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Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2009 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I hope Buffy still has Spike's soul with her...sounds like they're going to need it! Please update soon!

Author's Response: The soul is safe and will come in to play in the future. :D

Reviewer: FlightOfFancy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2009 - 05:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

omg...please type quickly...I've been holding my breath and on the edge of my seat for a few chapters now.

You're doing a wonderful job with this story and I can hardly wait to see how things turn out in the end.

Author's Response: Hi there. Thanks for taking the time to comment and I'm delighted you're enjoying the ride. :)

Author's Response: Hi there. Thanks for taking the time to comment and I'm delighted you're enjoying the ride. :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2009 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

It seems to be going to smoothly. I am sure it iwon't be that easy. Great chapters.

Author's Response: Too easy? LOL! I've made you all suspicious! Maybe it's time their luck changed for a little while anyway :D Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoyed the chapters.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2009 - 07:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Wonder what Cam wants Craig to do! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hee! Your wish is my command - more up now!

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2009 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

I believe Maggie and Mark have met their match. The Knowledge that they gave Cam is going to come back and bite them in the ass. I have no doubt that Cam will be able to reverse what was done to Spike. I am dying to know what Cam asked Craig to do. I really do think they need Willow. With her and Cam's intelligence and Spike's and Buffy's strength they will be unstoppable. I hope you have a painful end for Maggie and Mark all planned out. I can't wait for Monday.

Author's Response: They surely do need Willow! :D Craig is happy to get involved. Painful ends guaranteed! LOL

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2009 - 11:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Hope Buffy isn't aiming at Spike although it sounds like she doesn't recognise him! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Buffy's aim isn't great! LOL

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2009 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

BITCH! :) You're wicked mean!



Author's Response: LOL! I do often live up to my name :D

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2009 - 05:39 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Oh, dear. With his soul back in and memories restored, Cam's going to be tormented by what he did to Spike. :( Then again, between his and Willow's computer skills, they should be able to hack in and make him better.... Here's hoping!

Thanks for the update. :)

Author's Response: Things will get better - but it still won't be easy!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2009 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Glad Buffy and Cam are back. I just hope they don't think Spike is dead and just leave him there. More please!

Author's Response: They'd never leave Spike there! Plus I'd get lynched if they did! LOL!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2009 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Even though I have not reviewed in a while I have still been reading your story. I haven't reviewed because I believe I know that you said there were horrible things in store. I was waiting for a glimmer of hope and I got it in this chapter. I will read this story to the end because you said the ending will be happy. I believe you will keep your word. Even though this story was and is difficult to read at times I want you to know that I think you are a good writer. If the story was poorly written I would have stopped reading many chapters ago.

Author's Response: Thank you Bridget - keep the faith! :D Thank you for saying that my writing is good.

Reviewer: mazza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2009 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

all I could think was "oh no" when Willow transported using Cam's soul to guide her - but whew it worked out so far. I am now eagerly awaiting the next chapter and what will happen if Buffy finds Spike or if Maggie gets Buffy - you are still the best at evil and keeping us hanging on! (congrats on 100!)

Author's Response: Hee! My beta thought the same thing - I had an 'Oh no!' in the comments! I will be keeping you hanging on this one too - bit of an evil cliffhanger! Thanks for the congrats - wonder if I'll get to 150 before the end?

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2009 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

This is very well written, but PLEASE tell me we are finally getting to Buffy rescueing Spike!!!!!

Author's Response: Um...you might not like the cliffhanger at the end of chapter 23 but the rescue is on! I promise!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2009 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I'm on the edge of my seat! Can't wait to find out what Buffy will do while she's in the Initiative headquarters! More please!

Author's Response: I hope I can keep you on the edge of your seat a bit longer! :D

Reviewer: dannii Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2009 - 12:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

i have been reading this story, love it but i keep checking everyday for more updates . They are not quick enough for me and you keep me hanging, love that we finaly getting somewhere in this chapter hopefully she will have them both back soon

Author's Response: Hi Dannii, thanks for taking the time to comment. The rescue is on...but you know me...will it be straight forward...? Hee!

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2009 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Well I am back. I try and try to stay away, but can not seem to stay away. I can not say that I have enjoyed the last several chapters, but I can not say that they were not well done. Many of my favorite books are not easy to read, the difference is that they are finished when I start reading. Yes I am one that will read the last few pages if I get to upset. I am relying on your promise for a happy ending. I am hoping a happy ending is not that the family gets a new pet named Spike. Also please put your sadistic talents(I mean that in a positive way) to good use when it comes to Maggie and Mark getting what they deserve.

Author's Response: Hi Laura. Bless you for hanging on in there! It is probably a story best read when complete in a way. I wasn't fibbing when I said things can be put right, and I have dropped a few clues along the way as to how this might occur. :D Thanks for letting me know you're still reading.

Reviewer: nat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2009 - 08:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

I think this is about as far as I go with this story. It's just too bleak and cruel for me, sorry. I like angst but the unremitting cruelty and sadistic characters are more than I can take.

Author's Response: Hi Nat. You are giving up just as the resuce begins but understand that the darkness may be too much for you. I have pormised Maryperk a fluffy spuffy so perhaps when I post that you'll give it a go? :D

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2009 - 11:53 am Title: Chapter Twenty

It's a shame that you've had some negative feedback about this fic, yes it is very dark and disturbing, but you did make this clear when you started posting it so I am a bit baffled why some are not happy with it.
The writing is excellent and I read every chapter with my breath held, praying when I open up each chapter if that is going to be the one where Walsh gets her comeuppance.
It's going to be interesting to see how you manage to get things put right at the end of the fic.

Author's Response: Hi Chris, thank you very much for your kind words. They are much appreciated. I agree that being 'told off' for being dark when it has been warned of is a little odd, and sometimes they are a little harsh. I think this is perhaps a story some should read when complete. I'm delighted that you're enjoying it and that you're waiting with bated breath. Thanks again for commenting and I hope that when the rescue comes that I can still keep you on tenterhooks. :D

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2009 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter Twenty

I decided to check on this story after skipping it hoping to see that maybe you would keep your evil spike ways from getting out of hand. It is becoming too hard to read this story and I find myself skimming it hoping that maybe Maggie and her group would get what they deserve and there would be a happy ending but it seems obvious that it can never happen and it wouldn't be real if it did too much horror. I am only writing to say that you need not worry about a review from me again. I have decided that I cannot handle your story. It may be well written and very imaginative. I hope you have decided that Spike has endured enough and given him a chance at revenge.

Author's Response: You're giving up just as the rescuing begins! :D This is a novel length story and I'm some seven or eight chapters ahead of posting. Thank you for saying it is well written and imaginative. I disagree that the hopes for a happy ending would be unrealistic, but understand if the fic isn't for you. Thank you for helping me towards the 100 reviews mark - I didn't think that I'd get as many as I have had here as livejournal is busier for me.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2009 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter Twenty

I came back to see if you were still torturing Spike.. and maybe had some type of storyline going besides this.. getting worse it seems.

too bad. Its your story. I think you have the talent to write something better.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to comment, Pam. I appreciate it. Though I will have to say that although I will take it as a compliment when you say I have the talent to write somethng better - I am proud of how this story is written and of the plot. Perhaps it would have been fairer to say the talent to write something to your taste or not so dark ,rather than better? I have promised Maryperk a fluffy spuffy so perhaps you will try that when it gets posted? :D

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2009 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter Twenty

I haven't posted for a while because I didn't like where the story was going & I still don't. I'm disappointed that this is getting too cruel & sick. Neither Spike nor possibly Cam will be able to get out of this without serious psychological damage and Spike has been so physically damaged that Buffy would just stake him to put him out of his misery . If it doesn't pick up within the next few, I will have to give up on this story-its depressing

Author's Response: Well, as luck would have it the rescuing is on the way! I disagree that Buffy would stake Spike and have lots up my sleeve to ensure the boys recover in a believable way.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2009 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Cam is going to blame himself when he realises eventually what Maggie made him do to Spike. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Well thank you very much for saying you can't wait for more as this chapter has caused a bit of an exodus! LOL! The rescue will begin soon. See you tomorrow for the next chapter :D

Reviewer: mazza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2009 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

just read 19 and 20 tonight - with only a soft drink! What can I say - through the proverbial wringer again, how do you manage to keep such a high standard, you are truly amazing. Now all we can hope is that Willow can do some amazing magic to help all our boys out, and that Maggie will get her comeuppance soon. Excellent chapters!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, mazza, for letting me know that you enjoyed the chapters. Willow's appearance will indeed help things along and I hope you enjoy her arrival! :D Thanks again.

Reviewer: Carol (seapea) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2009 - 02:06 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

Shudder.... Can things get any more hopeless? I hate the thought of Cam on the happy drugs. Hopefully he does not spill the beans to Walsh about his renewed feeling in his toes. And I can't believe what they've done to Spike - just using him as their punisher. How can he possibly be put back to normal? Only you know the answers so naturally I'll keep reading. This is so angsty but so well written. I look forward to your updates.

Author's Response: Yes, it was hard to mess with little Cam, but Maggie wasn't going to be denied! Thank you very much for saying it's well written. That means a lot.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2009 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

I see they're still torturing Spike :( Hopefully Buffy can get in touch with Willow. More please!

Author's Response: Oh yes, Maggie can't resist playing with Spike. Did you like the cliffhanger that wasn't with the not missing Craig?

Reviewer: fyreburned (Kara) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 - 06:07 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Oh, no! Making Cam almost like Riley was (yet thankfully not an Adam nor, hopefully (if I understood correctly), completely like Gunn (soulless, yes, but not lower-halfless?). Yay to the Resistance! I'm wondering if Maggie turns Spike loose on Cam, Craig or even Buffy, if he will remember their scent (even if he can't remember his own name) or 'signature'; wondering if he's got that 'hardwired' into him from his (previous) love for Buffy and family, seeing them literally as family, as "HIS", as clan, per se?
~~Kara


Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know that you're still reading. I appreciate it. Cam is whole - just sans one soul and plus some medical knowledge. Spike doesn't really know who he is at the moment, let alone anyone else.

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