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Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 9

Lots of juicy tidbits dropped in this chapter! Good on Buffy for thinking ahead and planning for her and Groma's survival. And - Yikes! - vampires and demons are running around in Kaia's world too! I'm glad that Spike can talk to Tara so openly *sobs* I can't take it when he cries! *cuddles Spike to my bosom*

I'm on the edge of my seat about what that nasty Kahn might do, how Groma will take the news about Buffy, and what Spike and Tara's next move might be!

Awesome chapter, babe! You rock! *Mwwwwah!*

Author's Response: *tackles and snuggles PB* I love your reviews, and am so glad you are enjoying this. Theres lots more to be told, stay with me as we explore Kaia's world and hope that Spike will figure out something soon!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 - 06:00 am Title: Chapter 8

Hey, just caught up with a couple of chapters. Good work. Glad to see the story moving along. :)

Author's Response: Thanks IT, glad to know you are still interested, much more to come *hugs*

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 - 05:51 am Title: Chapter 8

Oh great, another enemy.. Ullah. Doesn't she have eyes? Kahn is a disgusting bastard! At least they have Hourak, elder, on their side.
and poor Spike.I just wanna give him a hug.
Still loving this story.I like not being able to see at all what will happen to them, surprises are good :)
It's quickly becoming my favorite one. I hope you will keep on writing it and posting often.

Author's Response: Thanks Kirsty. It makes me smile to get reviews like this one, knowing you are actually looking forward to the next update. There is much more to learn of the fate of these characters. Please stay with me as the tale unfolds.

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh Buffy and Kaia have a plan. I fear what will happen if they are discovered.

Author's Response: Just you wait and see Brett, the plan sounds good in theory, but I worry that bad things may happen. Thanks for the review, and you will just have to wait and see :p

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 8

Spike please find her...What would be interesting...If it's just Buffy's mind that went and not her body, but he can still smell her in the house...physically that is. Smells the magics, really goes at it with Willow. And, yet, they still can't bring her back until she solves Kaia's happiness...only then will she be released...Hmmmm. Just my imagination running wild on your story lol. I love how Hourak is very insightful. Reminds me a bit of Spike, heehee. Ullah is an infuriating, stupid, and did I mention stupid...wench. Ugh she must be just like Kahn. No wonder...match made in heaven. Then again maybe status to her is more important and she feels her turf is being compromised. Hmm wonder if she will eventually be friend or foe. So far her actions seems to me will cause more pain than help. She's one of those who should wait before they leap or serious consequences could be taken. Can't wait for more Kitten. Loved the chapter!

Author's Response: OOH Spikelissa, do I love your imagination :) We will visit Spike again soon, and deal with the whole SD crew. Ullah is one to watch for. I think she feels threatened for herself and her husband, and lord knows, thats always a bad combination. Much more to come and soon, stay with me :)

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 8

I love Groma! And so great that Buffy has a plan in case they have to leave. Now someone else to worry about in Ullah. Hourak also knows that Kahn is a perv and will at least try to protect Buffy/Kaia.
Poor Spike is feeling so helpless, I hope he discovers something soon.

Another great chappie, Kitten. Can't wait for more! =)

Author's Response: Thanks for taking time to read and review AMI, Buffy/Kaia definitely have more allies than first suspected, and Spike, poor thing.. lost.. More to come, stay with me :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 8

Uh-huh for a moment I thought again that Kahn had won; good that Groma knows him well and even Hourak seems to see him now. You made me worry again when Ullah tried to hear them.
Looking forward to more, hopefully time won't run out for Buffy. :)

Author's Response: hmm I think Ullah is going to stir the pot, we probably shuold worry. Thanks for the read and review Cordykitten *hugs*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 8

Ohh yay! Buffy made a great plan! ahn is a dickus! I love the character Groma, she is awesome. I'm glad Kaia is back too! I cant wiat for more. I wonder what will happen with Kahn and Ullah, Please updates soon!!

*hugs and smoochies!*

Author's Response: Thanks for the read and review Chan. There is so much more to all these characters that I cant wait to share with you. more soon, I promise.

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 8

Hmm and the plot thickens. Am I right in thinking that time is moving differently? It doesn't seem like Buffy has been missing long from Sunnydale but she seems to have been back in the past for a little longer.

Great chapter, nice to see Spike again, wonder how long it'll take him (and Willow) to realise that Buffy is missing. And hmm... if only Buffy's consciousness is in the past, in Kaia, where's her body?

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: HEHEHE Time is moving very differently, nice pick up. Good question on Buffy's body, maybe we will find out in the next chapter *wink* Thanks for the read and review xaph!

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 8

Dun-dun-dunnn! Uh-oh, Kahn's wife is a meanie too! I thought maybe she'd have more loyalty for another female *flicks her* Ugh, that Kahn is such a nasty perv!

I was like "Go, Groma!" when she told off Kahn lol I wasn't sure if she would be all submissive, I was pleasantly surprised :D

And we got another peek at Spike too! :) He misses Buffy and is worried :( Sweet but so sad!

This story just keeps getting better! Luuuurve it! *Smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks PB! Kahn is a nasty perv who needs to be taken down a notch, Ullah is just as nasty but in a different way, Groma rocks, seems like she is becoming stronger just by being around her "strong daughter". Spike.. God I hope he finds out something soon. So sad. Much more of the tale to tell. Stay with me :* *smoochies*

Reviewer: Sotia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 7

I hope Spike manages to find something out... although he IS looking at the wrong place. Sigh.

REALLY well played move by Buffy! Now to see how that'll play out!

Love this story,
*hugs*

Author's Response: Spike doesnt have a clue yet, but it wont be long. Buffy is a smart woman, I have faith she will make smart moved to protect Kaia.

Reviewer: Sotia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 6

You know how I feel about this cliffhanger: EVIL!!!!

Grrrr!!!

Author's Response: HAHAHA cliffies are a trademark of mine :) and yes I am evil! Thanks Sotia!

Reviewer: Sotia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 5

Gah, I friggin' HATE Kahn!

Off for more. Wonder what Buffy will come up with... :P (hee)

Author's Response: Kahn is so nasty, I hope he gets whats coming to him. Thanks for the review, Sotia :)

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2009 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 7

Hey girl,
So glad to see an update! Next thing Kaia will be training slayers if she keeps up this spunkiness!
~~K.

Author's Response: Thanks for the read and review Kara! much more info to come :) stay with me!

Reviewer: Sotia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2009 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 4

Where is Groma going?

And OMG, could Kahn be more disgusting??? GAH!

I think I can get through at least 1 more chapter now, but the rest will have to wait for tomorrow (I didn't even finish writing my chappie cuz I wanted to catch up with this. Hee!)

*mwah*

Author's Response: WOW, if I kept you reading I am so flattered. I just sent you another chap to read :) I love this story so much!

Reviewer: Sotia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2009 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 3

I knew where she'd end up, but how and I really liked how you wrote that scene. Poor Buffy, and poor Kaia!

Rushing to read more before Andrei comes online!

*huggles*

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments Sotia! keep reading :)

Reviewer: Sotia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2009 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh, God, Willow... Spike will skin you alive if you fuck this up (notice the IF there? Hee! I play innocent :P)

Off for more!
*mwah*

Author's Response: I was curious what your take would be on the first few chapters :) Keep reading! *mwah*

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 06:08 am Title: Chapter 7

Spike is a looking..but not in the right place. It will take him a while to figure things out. I have a bad feeling of what is coming. What is kahn going to do? Accept or throw down?

Author's Response: LOL Brett! Kahn is not happy, and I doubt he will look at Kaia in a friendly light after this... I will update soon *smoochies*

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter 7

Buffy's decision has elevated her in the eyes of the chief elder, hope that the women who are submissive do not hate her because of it. jealousy and envy can be a very bad thing within a close knit society. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks Vette! You are very correct in saying that and I wonder if Buffy knew... more to come and soon. I appreciate the read and review

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2009 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 7

Finally I had time to read the new update.. It was ok..
nah just kidding it was great!

Buffy found a way (maybe) to avoid The Bastard.. or at least buy some time.. He really wasn't happy the way things turned out. Still, I'm not sure what he will say.. I can see him agreeing and disagreeing. Either way I'm sure he doesn't give up easily..

Yay Buffy for not playing by their rules! I don't think she expects things to go smoothly..

Spike is worried.. as he should be.. I wonder what he will find out..

Looking forward to read more unexpected twists.

Author's Response: WOOHOO you enjoyed the update too! even better :) more twists and turns to come Thanks for the review Kirsty !

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2009 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 6

so, I re-read this before going on to the new chapter..
Even on second read it kept at the edge of my seat wondering waht will happen..
Liked how she thought of Sunnydale (and Spike).
Loved how you wrote of the cave and the people and their actions.And made happy to live in this time and place.

Author's Response: I am tickled you not only reread a chap, but enjoyed it a second time :) I feel like I'm doing a good job when I read reviews like this. *hugs Kirsty tight*

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2009 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh boy, this was a tough decision for Buffy, but I like the way she stood up to them and spoke her piece. And Hourak seems to respect her, so that's good. Now I wonder what Kahn will decide. And it was good to see that Spike is looking for Buffy, but until Willow fesses up it'll be useless.

Can't wait for more K, this is so good. *hugs*

Author's Response: Buffy made me soo proud! Spike will have some disturbing info soon, keep with me, theres much more coming up. Thanks for the R&R ami

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2009 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter 6

It's good that Kaia has strength too. Is she a Slayer? And Kahn is really gross. What will Buffy decide?
Agh ,cliffie!

Onto the next chapter. Still enjoying!

Author's Response: TeeHeeHee Ami :) Theres much morefor everyone to learn :) stay with me!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2009 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 7

Clever - Buffy found a way to 'beat' Kahn for now. She got herself a little time.
Hopefully Spike will get a clue soon what happened.

Author's Response: She did, but its not over just yet... and yes, Spike will get more info soon, as will you ;) Thanks for the R&R Cordykitten *hugs*

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2009 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 7

Buffy's answer was a smart one...looks like Khan is going to make a mistake soon (hopefully!)
Spike's gonna find out about where Buffy is soon, and when he does Willow better be on her guard!

Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R msspikester! Buffy make a good call, wonder what she has in mind, and Spike. mmmm lots to learn in SunnyD.

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