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Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 11

Ahhh bad Ullah! And poor Spike :( Willow's being stupid again, considering using the tabula rasa spell... will she erase all knowledge of Buffy being missing? Not a good idea.

Great chapter, looking forward to the next :)

Author's Response: Thanks Xaph, Willow is thinking magic can do anything... usually leads to badness

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2009 - 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oh Wow. Buffy's body is hidden that can't be good. I wonder who hid her body.

Author's Response: *skips around singing* I know who hid it, nanny nanny boo boo *giggles* Thanks for the review brett

Reviewer: Deb (LoobyLoo) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2009 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 10

Love this Kitten!! Very intriguing and original. Can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks Deb, I love it too, stay with me, there's plenty more :)

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2009 - 09:28 am Title: Chapter 10

Now I am worried that Spike may accidentally be pulled to where Buffy is, or Buffy pulled back before Kaia is ready to continue on her own. I have always loved Tara's ability to read auras...yet, is love what blinds her from seeing Willow's darkness? (has always stumped me.) I am still an avid fan, so I hope this fuels your muse to keep writing!


Author's Response: Thanks, Msspikster, having loyal readers makes writing this even more fun than I originally had thought. Spike aura is definitely connected to Buffy, and what that means will be revealed in future chapters. As far as Willow's aura, I too have always wondered if love makes you blind ...

Reviewer: Jake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2009 - 03:24 am Title: Chapter 10

Whoa! First off, amazing work! Secondly, amazing work and thirdly, damn keep this going! I'm Hooked!!!

Author's Response: *grins* thanks Jake, theres so much more, and I cant wait to share :)

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2009 - 01:56 am Title: Chapter 10

Thanks goodness for wise women! (Tara and Groma) Thank you for the update. Looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response: The wise woman never get enough recognition in RL or fanfic. Thanks for being a loyal reader, IT. More to come.

Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2009 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 10

Wow, what a great chapter! Lots of nailbiting moments: Spike and Tara searching, Buffy gathering the courage to tell Groma the truth.

How cool is Groma? It's so touching that she loves Kaia so completely that she's accepting what she tells her without any doubts. What a relief for poor Buffy!

The fact that Buffy's body is apparently invisible back in SunnyD is really freaky! I can't wait to see whassup wit dat. What the frilly heck did Willow do?! And seeing Spike so beside himself with anguish... *sobs* It's hard not to try crawling into the story and cuddling the stuffing out of him hehe

Excellent chapter, Buttercup! More please :D *hugs & twirls*

Author's Response: Thanks PB, I couldnt get this out with out you. You have no idea what your support means to me and enables me to have the confidence to put this out there. Theres lots going on, and much more to be told. My #1 fan *sigh* thanks for being you *hugs mega super tight*

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2009 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 10

Ok with the huh that Buffy is there but invisible? God I so am loving the interaction between Spike and Tara. You seemed to make it seem like Spike and Buffy are really connected almost mate like...Hmmm ponders on that for awhile. You had me crying at the end...it was incredibly powerful and the acceptance Groma has...God I wish more people even parents could be that understanding. I bet my daughter says the very same thing lmao. Great update. Shed some tears...the story seems to be set in its beginning...are we going to see some angst? Oh god nibbles on lip nervously awaiting next chapter! This is soooo very good kitten. Can't wait for more! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks, Spikelissa *hugs and twirls* I am so moved that you enjoyed the chapter so much. I felt it was good when I wrote it, like I said before, this story means a lot to me. I'm thrilled that I have been able to get my thoughts out right. If that makes sense. Thanks for being a loyal reader, I hope you stay with me, theres so much more to tell.

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2009 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 10

I hope Tara stays clear headed and helps spike more. And I'm glad Groma believes her 'daughters' more please!!

Author's Response: Thanks Andy! Am tickled you are still enjoying and sticking with me *snogs behind the box*

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2009 - 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 10

I'm still here reading. So far I'm loving it and can't wait for more. I love to Spike and Tara are starting figure out what happened to Buffy.

I hope Spike finds her soon, and boy is Willow going to be in some TROUBLE!!! hehehehe

Author's Response: *hugs loyal reader* Thanks Blazing Fire, yuo've made me smile hugely with your review. Willow is in a lot of trouble.

Reviewer: Spuffyistruluv Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2009 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 10

Wow, what a great chapter! :)

Can't wait to read more now, lol xD

Poor Spike, all lost, kinda upset with Willow now though I have been that through the story..

Loved the way Groma was accepting what Buffy/Kaia told her:)

Keep it up;)

XXX

Author's Response: Thanks, Tru :) Willow will get hers, not to worry. Groma rocks I tell you!

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2009 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 10

KITTEN!! You gave me goosebumps three times!! First Spike scene, the first grome scene and the second Spike scen.. OMG this is soooo good! I cant wait for next update!!

GGOOOOOSSEEBUMPSS!!

Author's Response: WOW! Really! Awesome :) I am so giggley about your review! so much more to tell, please stay a faithful reader *smooches*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2009 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 10

This was a beautiful chapter. I love how accepting Groma is and that she straight out believed her.=).
Good that Spike and Tara are figuring things out. It seems that Spike's aura is linked to Buffy, and he is so desperate, Poor Spike.

Loving it Kitten, more soon please. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI Spikes aura is worrisome. Am so glad you are still with me, theres so much more to share *hugs*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2009 - 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 10

Loved the way Buffy told Groma what was going on, and I'm glad that Groma was accepting. Having someone who knows the truth and is on her side can only be good.

Hmm... kinda morbid to think that Buffy's body's been lying in the basement, with no one knowing she was there. Hopefully now that Spike and Tara have some things figured out, they'll be able to start working out what's going on...

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and being a faithful reviewer *hugs* Spike and Tara are on the right track to figuring what happened. Groma has proven herself to be 100% trustworthy. Buffy now can be herself with one person there, everyone needs a friend.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2009 - 09:52 am Title: Chapter 10

First - good Tara has a clue where Buffy can be (but that doesn't mean it will help them). Spike's health is still worrisome. It sounds as if he is 'connected' to Buffy and her absence is causing this.
Groma is more open than I've thought, she makes it easy for Buffy.
~ Looking forward to read on. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing as always, Cordykitten. Spike and Tara are at least on the right track now. Groma is the bestest *hugs her* much more of the tale to tell, updating soon :)

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2009 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 9

Sorry hun for the delayed response! Getting myself 'pyschologically prepared' for my daughter leaving the continent. I know she will be fine but I'm a mom...Love the update! Ullah better watch herself or this will get to be one heck of a mess she may never recover from. Kahn just still disgusts me lol...no really he does...I swear! Poor Spike and just imagine Buffy is closer than you think...I am now going with the her body is in the basement but her mind took a hike. GASP! She's going to tell Groma...I wonder how she will take it? I hope she believes Buffy/Kaia. Great update and so sorry haven't been around! Huggggssssssss!

Author's Response: I didnt know you had a daughter leaving the country, something fun? Anywho :), Thanks for the review. Kahn is a bad rude man. Spike is so distraught :(. Groma *chews nails* what will she think? heehee you may find some answers to these questions in the next chapter!

Reviewer: SpuffyIStruluv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2009 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 9

I'm not a member here, but a author that I like xoChantelly that I know from fanfiction recommeded this fic and I read it...

I want to tell you that I really like it, something out of the regular fics and you're doing a great job:)

Keep up the good work;)

XXX

Author's Response: Thanks for trying the story out! so glad you enjoyed, try and keep up with it, theres much more to be told

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2009 - 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 9

the plot thickens! I wonder what's happening to Spike's aura? Loving it!!

Author's Response: So glad you are loving it!hmm the aura, it definately means something :)

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2009 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 8

I don't like that sneaky Ullah! Great to catch up - excellent chapter - on to the next!!!

Author's Response: She'd feeling a bit threatened. keep in reading, more info to come! Thanks, Andy!

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2009 - 06:15 am Title: Chapter 9

I wonder what Kahn will do? Only relying on physical strength is not engough.. Will he have a plan? I don't think he is actually stupid..or will it be Ullah to make more damage..

So, they are planning on leaving, good. And tellling Groma.. Good or bad? Will she react badly.. Or will they forget to keep their voices down and be overheard?

And lets not forget about poor Spike. The aura situation cannot be good. Maybe that will help Tara to figure out what went on in there..

So many possibilities.. So.. hurry up so I can find out!!

Author's Response: *whistles, and looks to ceiling* Kirsty, there are so many possibilites, but only one action, Kahn is a bad man, but is he stupid? We will find out soon enough. Groma, sweet Groma, will she accept what she's about to be told? And Spike, that aura has to mean something, something very important... more soon, I promise!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 05:03 am Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for the update. Maybe I'm getting ahead of you, and I don't want to spoil it for anyone, but will Kaia/Buffy be the First Slayer? Or give birth to the first one? Hmm.... Then again, I could just be totally wrong. :)

Poor Spike. I'm sure he and Tara will figure it out.




Author's Response: Hmmm IT, I see reading this has your brain working, and that is a great compliment. Stay with me, I am and will be answering these questions when the time comes. Have patience, I think you will be pleased with the answers. Much, much more to come!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 9

OK I'll say it again...I love this story! And this was another great chapter. Good that Buffy is getting her plan together, just in case. I hope that Groma believes Buffy/Kaia. Still worried about Kahn and Ullah.
The scene with Spike and Tara was sad. I feel so bad for Spike(his crying had me crying too) *snuggles him*And now I'm worried about his aura being pulled down. What does that mean?

Agh ...update soon please,I'm on pins and needles. *hugz*

Author's Response: Thanks AMI, this is my favorite story I 've ever written and I am just in love with it too. So glad you are excited about it too! much much more!

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 9

Wow. I really enjoyed this chapter. Thing about Spike's aura, that is weird. I wonder what it is being sucked to? I'm nervous about what Kahn and Ullah are going to do though. I cant wait to find out how Groma takes Buffy and Kaia's story. I hope Groma doesn't think Kaia has gone mad, or something. I cant wait for next update! Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks Chantel, theres so much I have to share with you in this story, I am so glad you are staying with me for this *hugs*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 9

Spike's aura being contained around his body, it appeared to be streaming or being pulled away from him. It was being pulled toward the floor. That sounds worrisome.

Good that Buffy and Groma make sure that no one is listening... the didn't notice it the first time. ~ The more I read the more I think that Kaia is a slayer.
Looking forward to Groma's reaction.

Author's Response: oooh so much good stuff just around the corner, stay with Cordykitten, I promise to keep you on the edge of your seat

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter, wonder what Groma will say when she finds out... Also nice to see Spike again, will he find out soon?

Author's Response: Thanks Xaph, and yes spike will find out very soon, and concerned about groma too :) stay with me

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