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Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 09:56 am Title: Chapter 5

Oh, now that Spike has helped Buffy get her rocks back, things are going to change? Pooh :(

Author's Response: People would lynch me if I wrote a Spuffy story with Spike not falling for Buffy. :D But I like Evil Spike and will be writing more stories with him. Try my 'Change Partners and Dance' for Evil Spike taking Angel's place in Season 1.

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 07:05 am Title: Chapter 5

that's just a mean cliffie!
They were coming to sort of understanding and then.. you can't seriolusly leave it there!
They actually talked! yay. And Spike's hard truths didn't seem quite so mean... And he was right and tried to get Buffy to see that.

"What’s the point of having the witch around except for babysitting? She doesn’t even pay her share of household expenses and she should. You need the money.” Yes, I agree, Helping while Buffy was dead doesn't really count.. Besides they weren't taking care of Dawn as a long term situation.. Willow just seems to take advantage of the free-living. She's an adult and therefore must pay for herself..

"here you are, giving up college, trying to find a job to keep food on the table and a roof over her head while still going out to slay—and all she can think about is that you’re not around to hold her hand all the time?
Pfft! So her Dad’s skedaddled and she’s lost her Mum. Haven’t you?”Loved the line!!! I never really liked Dawn, because she was too much acting like a little kid. She's old enough to understand how the world works.. And be grateful she got Buffy back but instead she's whining about that as well.. (cos Buffy wasn't all happy and didn't make all the prpblems go away)

argh! I could go on forever about those two.. They were the things that I hated the most...
And still thay get me mad!

Anyway loved the chapter!! Buffy and Spike were really getting to be quite sweet together :)


Author's Response: I couldn't understand why Willow and Tara would live in Buffy's house and eat her food and never contribute to the cost. Or why Child Services kept threatening to take Dawn away, but never insisted that Hank Summers pay child support. I like Dawn, but her dumping all the problems on Buffy got me. How old is Dawn here? Fifteen? Buffy had to kill demons at that age - she was not even sixteen when she had to be a Slayer in L.A. Eegh! Thank you for liking me having Spike point it ou! And thank you for liking the story!

Reviewer: betty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 06:24 am Title: Chapter 5

Ooh, what a mean and nasty cliffie -- but then yours usually are, leaving readers desperate for more. Great chapter though. Like others, I very much enjoyed the scene where Spike makes Buffy realize that she does want to live; I also thought that, with the comments he was making about her friends, he was actually showing some latent (or possibly growing) care for Buffy in seemingly defending her.

It seems like Buffy is starting to come round here, which is a relief -- I don't much care for stories where there is a power imbalance, with one character always in the right, and another always in the wrong.

I wonder if past Spike will try to mess up the future for Buffy. She'd probably thank him if she could avoid the whole death/resurrection thing; I can't see him steering completely clear of her, though; Past Spike seems invested in her now. Too bad he had to leave! I am eager to see what S6 Spike does when he gets back. I hope he'll remember S3 Spike's actions? If he's smart he'll keep mum for a bit and simply observe Buffy -- if only because it would be great to see if she can detect any difference between this (S6) Spike's lovemaking and the that of the previous (S3) Spike.

Bravo! As engrossing as ever! (And a lot less toxic here)

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad the story is no longer distressing you! Didn't I promise it wouldn't be toxic? Once you finish the last chapter, do glance back over any scenes that gave you problems. There might be a different perspective. :D

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 06:00 am Title: Chapter 5

Loved it. Love Spike telling Buffy some hard truths. I also like that they seem to be a bit softer towards the other. I"m really enjoying this story so much. I always get happy when I see a new update from this story.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it! Thank you! And, yes, they are softening.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 03:35 am Title: Chapter 5

“I’m dancing with death, aren’t I?” she muttered.

“Haven’t we always?”

That was simply, fucking incredible. He badgered her to the living. Drew her out making her covet the demon. Finally got her the way he wanted her... his little nymphette to lust over or kill, and he gets snapped back to his world. Just when I think he's really starting to like that girl, too. Or at least her slayer muscles. I am in LOVE with this one. Wonder how he'll cope with his world now. Please, update soon.

Author's Response: Spike had an agenda. And now he's got to find another one. Next chapter up tomorrow. Thank you so much for liking it!

Reviewer: DW Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter 5

I'm absolutely loving this story! I love that Spike got his 'mojo' back...that cutting frankness, boldness that essentially makes him Spike. I can't wait for what comes next. Keep up the good job!

Author's Response: Oh, I agree! They softened him too much in S6, which is why I wanted to explore what would happen if he were himself. I'm so glad you like it! Thank you!

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 12:22 am Title: Chapter 5

OOOH, the vengeance demon's back. Now that's gonna set things topsy turvy again. :)

Author's Response: Couldn't resist it! :D

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 5

Another great chapter. I love Spike's talks with Buffy. Sometimes I wanna hit Buffy over the head with a bat and tell her to "think!" She just seems so close minded all the time. At least it seems she is listening to Spike and finally admits she doesn't wanna die. It's about time. And Spike helped her with that demon, it seems he does care. Even if he doesn't wanna admit it. :)

OMG evil cliffie again! So S3 Spike is back where he belongs now, huh? Wonder what S6 Spike will do now? I'm guessing he's back.

Can't wait for tomorrow's posting. :)

Author's Response: I spent S6 and S7 wishing I had a bat too. :D And I can never resist those cliffies. I'm so glad you're liking this!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 5

I almost thought this was close to the end..

Spike still on top literally. Still messing with Buffy's head I see.. so no ending there.

Now someone messing with his .. LOL
Waiting to see who this vengenance demon is..
Enjoyed..

Author's Response: We still need closure, so the story couldn't end there. :D Thank you for enjoying it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh you're earlier today, I didn't expect to catch the update before I go to sleep. :)
And you're right about the headache not being existent, I forgot for a moment 'when' the story is. I just thought about Spike's chip.
I'm crossing my fingers very hard that Vampkiss will come back. In the old archive are a lot of stories not posted anywhere. Same goes for Sinister Attraction, I'm still waiting for the site owner to answer my question. And the BS Diaries are still down too, Alea doesn't seem to find a solution. You might want to check The Sandlot too - lots of old stories. But all GeoCities Sites will be gone very very soon.
I'm glad for all the sites still there :D

Spike tried to talk sense into Buffy again, seeing things with his eyes. Maybe she's listening but it doesn't seem so yet. At last Spike is still watching her on patrol even if he doesn't raise a hand to help. I hope he would if Buffy was in danger.
Ah he did. Even if afterwards he wasn't sure why he did. Makes me wonder if he gets feelings after all.
*phew* Buffy decided that she wants to live again? It's good that she made the decision.
But Spike is back now in his old body?
Make me wonder very hard what will happen now. Didn't expect that now but it makes sense with Buffy on the right track.

Author's Response: It's my day off, so I was able to post earlier. :) I'm really sad too about all the sites closing. I hope no more do and that some of the others will come back. Having the Geek Trio possibly turn her into pudding made Buffy realize she wanted to live in canon. Here I used the Chiriwan and Spike instead. I'm so glad that you're not upset by it being a little more raw and dark than usual. Though I didn't think it was that bad. But some people are mad. Thank you for enjoying it!

Reviewer: claudia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 5

I'm not trying to be rude or anything and your story is great but why do every Spuffy encounter have to be sexual? just when I was getting thrilled of at reading a good verbal spat between spuffy it had to turned sexual.

Author's Response: It's an NC17 story and people like sexual - one can't disappoint them. :D The thing is between my Buffy and Spike in any story, verbal and physical conflict always turns sexual and sexual encounters lead to verbal sparring. Their dynamic is braided together like that. It's just a little more raw here. I'm sorry you don't like it, but that's the way I see them.

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