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Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 02:12 pm Title: Being a Good Friend

Hmmm..... There seems to be too much on the go and I'm starting to get confused. I think you need to clarify the plot to make the story more concise. I really like the premise though!! The direction just seems really blurry right now.

Author's Response: Hiya! =) I feel terrible if you're a bit confused at this point but things will be cleared up a little bit in future chapters (10, 11, 12 and half of thirteen are already completed) I hope the future updates clears up the confusion! *hugs* Thanks for reviewing and leaving your thoughts! =)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 12:38 am Title: Being a Good Friend

Loved the chapter! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hi PhotographyNut! Thank you! I'm glad you loved the chapter!! I'll update VERY soon! Chapters 10 and 11 are already done *and* beta'd! *hugs* Thanks for reviewing, sweetie!

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2009 - 05:24 am Title: Being a Good Friend

Oh man what is Spike getting himself into?

Author's Response: LOL, ha! That really sums it up, doesn't it? Well, all shall be revealed next chapter! Chapters 10 and 11 are completed and back from the beta so an update will occur very soon! Thank you SO much for taking the time to review! *hugs*

Reviewer: lindsay Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2009 - 02:39 am Title: Being a Good Friend

Wow. So the tempo's picking up, Dru/Connor/Snider/Gambling...shit's about to hit the fan me thinks. I love your description about Spike wanting to be that friend on principle, i feel the same way. even if by the end of it i want to shoot myself in the face to get away from some people it's worth it, it makes you a better person. I just wish more people were like that so everyone had someone to go to. You know, i don't like Joyce in this, i never really did, did you? On the show and in this site i mean.
So, we know if Spike is that type of friend, the one who helps everyone, i can't help but wonder what kind of shit Connor's gonna' get him into. I love how no one really steps back and asks themselves if their shit is worth getting their friends hurt over anymore. And i cannot believe his father, to blame your son is a disgusting act, and Spike is right, what was he supposed to do? Teleport to his mother and save her, drunk or not i'm pretty sure he can't do that, at least not in this fic lol.
Loving it and can't wait for more, good job!!!!!

Author's Response: OMG!!! *squeals* Lindsay. You. Friggin. Rock! Your reviews always rock my world, honey! Oookay, so allow me to address each part of your review since, again, it's always a pleasure to discuss my work with a reader!!

Firstly, yes, I *definitely* agree about the tempo picking up. I think I've taken this soccer fic to levels I hadn't really *wanted* to explore before, but I dunno, I suppose my muse really does have me on a short leash. ; )

Secondly, yeah, I get your meaning; being a good friend makes you feel like a better person and it really sucks when your "friends" come to you with somewhat unreasonable demands. Especially when these demands risk your future, right?

Haha, I was always kind of iffy about Joyce to be very honest. Additionally, it's not that I'm inclined to hate Joyce or anything like that, but I haven't seen many fics where Joyce is a bad guy/mean person so I figured, eh, what the heck?

LOL I know, eh? I suppose we're all too concerned with our own problems and crap to worry about how we're affecting the ones we allegedly "love" and "care about". I guess it's not intentional, but it happens nevertheless.

Oh, yes, I strongly agree here. To blame your child is "disgusting act", I could never agree more. It's simply unacceptable and I seriously wonder about parents who do that to their children. Very ignorant people.

Thank you SOOOO much for your brilliant review, hon! It's really good to see reviews like this and I sincerely hope you enjoy the next chapter as well! *hugs and smooches*

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