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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 - 05:39 pm Title: Second Date...DO-OVER

Ah and I thought first this date would go better. Not so much, huh? William's big mouth...

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 - 02:00 am Title: Second Date...DO-OVER

Love their date. Love the tension. Love him fleecing her at pool. I'm even good with him fucking up their date. But using that line to do it, I barely even makes sense to me. I just don't think that is something that Spike would have said in this situation. It's a personal opinion, and I will be back for more. I'm just going to pretend he said something more original to piss her off. Granted, I have no idea what that would be...

Author's Response: I used the line because it was the my version of the line Spike used on Buffy during Wrecked, Season 6. I felt that it showed how Spike's mouth and hyped cockiness gets the best of him. Spike's mouth always seemed to be his worse enemy. i'm glad that you'll keep reading.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2009 - 05:30 pm Title: Second Date...DO-OVER

Well she was "playing" with Spike and he's no squishy cute cuddly William, he's bound to say something..controversial. I hope when she gets into her apartment and sexually frustrated she'll realize that she acted a little hastily. Update soon please!

Author's Response: I think they'll both kicking themselves in hindsight

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2009 - 11:13 am Title: Second Date...DO-OVER

Knew it was going pretty fast for both of them....

And Buffy does seem to be an aggressive girl.. Spike just opened mouth and blew his chance ..

Guess it will be gloves back on again... LOL

Enjoying.

Author's Response: There actually both pretty aggressive. Buffy's more up front, while Spike is more passively so.

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