Date: 04/23/2011 - 02:50 pm Title: Eight
Squeee! I just figured out the Maggie sub-plot. :)
Date: 02/19/2010 - 02:53 am Title: Eight
Oh William, what an emotional roller coaster for him this chapter. Poor guy. I was glad that Buffy was so honest and unfiltered here and how she recognized that any kinds of games aren't necessary with William. I look forward to what will come next
Date: 02/18/2010 - 01:19 pm Title: Eight
You are a mean mean person! GUH! I'm on the edge of my seat here! So very very close and then WHAM cliffhanger. You're evil ^_^
Date: 02/18/2010 - 12:37 pm Title: Eight
Silly Buffy.. he's been waiting for the One.. its you..
enjoyed..
Date: 02/18/2010 - 04:16 am Title: Eight
William, a virgin. And clearly a reason that he is that way. Wonder if he'll share, or freeze. So glad that they at least broke down the wall. Love their chemistry. Hope they figure it all out. Update soon!
Date: 02/18/2010 - 04:05 am Title: Eight
Argh. No!!! You can't stop there! You've actually made me enjoy reading a story in first person p.o.v. for the first time, so update soon, please!
Date: 02/18/2010 - 01:43 am Title: Eight
I was not expecting that. Now I wonder what is William's secret. Fantastic chapter.
Date: 02/18/2010 - 12:31 am Title: Eight
I hate it when words mess up something they both want I'm glad for the most part she was able to verbalize her want unfiltered. Part of me can see them going at it like bunnies and part of me can see a cooling off and taking things slower with the way you had him freeze at the reminder. I am curious if Maggie the cat is Abigail. A side note but if she is did she have something to do with the extra courage of William coming over.
Date: 02/17/2010 - 11:29 pm Title: Eight
great writing...i love the liquid courage....
Date: 02/17/2010 - 10:41 pm Title: Eight
Loved the update. :)
Didn't expect William to show up now. Took him some courage to ask her, that seems sure.
Not sure thought why he froze now. *wonders what his story is*
Looking forward to more.
Date: 02/17/2010 - 10:31 pm Title: Eight
GAH -- no freezing! Freezing is bad! Things were going so well, too!
Date: 02/17/2010 - 10:08 pm Title: Eight
I don't know why it took me so long to notice this story, but now that I have, I eagerly sat and read all 8 chapters at once. I love shy William; as much as I love Spike, William was always a part of him and I love seeing it in this story. The first person angle works great here, too. Now that greedy little me got to read 8 chapters at once, I'm going to be really impatient for the next chapter. :)
Date: 02/17/2010 - 09:07 pm Title: Eight
Ah, and it was going so well! It was funny and perfect and not sudden reversal of a personality to allow for real confidence or certainty. They wanted each other but they were still being so sweet and then, HE FREEZES? What's going to happen? I hope it isn't some horrible, dark secret and he'll suddenly run out in shame while Buffy feels awful and he feels awful and we have to deal with their avoidance for a couple chapters.
Can't wait to read more.