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Reviewer: immortalangel08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2009 - 06:25 pm Title: Self-Loathing

I will honestly say I think I am the only one who saw the break up coming from the Halloween chapter without the new hints but I thought that it was going to be prolonged a little more. So I guess I am good at seeing the subtleness in things. I can't wait to see where you are going with this and how you will bring them back together.

Author's Response: Ok...now I feel better that someone...well besides me and a few others, saw this coming. I was wondering if my inner muse steered me wrong. I will be updating soon, hope not to disappoint!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2009 - 10:47 am Title: Self-Loathing

Your hints were to subtle, the break-up came out of the nowhere. :(
Buffy is right, she brought this all upon herself. She didn't give Spike a chance to work things out and break up then when it doesn't work. Then he would be warned that it could happen.

Author's Response: I understand that you feel that it came out of nowhere....your in the majority. The only thing was even if she did tell him what was wrong, how could he fix it? withdraw from the trial? quit WR & H? Even though she holds him at fault for his decisions to be with them, she wouldn't ask him to leave. That's why she felt that the only way to resolve this was to break up

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 11:29 pm Title: Self-Loathing

Very depressing chapter. Both Spike and Buffy are all torn up! What will happen when they return to court?? More please!

Author's Response: Sorry to make you sad. But I'm glad the feelings that I wanted to convey did come through. You don't have to wait any longer....I just posted my next chapter.....Trial time!

Reviewer: teal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 06:50 pm Title: Self-Loathing

i'm still really lovin this story. you can really tell that they're both strongly affected by the break up and that they're both so lost and scared of the future w/o each other. can't wait to read more

Author's Response: thanks.....you don't have to wait long...I just posted the next chapter...hope you like!

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 02:42 pm Title: Self-Loathing

I knew from the beginning that Buffy was going to break up with him. I think she's totally on a high-horse and needs to get kicked down several notches and I'm not talking about self-loathing. I'm talking about Spike making her work for it when she wants in back. I also sort of want Spike to kick her ass in court. Have since I started the fic. Actually, I was shocked with their break up. I was sure it was going to be after the court case if Spike won. But I think this is better. This'll put more pressure and tension in the courtroom! I really hope Spike kicks her ass!

Great job on the fic. I'm really enjoying it!

And despite everything I do enjoy your Buffy, I think she's true to the characterization...but let's all admit it, Buffy needed her ass handed to her on the show, too.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I love when people enjoy my story...it makes my inner muse so happy! I'm glad that I was able to shock you with their break up. Don't want my story to be too predictable! Ya high and mighty Buffy does need to be taken down a peg or two!

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