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Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 07:32 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion

Hi PB! *waves*

I'm so glad to see this story is all finished Yay!

I liked the look we got on whats happening with Dawn. Brad Pitt as the stable boy was too cute. LOL I don't trust the Unari...everything sounds too perfect. We'll see.

Anya makes me laugh. I'm so glad they're listening to her, it's about time. Cause they never did on the show. C'mon, she knows stuff people.

Riley is annoying me more than usual and that's saying alot. He's making me nervous, I don't like that he's planning on killing Spike. Stupid jerk.
Can Riley be in the next tale and get eaten by wolves or bears or something? Or better yet go back to Iowa, and marry a farmer's daughter who'll cheat on him with traveling salesmen. *iz evil* God I hate him.OK ,I'll stop now with the Riley hatred.;)

Great chappie PB! Off to read the next one. *huggggs*

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI! hehehe Your review made me giggle!

The Unari are treating Dawn very well - but they are a bit nutty, so who knows if it will stay that way lol

I love Anya :D I'm glad I was able to channel her well in this story lol You're right about Anya knowing stuff. Why didn't they go to her more often on the show? *shrugs*

heehee Bless you for hating Riley - please don't stop the Riley hatred on my account *hugs* I'll have to think up a scene where he gets eaten by wild animals >:D

Thanks for the awesome review, AMI! I loved it :D *huggggles*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 06:52 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion

Mmmh I can see now why Dawn decided to stay in this dimension. It doesn't hurt either to have her loved ones with her as long as they seem to be real.
Heh... Anya is thinking ahead (Joyce + Giles).
Good that Tara is suspicious of Riley but I don't think she'll do something about it soon.

Author's Response: I think I'd be pretty content if I were Dawn, at least for a while. The Brad Pitt flirtage would be enough to make me want to stay lol

Anya is one smart chick, they should all listen to her wisdom lol And Tara is a perceptive lady too, the quiet ones who take in everything usually have good instincts. She needs to be more Anya-like and not be afraid to say what's on her mind. I don't know if Willow would like Tara acting more like Anya though lol

Thanks for they delicious review, ck! :D *smoochies*

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 04:34 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion

I expect the make-up sex to be excellent, too ....
I LOVE ANYA! LOL!! I'm sure they'll be multiple "O"'s in her furture! LOL!

'Once upon a time, there were three little girls who went to the police academy'?"
LOL!! How in the WORLD did you REMEMBER THAT!?? I LOVE THAT LINE - So very Xander!

Glad Dawn's living in the lap of luxury .. .. too bad Spike and Buffy aren't as lucky! They'd make good use of that big bed Dawnie has . . . :O .

Great Chappie (or part of one) . . . Loved it!!

-ET, Passion4Spike 2010.06.12


Author's Response: heehee Thanks, ET! And thanks for the assistance on the chapter! I loved that Anya line you suggested :D Xander mentioning the opening line from 'Charlie's Angels' was one of the first things I thought of when I began this story - It finally made it in! lol

LOL Oh yeah, Spike and Buffy would find a much more interesting thing to do with the big bed than just sleep on it :P

Thanks for everything, ET! You rock! *hugggles & lurve*

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