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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2009 - 04:37 pm Title: Making With The Mating
Date: 06/19/2009 - 04:37 pm Title: Making With The Mating
I liked it - I don't think you have to fear you wrote something wrong. Well done for your first time. I liked the description of the mating itself, too. "We're one.
Author's Response: I was going for more beautiful than smutty. And thank God you don't think it sounds stupid *sigh*