. Which is Buffy, isn't it? *sigh*

Reviewer: Alissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2009 - 03:33 am Title: Chapter 6

Pshyeah, sure it wont!
So hot! Really love this- *favourites!*

Author's Response: Of course it won't! :D I'm so glad you like it! Thank you!

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