Really sweet right till the end twist Nicely done, thank you
That was SUCH a moving piece. Stunningly written. <3 <3
Aw, man! Couldn't have been more twisty... Great piece!!
WA I am sooooo sorry for not commenting on this sooner. Your email got lost in amongst some of the rubble of my inbox.
Looks like you're back on that horse? ;) It really was a lovely read, a soft, gentle moment bewteen Buffy and Spike that you really never got in the show. Even a hardened Bangel like myself can appreciate it :p
Definitely seeing your sympathy with Spike and his cause shinning through here too. His fantasy is Buffy seducing him, wanting him and him holding back, even with his thoughts. I thought Spike mentally checking himself when he calls her MY slayer was a nice touch.
Ooooh, great twist at the end. Very cute story, I enjoyed it!
ho my god!
what a twist! so didnt see that ending coming!!
Poor Spike. That darned First Evil.
The beginning and middle was so sweet and the end was a shock and so very sad. Great writing.
You are evil but I love it. It was so sweet and then the end cam and I was like this person is awesome and evil for doing that and when it happened I never even thought of it and it was brilliant and I want more!
I was prepared to say that I thought this was really sweet, then I came to the end and got all sad. I feel really bad for Spike, but maybe when she does come for him, he can make that dream a reality. It's a lovely moment between them that I really wish we could have gotten on the show.
That was sweet... except that it was sadly only a dream. I liked it (the begin more than the end).