[Report This]Date: 06/20/2009 - 05:57 am Title: Chapter 3
Read the last 2 chapters straight through a while back when you first posted, but could only review now. Hope you don't mind a late review.
This chapter definitely showed a turn-around for shy William. Medical knowledge seems to almost make-up for lack of experience in the sex department. Letting loose William's inner Spike with alcohol is very smart for Buffy.
Author's Response: It's all good, Lori. A late review is better than no review! We loved mixing in the alcohol to make William be more Spike. We figured it would be a great wak to get him to loosen up a bit. We are glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2009 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ok, this was weird. Went back to check if my review got posted. But instead of the one I was supposed to leave for this story, there was the one I copied and left for another fic right before. *blush* Oh well, just have to do it again. Here we go; *clears throat* "Very hot chapter! So, she had to get him drunk, huh? *lol* Loved it! I just hope he won't be all embarrassed when it's over. More please! Oh, and I love the banner!"
Author's Response: xoChantelly: Maybe when you went to copy the review, you clicked passte instead of copy. *shurgs* good explaination? lol. It's alright, we forgive you lol. I'm glad you think it was hot! Heehee Drunken William is a smutty William LOL!! Glad you loved it. Thanks for reviewing!! More up shortly and I love the banner too, xaph is awesome with graphics!
xaphania: Hee, no worries, I'm sure I've done similar stuff in the past! Thanks for reading and reviewing, glad you're enjoying the fic! And thanks for commenting on the banner :)
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2009 - 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
So sweet! Absolutely loved the chapter! More please! :)
Author's Response: Heehee, wrong fic review. Responding to get it out of the way = )
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2009 - 10:39 am Title: Chapter 3
heehee Those naughty persons, shagging after just meeting :P Tequila really does make the clothes fall off lol Nice! It was cool to see some Spike showing through in William once he's relaxed. And I like what you did with our suggestions :) Twas a fun, hot chapter!
*hugggz*
Author's Response: xaphania: They certainly seized the day hehe. Glad you liked, and thankies again for betaing *hugs*
xoChantelly: LOL I love that song!! Your suggestions were awesome, I'm glad you like what we did with them. Thanks for the R&R PB! Luv ya, babe! *hugs and squishes*
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2009 - 07:57 am Title: Chapter 3
oooh.. tequila! Sure thing to loosen things up..
What will the morning after be like.. hangover? regrets? misunderstandings? more nakedness? a day spent together? or all lovey-dovey? or what?
Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: xoChantelly: Heehee I love tequila. Lol, you will have to wait and see! I hope you like. Thanks for the review!
xaphania: Hee, thanks for the review! You'll just have to read on to find out :)
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2009 - 01:53 am Title: Chapter 3
Holy shit. Talk about hot. Cold shower anyone? And I knew there was a little Spike in there! Or a big Spike, depending on what you're talking about ^.~ Loving it!
Author's Response: xoChanteyll: Heehee It's great when someone says they need a smoke or a cold shower after reading smut. Heehee! Thats so true too. Thanks for reviewing, glad you are loving it!
xaphania: Haha, yep, definitely some Spike in him ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2009 - 12:43 am Title: Chapter 3
That was good!!
Author's Response: xoChantelly & xaphania: Glad you liked, thanks for reading and reviewing!
we said the same thing, lol.
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2009 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow! They didn't waste any time there, did they? Great chapter, vey hot! Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: xoChantelly: Hahah nope! Why waste time when You have a hot William med student?I wouldn't waste time! haha. Thanks for reviewing!
xaphania: Hehe, nope, no wasted time XD Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/15/2009 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
Alrighty then!!! Hope there's not a 'odd feeling' morning after.
Author's Response: xaphania:Hee, well you'll find out what happens next soon, the next chapter will be up shortly. Thanks for reviewing!
xoChantelly: Guess you will have to read and find out! = D Thanks for the R&R!
[Report This]Date: 06/15/2009 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
Very hot! Loved it! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: xoChantelly: Hehe! Thanks! The next (and last) chapter will be up tomorrow!! Thanks for the R&R!
xaphania: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/15/2009 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
Heh.... so William was shy again. Buffy is fighting with all she had (alcohol). She created a monster, huh? At last it helped him to loosen up a bit. And Buffy wasn't complaining. :D
So hopefully to a new chapter tomorrow with no head aches!
And no regrets :)
Author's Response: xaphania: Hee, nope, no complaints from Buffy :D Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
xoChantelly: Lol, very true. She did create a monster! She pulled out the big guns lol Tequila makes everyones clothes fall off! Heehee hope you like the next chapter! Thanks for the R&R! = D
[Report This]Date: 06/15/2009 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hmm. Wow. Niiiiice. And, well, the thought that plagued me since he thrust into her (apart from 'OMG this is so HOT'), protection??? :P
Can't wait for the next chapter (read the first 2 at EF and saw you'd posted a third one here, so here I am). :)
Author's Response: xoChantelly: HAHAH!! That was great! No worries, the protection part is covered in next chapter. Drunken sex is sloppy lol wanted to make it realistic. The next chapter is going to be up tomorrow and I updated at EF now, thanks for letting me know I had forgotten!
xaphania: Hee, thanks DFL. Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 06/15/2009 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
WHOOO HOT! Love tipsy William. He became more confident and sexy. They are so cute and hot together.Just adorable. And they seem to really like each other.
Great chappie, can't wait fr the next one! =)
Author's Response: xoChantelly: lol They do seem to realy like each other, huh? I am glad you are enjoying. Next chapter will be up tomorrow. Last one too.
xaphania: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06/15/2009 - 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
tequila will make even the shyist person into a wonton whore. Its always worked wonders on myself. Good idea to bring the Spike out of William. Loving it so far cant wait for more.
Author's Response: xaphania: Hehe Spike was always hidden inside William, just took a little courage (and Buffy) to bring him out. Thanks for reviewing!
xoChantelly: Ahahah! OMG So true! That is funny! Thanks! I am glad you are loving it and more will be up tomorrow. Unfortunately the last chapter too! I hope you enjoy it!!
[Report This]Date: 06/15/2009 - 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
And here's for the men that read... those med etc. books and learn how to make a woman feel ...
gooooood.... LOL
Enjoyed..
Author's Response: xoChantelly: LOL! Soooo true, huh! That is awesome. Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed!
xaphania: Hee, William probably spent a lot of time studying them :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/15/2009 - 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hot Chappie!
Author's Response: xoChantelly: Heehee thanks!
xaphania: Hee, thanks! Can't take any credit for the smut in this chapter though, that was all Chantel :D
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