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Reviewer: Kiera Thornton Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 04:52 am Title: The Beginning of a Lot of Things

I do love the start so far. It's very intriguing and I can't wait to read more. My only constructive criticism is that you should scan over it again. There are a few typos you've missed. Other than that, A+

Ciao :)

Author's Response: Aw thank you! Typos, eh? Damn. I'll give it a once-over in a bit! Thanks SO much for pointing that tidbit out for me! *hugs and smooches*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2009 - 05:28 pm Title: The Beginning of a Lot of Things

Hi,
I've checked what I could on the other skins (Orange crashed my IE); I'm using 'Breathing'.
The chapter isn't centered (means the text of the chapter) but it's a link (the text of the chapter). Try to click the text and it leads to your Photobucket picture. I guess you didn't close the HTML Tag for 'link back'. It's in the help section; I try to add it at the end of my text in case it deletes the rest of my review here = and a in the brackets you use for HTML tags (I'm don't know how they are called) just without the * I used: *

Author's Response: Thanks cordykitten for your help! Really appreciate it! I'll see if it works!

Reviewer: nmcil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2009 - 03:05 am Title: The Beginning of a Lot of Things

Hi Shakes -

great to see your story here - and thanks for the mention on the banner - No Way that you can post the image here with the story instead of having to go to another site?

Author's Response: Cordykitten, Lindsay and Christine are trying to help me and I contacted Pari a couple days ago. She sent me an email back saying that she would try to fix it. Otherwise, I'll try cordykitten's method and if *that* doesn't work, I'll contact lindsay. Such sweet people here at The SR! Anyways, thanks a lot for the banner again. Totally love it. Check it out at EF as well. :)

Reviewer: serendipity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 10:09 pm Title: The Beginning of a Lot of Things

As your beta, I love your story and you already know that! I read the review from CordyKitten and I see what she's talking about, your banner shows up, but the whole chapter text is a link. I clicked on it a few times and had a window pop up with your banner inside of it. I don't know how that happened or what's up with it. But I love your story and I wanted to let you know. Sadly, colligate was taken over here and I became "serendipity". :)

Author's Response: LOL I suppose it's kinda late for a response now, Christine, but whatever. :P Yep, Pari helped get rid of that for me, so no more problems. Hello, serendipity! =) Thanks Christine for reviewing! *hugs and kisses*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 09:34 pm Title: The Beginning of a Lot of Things

Great beginning! I'm already hooked! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, PhotographyNut! Chapter 2 will be up tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 09:05 pm Title: The Beginning of a Lot of Things

*waves* Welcome here! I'm not reading again because I already know the whole story. But FYI - check the chapter, because of the banner (don't ask me why it happens, I see it sadly ofter here) the chapter is centered and the whole text a link. At last the font is still big.

Author's Response: Hey there, cordykitten! :) Thanks for the review. But unfortunately, I don't I understand what you're saying. It may depend on the skin we're using (I'm using Beneath You) but I checked the chapter and everything looked okay. :S If there is another issue with Chapter 2, let me know and I'll contact a mod to see what's going on. Thanks for the heads up! :)

Reviewer: immortalangel08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 09:00 pm Title: The Beginning of a Lot of Things

Yay I am so happy you are posting here now. I read it on EF but I don't go on a lot. Can't wait to read more. *hugs*

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, immortalangel08! It means a lot to me that you liked my story that much! :) Total ego boost for moi. :P Anyways, chapter 2 will be up tomorrow! :) Thanks again! *hugs back*

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