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Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2010 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 4

This story is fan-fucking-tastic!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! It was such fun to write.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 09:43 am Title: Chapter 4

Spike's insightfulness has always been a wake up call for Buffy. Your Spike gets her motor revving and it's a wild ride. You've captured a Spike that has been missing from fanfic for a while. Immensely enjoying the read.

Author's Response: I do so like Evil Spike and wish there were more stories with him. Thank you so much for enjoying it!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter 4

"I’m not listening to anything you have to say.”

“When do you ever?"


Such a simple summation of their entire relationship, but for some reason, taking his love out of it makes it all the more okay for her. And that was the damn hottest vampire sex I've seen those two have in quite a while. Not graphic, cause it didn't have to be. Just explosively hot. I love it when they are both so disinterested, yet so desperately in need of the same thing. Or at least Buffy is the desperate one. Really think that this Spike's disinterest is going to do her more good than her Spike's love. This is just fantastic.

Author's Response: Oh, you got it exactly right, what I was after! Thank you! She needs that disinterest at the moment.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 4

Spike still should have a light headache for stunning Buffy... (my guess). It was good that Spike tried to tell Buffy some new truth. And he was totally right about seeing a shrink. If Buffy only had done that, she would have felt better (I think).
When Buffy gets involved with Spike now he made sure that she knows what she is doing. Still... she isn't okay, the 'not feeling' is still an issue. I'm not sure that Spike alone will help without Buffy getting the help of a psychiatrist. Still a bit sad to see no feelings involved. I'd thought Spike would change; doesn't look like it at the moment nor that Buffy would change herself and trigger Spike's change regarding falling in love. I'll have to wait and see, huh? I'm not sure if that won't hurt them even if they try to avoid the hurt and being honest.
At last Buffy is starting to change in other ways if it wasn't a one-time-thing. She has seen the truth in what Spike told about Xander. And that Willow needs control.

(PS because I just checked my old review and saw you responded about Allaboutspike - that archive now closed to new stories but it's still on-line and will stay on-line as long as the site-owner can afford it. But several others vanished or are down with a promise to come back. *sigh*
Too many.)

Author's Response: No headache. He can hit her, remember, even if he can't hit anybody else. :D Yay about the 'AllaboutSpike' site! Thank you for telling me! I thought it was down. I going to rush there and save the rest of my favorites. The trouble is we're losing fans as they get involved with other shows. :( But at least we still have EF, SR andBSV.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 05:40 am Title: Chapter 4

i'm all for spike telling buffy some truths, but i don't like him being so harsh about it, he's just going to end up damaging her even more than she already is. i agree with another reviewer, i don't see any love developing here. i don't like sex when no feelings are involved, so i may have to pass on the rest of this story.

Author's Response: In Season 6 in both canon and this story, Buffy is so caught up in her own misery that she has to be hit by a two-by-four for anything to reach her. Which is what Spike is doing. The question is why he’s doing it. A Spike who didn’t care for her would just walk out and return to Dru. He does have feelings for her and he is trying to help. His methods are rough, but the love and forgiveness didn’t work for S6 Spike, did they? We have two Spikes here and they’re merging. And, there, I’ve given away the rest of the story, haven’t I? :D

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter 4

I can see where some might have a problem with this story. They probably want Spike to bow down to the greatness that is Buffy. Kiss the ground she walks on even if she treats Spike like he is beneath her. I think if it was a man who did the same things Buffy did then there have been more of an outrage. Since it is a woman that did those things to a man then there wasn't as much as an outrage. One thing that Spike always had for Buffy is that he always respected her. Even when he was evil you can still he had great respect for who she was. Respect that she was the slayer. Buffy did respect Spike in the beginning but after he got the chip she started treating him like he is beneath her. She forgot that he was a master vampire. Now he is reminding her once again that he is master vampire that should be respected. I'm glad that Spike is telling some hard truth about herself and her friends. She needed to hear that. That is why I love Anya because she is always truthful. Even if the truth isn't always easy to hear. Spike is the same way. He always tells it like it is. So, while I can see where some would have trouble with this story. I'm not one of them. I'm one that is loving this story. That is loving Spike but I always love Spike. While I do love the hot sex. I do hope that their feelings start becoming softer towards one another. That they don't always hurt each other. I need to see that truly care for the one another too. I want both from my Spuffy couple. I want the hot sex but I need to see that is just more than sex between them. That there is real deep feelings like love. That is the only thing I'm worried about in this story. That we won't see the love side between Spike and Buffy as well.

Author's Response: I'm a rabid Spuffy girl and the love side really is coming. Guaranteed! Everything's rather at a cockeyed angle right now, but it will straighten out. Promise. You're right. The people who don't like the story don't admit that Buffy did anything wrong in S6. If we put a man in Buffy's role and a woman in Spike's, Season 6 would have been horrific. I'm so glad you're liking it! Thank you!

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter 4

Whew!!!
I love Spike's way of putting things to Buffy. Spot on with most of his assessments.

Author's Response: Spike always sees things clearly, but this time he had to kind of hit her over the head with a two-by-four to make her listen. :D Thank you for liking it!

Reviewer: betty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter 4

I was pleasantly surprised to see where you took this, which was not quite the dark place I was expecting. It's good to see that your imagination is better than my fears. You actually had them communicating here for the first time, and Buffy actually seemed to be listening, which was an enormous improvement on the situation. I also liked that Buffy finally came to him on her own at the end of the chapter. I'm getting awfully tired of her rationalizations, though.

As for Spike, I mostly liked him and his bravado, except in one place, where he told Buffy she was a disappointment.
To me that is like kicking someone when she is down. I absolutely hated the way Buffy treated Spike in S6 especially in Dead Things and As You Were, (and I hate her attitude here too). But I don't think that makes it okay for Spike now to turn around and completely dismiss her with such a hurtful abusive comment. Ugh. I think Tara had a good point about "Tough Love" but that only applies to her and Willow -- this Spike is not showing Buffy any kind of love, tough or not.

I adore your playful snarky untamed Spike from "Change Partners and Dance" etc, who gradually grew to respect Buffy even while pointing out her weaknesses. I wish this sniping pair would remember that they were friends once at the end of S5 and beginning of S6, before Once more with Feeling and Smashed. I do feel like you've had them turn some kind of a corner here, which is a positive sign. Yet it is hard to believe that this Spike could ever fall in love with this Buffy. I actually kind of want S6 Spike back. Bring on the Spuffy. (And the next chapter too)

Author's Response: The Spike in 'Change Partners' was dealing with an undamaged Buffy. This is S6 Buffy, madly rationalizing away, who has to be hit over the head with a two-by-four before she thinks. Which is what Spike is doing. And the parallel with Willow and Tara was there on purpose, a hint at what's really going on with Spike. Spuffy will happen. Guaranteed. :D

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 01:25 am Title: Chapter 4

Another great chapter. I am glad that Spike told Buffy some truths about herself and the scoobies. Hopefully, she will continue to assess what spike told her. It is difficult to see when this will be Spuffy but I think that when they realize their feelings for each other that their relationship will be equal and honest.

Author's Response: Rabid Spuffy girl here, so it will end up Spuffy. It's just coming from a kind of different angle here. :D Thank you for liking it!

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter 4

Now we're getting somewhere! I liked him making her have to listen to all he had to say, and I don't think he was too harsh. I loved her snapping at Xander - we all know he deserved it. Hopefully soon we'll see that what they physically feel for each other can be shifted into something more for both of them. They both need some changing.
Still loving this!

Author's Response: They both have things to learn about themselves. :D I'm so glad you're liking this! Thank you! Some people have been getting upset and I was worried.

Reviewer: Naurolim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2009 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 4

Hi, I totally agreed with your author's comments and I definately trust you as an author - I love your other stories.

Spike sure had a lot to say in this chapter, really wish he had said a lot of that on the show. The best thing about s6 was the amount of fanfic it generated, all trying to change it for various reasons.

That being said, your story stands out to me because of all the emotions it invokes in a reader. It's not a run of the mill fix s6 story, you have put a different spin on things - well done and I would reccommend the story to others.

Author's Response: I really intended to make this story just a fun look at how things would go if Spike hit back. That first chapter is actually quite lighthearted. But the stories control me, I don't control them, and it all started getting rather intense. :) I'm so glad you're accepting of this. Someone on another site called this Spike a bastard and wanted to dust him and me. :D And there I was hesitating over making the sex scene even darker. What a good thing I decided not to!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2009 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 4

GO SPIKE!!! And tell it like it is. Wish something like this had actually been said, cause it's all true! I loved the return of the cattle prod. lol

And Buffy couldn't stop herself from going to Spike. HOT sex scene as always, but kinda odd with Spike really not caring for her. You could have made this much worse, don't understand the complaints. ( I may be evil cause I was hoping for darker)

Anyway I loved it, it's so good. Can't wait to see what changes between them, cause we know something has to. :)

Author's Response: I was hesitating on darker, then decided not to. Good thing too, the way some people are freaking already. You're the first person to review and I'm kind of bracing myself for the others, since even this might be too much with Spike not really caring. (Or is that the truth? :D) I'm so glad you like it! Thank you!

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