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Reviewer: mazza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 - 08:30 pm Title: Chapter Seven

This should be interesting - putting Spike in a documentary that may make it to the US, or perhaps someone in UK will recognise him, I'll just have to wait and see. Glad that Buffy's boys are picking up, wonder what Willow will do and say to Buffy.
But still my poor Spike, you are truly evil but fascinating to read!

Author's Response: I had to chuckle at your last sentence...already you know me so well. :D Thank you for reading and I hope I can keep you hooked there's a long way to go...

Reviewer: fyreburned (Kara) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Seven

OK., I guess I'm hooked on this story, SE_B, even tho' I can hardly stand to think what 'you' or rather should I say 'The Initiative' (and Maggie Walsh) did to poor Spike's beautiful baby blue eyes.
Somehow, I can see Willow getting hold of those disks though! If there's a 'puter w/in 50 miles, she'll be on it!
Where is Maggie during all of this? She isn't over @ the UK branch bossing them about? Surely she'd have some input?
And the hunt that Spike was on with the big cat--- for a minute I was afraid that he was going to be sent to hunt down SLAYERS! Will it lead up to that? (Maggie always DID wanna get her hands on one of those!)
I don't get it tho', that the eyes don't eventually regenerate? The teeth do, when pulled (rather than snapped off), and I'm also wondering about the thumbs as well? Is it because they don't usually get real, or human blood, and in enough quantities (in 'your' mythos or 'verse)???
Anyway, against my will, am hooked and waiting for the next updates!... (This one's for the past 3 chappies, somehow I got behind in a short amount of time...)
Glad things are looking up for Buffy's family, and glad Jerry is back in the fic, BTW. Is nice to find a character with a heart amongst The Initiative.
~~Kara

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for taking the trouble to comment. I really appreciate it. Maggie will come back into the plot soon. I am glad that you're hooked, even if somewhat reluctantly and through alAs for the regeneration...I've always figured that a vamp could heal what was damaged, but what was taken away couldn't regrow. So if his eyes had been damaged or thumbs merely broken, they would have healed over time. But something removed stays gone. The exception to this in the SEBverse is the regrowth of fangs. They are the vampire's weapons and in my mind I do think that they would regenerate. l what is to come I will say focus on how Tracker ended (if you read it). I liked Jerry and it seemed right to have him come back to play a part in this story too.

Reviewer: Lyra500 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Good chap. I feel sorry for Spike having his memories taken away. Can't wait to find out if/when Buffy & Jerry see the footage and find out the truth.

Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know you liked the chapter. Losing his memories in a way make life easier for him...but enough little ghosts of them remain to cause him unease from time to time. The truth will out...but will it be the TV show? Not telling!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter Seven

I wonder if Giles is in London and if he will see the documentary. I would think he would be interested because of his experience with the initiative. I will be happy when at least one person figures out what happened to Spike,

Author's Response: It won't be long now before the discovery is made... :D Thanks for taking the time to comment. Really appreciate it.

Reviewer: mazza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2009 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter Six

read all 6 chapters in one sitting - you really put everyone through the wringer! Great writing, awaiting next chapter with anticipation.

Author's Response: Hi Mazza, welcome aboard! I do tend to be hard on my characters - the word 'wringer' is definately cropping up a lot! LOL. Plenty more action to come - the story is over twenty chapters long. Thank you for taking the trouble to comment. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter Six

Buffy's still having problems with Craig, unfortunately. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Craig is very messed up right now and his behaviour certainly isn't helping Buffy to cope. Thanks for commenting - more on Monday!

Reviewer: SeaPea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter Six

I'm worried about Cam. I hope he can tell Buffy and Craig that Spike did not kill himself - it would relieve a lot of their pain. But if the Initiative finds out about what Cam knows...

Author's Response: Those three dots say it all. :D Thank you for commenting. You are my 30th! / Don't think I've had that many on here before.

Author's Response: Those three dots say it all. :D Thank you for commenting. You are my 30th! / Don't think I've had that many on here before.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter Six

Wow, you're really putting him through the wringer!!!

Please keep Cam safe!

Thanks for the wonderful update. :)

Author's Response: Hi there. Yep, I really am! Thank you for worrying about Cam...no promises though. Thank for using the word wonderful! :D

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter Six

I am happy that Cam was able to read the disks, I just can't see how Spike will come back the way he was. I will keep reading.

Author's Response: Hi Briget, thanks for continuing to read. Things may get worse before they get better , but trust me I have lots up my sleeve to make things right. :)

Reviewer: Jake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter Six

Uh-oh, what has Jerry gotten Cam into? Post soon? Please?

Author's Response: I think the phrase in over their heads would apply here. More on Monday. Thank you for all your comments. Really appreciate them.

Reviewer: Jake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Five

Really interesting to see the difference between the two boys- great character development!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like Cam and Craig. They both feature heavily from now onwards. :D

Reviewer: Jake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter Four

Heebie Jeebies! You've really got this one headed towards angst, huh? I love it!

Author's Response: Oh, yes - it's angst and action all the way! :D Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying it :D

Reviewer: Jake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 07:11 pm Title: Chapter Three

Just one question- Happy ending? Amazing work yet again.

Author's Response: Shouldn't be spoilery, but then again with my fics I think it might be needed, but yes is the answer. :D Takes a while to get there though. Fic will be about 25 chapters long - currently 21 are written and betad. :D

Reviewer: Jake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter Two

Gotta love evil Maggie, although, is there really any other kind? :) Really enjoying this.

Author's Response: I like to have Maggie even more evil than the demons she plays with. :D

Reviewer: Jake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter One

Awesome chapter! So glad to see you are posting a sequel to Tracker (I'm slowly making my way over to review everything!)

Author's Response: Thank you so much :D When I ended Tracker I knew there was so much more that I could do! LOL

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2009 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter Five

now we have to wait to find out what Cam found out. Still lovin the story though but please don't be any more cruel to Spike, I don't think I can take it!

Author's Response: but please don't be any more cruel to Spike Um...you may need to read through your fingers at times :D Thank you for taking the time to let me know you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Five

Somehow I thought Jerry was in London - he's still in California?

Poor Spike. You're being really tough on him!

"A bit of violence and a good orgasm was all he wanted." lol, yup, that's Spike.

Thanks for the udate. :)

Author's Response: Yes, Jerry didn't go to London. I am being tough on Spike and there's a long way to go too... :D Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: BB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Five

am loving this story just hope it has a happy ending you just want maggie walsh to get her just desserts i think she ought to be turned and treated like she treats all hostiles !!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know that you're enjoying the story - I don't think the ending will disappoint :D

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 03:22 pm Title: Chapter Five

Interesting chapter. Is all of Spike's appendages made of metal. I find that to be very depressing. Anyway, it seems that Spikei's mind is not as well controlled as Maggie Walsh planned. It was not very nice of you to end the chapter that way. I will patiently await your next update.

Author's Response: Only Spike's thumbs and the knee that got damaged in Tracker are metal - the rest of him is as it should be...um...apart from the eyes. Next chapter up tomorrow. Thank you for taking the time to comment

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 09:47 pm Title: Chapter Four

Hopefully Jerry will find out what Maggie did to Spike. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: The disks are the key... Thank you for letting me know you're eager for more :D

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter Four

another great chapter although horrible for Spike to take his memories & ship him to London-Can he ever come back from this? The Initiative needs to be destroyed this time Please keep posting regularly

Author's Response: In one way, taking Spike's memories is a blessing - he can't yearn for or worry about what he can't remember. Don't worry - I've got plenty already written so the posting schedule of Mon, Wed and Fri will be strictly adhered to! :D Thanks for letting me know you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: SeaPea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter Four

Oh, thank God for Jerry. I was hoping he'd show up. But how to get Spike to remember Buffy and the boys? This is just killing me.

Author's Response: This is just killing me. Think this feeling may stay with you for a while yet - got 21 chapters written so far. :D Jerry found the disks - but what will the consequences of his discovery be...? Thank you for taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2009 - 04:32 pm Title: Chapter Four

Jerry is on the case! Did he ever meet Willow? Maybe she can help with the encrypted files.

Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Jerry gets some help with the encrypted discs but you'll have to wait until Wednesday to find out from who. :D Thank you for reading and commenting. Posting days are Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2009 - 03:31 pm Title: Chapter Four

Finally some good news. I hope that Jerry will figure out what happened to Spike. It is clear that he does not recognize Buffy and the boys any longer. How sad!
Thank you for this chapter. It gave me hope for Spike's situation, although I sure that it will take awhile to get Spike back where he belongs.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget. Thanks for sticking in there. This is a long fic and so there are lots of things still to come. :D Thank you very much for commenting.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2009 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter Three

Wow, somehow I missed the beginning of this one - I'm so glad that you're doing a sequal.

You're really running them all through the wringer, aren't you? Here's hoping that Spike will run into Giles in the UK and be saved!!

Thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: Glad you're on board! Hope you enjoy the ride. It's a much longer story than Tracker - currently writing chapter 22 :D Thank you for letting me know you're reading and enjoying it.

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