Date: 07/13/2009 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Sorry but Spike is being way too passive, he had 20y to prepare for this. Dru was overpowered and Spike should control Angel.
Spike is again the last person to meet Buffy, even Angel met her now before him again. We saw on the show how much of a champion/white-hat warrior Spike was after less then 1 year, here he's had 20y and didn't do much of anything outside of moping,brooding and pretty much being useless and not making any difference.
Author's Response: He has never experienced any of Buffy's life before so isn't sure of what is going to happen. It's still before he made his entrance to Sunnydale first time around.
Mabel
Date: 07/10/2009 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter One
Wow, I wasn't expecting that. Poor Buffy. But i guess being committed is better than Dru killing her. Poor Spike, it must be hard for him to see Dru dusted, he did love her for more than 100 yrs. And also to see Buffy in the mental hosp. A lot of things will change with no Dru in SunnyD. Loved the end when Spike came to see her, hopefully she'll be out soon.
Loved it , can't wait for the next one. =)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. You are right, things will be different now that Dru is gone. :)
Dawn
Date: 07/10/2009 - 06:32 pm Title: Chapter One
Poor Buffy! Hope she gets out soon. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: :) Thank you.
Date: 07/06/2009 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Can't wait to find out what Spike's plan is! More please!
Author's Response: Your wait is over - next chapter is up! Thank you so much for taking the time to comment.
Mabel
Date: 07/06/2009 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter Eight
LOL OMG Spike with red hair and a mustache. What is he gonna do? I hope it works out and Buffy doesn't get committed. Poor Buffy. Dru is making trouble, Spike will have to figure something out soon or maybe he'll have to stake her. I see creepy Angel is still lurking about.
Can't wait for Fri. update and hopefully some Spike/Buffy interaction soon. =)
Good chappie....
Author's Response: It just had to be ginger! LOL! Hope you like the update.
Mabel
Date: 07/03/2009 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter One
This is one of my fave stories at the moment. It's so good and written really well. I loved Spike in this chappie. telling Angel to stay away and do good in LA, not near Buffy.Of course he wont, he's selfish and likes young girls UGH Seriously what were thePTB thinking when they sent Angel ? A cursed vamp who was a horrible human and an even worse vampire. He was gonna help Buffy? Yeah look how well that turned out. And Joss wants us to believe he's the better vamp for Buffy. I'll never believe that,cause he seriously Fuck** her up. OK I'll stop the rant now... it just really pisses me off.;P
And now we have to worry about Dru, cause she is now gone and probably after Buffy. Eeeep.Angel should take care of her, he's the one that made her and drove her insane . Jerk.
Great job, Mabel and Dawn, can't wait for Mon. epi. I am realy anticipating this...
Author's Response: We are just thrilled that you are enjoying the story so much. Thank you for the kind words. I loved your rant. LOL! I feel the same way.
Dawn
Date: 07/03/2009 - 05:09 pm Title: Chapter One
Uh oh! A missing Dru is not good! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: :) Thank you.
Dawn
Date: 06/29/2009 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Six
Glad things are better for Spike! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you. We won't keep you waiting too long :D
Mabel
Date: 06/29/2009 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter Six
What a marvelous chapter. Thank God Spike gor his sight back. Volkov was hesitant at first but then he was a really good friend and took good care of him, obviously.Love that he was able to drive the DeSoto, he loves his baby. And now Joyce and Hank are having trouble, and Buffy is 12. Almost time to be called. And that means the Giant Forehead will be showing up. Damn.
Loved this--->Good to know that I shouldn't lose my devilish good looks. LOL Gotta love Spike.
Can't wait for more. =)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, especially for pulling out a line you liked - I love it when readers do that :D As for Giant Forehead....check out the update on Friday :D
Mabel
Date: 06/29/2009 - 02:10 pm Title: Chapter Six
I'm so glad that you didn't prolong Spike's blindness ordel. The story is moving along very well. It is a pleasure to read something so well paced with such strong character development!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you think that we're moving the story on well. Thank you very much for such lovely comments.
Mabel
Date: 06/29/2009 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter Six
Loved this chapter :)
Good Spike got his eye sight back, ;)
Keep up the good work;)
XXX
Author's Response: Thank you :D We had to get him back so that he could watch over Buffy again.
Mabel.
Date: 06/28/2009 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter Five
My goodness!! I just discovered this story and read what you've written so far and I just want to say.........It's freakin' fantastic!!!!! I absolutely love it! Kinda worried about how Spike's going to keep an "eye" on Buffy now::(( I'm seriously curious about what you have up your sleeve next; and I can't wait till you update...........Excellent!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. We are thrilled that you found the story and that you enjoyed it so far.
Dawn
Date: 06/27/2009 - 10:06 am Title: Chapter Five
Author's Response: Thank you so much. We are thrilled that you found the story and that you enjoyed it so far.
Dawn
Author's Response: Thank you so much. We are thrilled that you found the story and that you enjoyed it so far.
Dawn
Date: 06/26/2009 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Five
I had so many thoughts of where you two could take this scenes of Buffy growing up etc. this chapter totally surprised me and although a part of me is upset at the turn I can understand the need for it. The ripple affect would occur and we need Buffy to be the fighter and champion she is by the lessons she learned early in life. So I have to say Spike being disable makes sense but I kind of hate it too.
Author's Response: The possibilities are endless, aren't they? We're happy to have you reading the story and we hope you like what we've done with the rest of it.
Dawn
Date: 06/26/2009 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter Five
This is a very interesting story. I like the idea of Spike making friends and getting people who are important from him not connected to Buffy, and that he has to deal with problems unrelated to her, like this surprising blindness. It makes the story a a lot better than a buffy-centric, miraculously focus on only her and fix everything that ever went wrong in her life. You aren't forgetting the Spike we love, and I really like Noreen and Volkov as you've written them.
What will blindness mean to Spike? Will he stay away from Buffy's family completely until she's a Slayer, or try something new earlier, even if it's just one 'chance' meeting? I really liked the introducing glimpse into your original characters your gave us in this chapter, but it feels like it's building up to Spike's reaction and feelings, so I'm really impatient for the next update!
Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, Spike's life, while Buffy is front and center in his mind, can not revolve around a young Buffy. He's making a life for himself while he waits for her to grow up. Spike was always very adaptable. :)
We're thrilled that you like our original characters.
More to come soon.
Dawn
Date: 06/26/2009 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter Five
How do you come up with so many various demons? That just makes the story so much better!
Keep up the good work ;)
XXX
Author's Response: Thank you very much. We can't take credit for the Lister demons as they are found in Angel season 1, but the other clever demons come from the brilliant mind of Mabel. :)
Dawn
Date: 06/26/2009 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter Four
Love the pic at the end, and loved the chapter:)
Gonna read more now :)
XXX
Author's Response: Thank you for letting us know that you enjoyed the chapter.
Mabel
Date: 06/26/2009 - 07:24 pm Title: Chapter Three
Aww :)
Don't want to review that much on this chapter since I want to read the next one xD
XXX
Author's Response: :) Thank you. That's a great compliment that you can't wait to read the next chapter.
Dawn
Date: 06/26/2009 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter Two
I actually feel a little sorry for Dru, I mean she's trying in her own vampirc way and have no idea what's wrong with Spike.
Loved the chapter, gonna read more now:)
XXX
Author's Response: I actually love the Spike and Dru pairing. On the show they definately had chemistry. Poor Dru tried to help Spike here but had no real idea of what to do for the best.
Mabel
Date: 06/26/2009 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter One
I'm so glad I took time to read this fic :)
It is really well written and good plot:)
Now I'm gonna read more :D
XXX
Author's Response: We are delighted that you took the time to read it. Thank you very much for you kind words.
Dawn
Date: 06/26/2009 - 06:11 pm Title: Chapter Five
*cries* Oh our poor Spike*pets and snuggles him*. Please, please make it better soon ,his poor beautiful blue eyes. How is he gonna look out for Buffy if he's blind? He is gonna be so devastated.I'm glad he has good friends taking care of him. Loved Volkov and Noreen. so sweet.
I can't wait for the next chappie to be posted on Mon. =)
I love this story!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's a pleasure to have you reading our story and we are so happy that you like our original characters.
Dawn
Date: 06/26/2009 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter Five
Wonder what Spike's going to do now that he's blind. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hope you enjoy the coming chapters. :)
Dawn
Date: 06/26/2009 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter Five
This is the most unique tale I have found in quite some time. Gotta love these Lister demons. More please.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Unique is a huge compliment to us. We are honored to have you reading our story.
Dawn
Date: 06/22/2009 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Four
Just read all four chapters that you guys have posted. This is awesome! I love the pacing, I love Spike's friend and how Spike is looking out for Buffy.
I can't WAIT for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D
Date: 06/22/2009 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Four
LOL at Spike going to the Ice Capades. I love how he's looking out for her. At first I thought the man was from the Council, but he was a perv. Good thing Spike was there.It's so funny the way Spike is making money gambling on things he knows the outcome to, and he feels a little guilty. Good that he didn't feel guilty when he punched Mr. Perv.
I love the pace of this story, can't wait for more to see how Spike can change things.That is, if he can change things.
Enjoying....=)
Author's Response: We couldn't resist making him go to the ice show. Spike enjoyed thumping the perv! :D