Excellent.. although I will admit almost pulling my hair out at the 'no soul' comment. But I get that it is imperative to the story, I really do, I just absolutely hate it when Buffy sprouts that drivel. Heck the other night I got into an arguement with my 13 year old niece about why Spike was superior to Angel and she had the gull to quote that line at me.. I have never wanted to smack someone more. You don't love with your soul, you love with your heart. And I have gone way off topic.
Back to the story. Like I said you did a wonderful job, and the Spike and Buffy's insights were extremely believable and true to the characters, so much that if Joss himself had chosen to veer off in that particular direction it would have been written much like this. Keep up the top-notch work, I look very forward to the next one!

Author's Response: LOL. Thankyou so much for your kind words. I will admit that everytime I have to write those words I end up rolling my eyes myself! I'm forced to write Buffy with a bit more common sense than cannon because quite frankly, who in their right mind would be able to resist Spike? I mean she does have eyes right? ps. I'm totally on your side with the Spike vs Angel thing! The youth of today huh?! x LOL :)

Aww, yay, loving this. It's still hard to believe this is only your second fiction, your writing is great. I see you're a fluffy girl just like me. Gotta love the fluff=)

Author's Response: Thankyou. I started this as an angsty little ficlet and then I gave in to the fluffy side! I'm just too weak to resist the spuffy goodness :)

Really enjoying this fic, can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thankyou. Glad you're liking it. x