Date: 03/07/2012 - 06:59 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I hate him right now. He's being such a jerk. She has a instinctive reaction then immediately tries to reassure him. He however purposely hurts her when he knows she's suffering. I hope he has to ask for her forgiveness
Date: 12/19/2009 - 12:17 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
that would be: so torn, not to torn.
Author's Response: Thanks for the self beta! I understood what you were referring to
Date: 12/19/2009 - 12:16 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Sad, seeing both to torn. *sigh*
Hope they can work their issues out soon, it hurts them both so much.
Author's Response: They will!
Date: 12/19/2009 - 05:53 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
What an awesome fic. Makes such a difference when you have well rounded characters and not caricatures. Can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: *blush* thank you so much nic for your review. Sometimes I wonder if I drag things with my wordyness. I believe that who I write about should have some depth, I'm glad that you feel that I've done this
Date: 12/18/2009 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
First of all I am loving this story and I was so excited to see a new update! But secondly, dang, Spike is being a Grade A #1 Ass. Buffy is a good person and a slayer and just had a natural reaction. He knows that this is the person who she is. It's not like she spat at him or punched him in the nose for past deeds. He deserves to get the cold should from her as well after pulling a silly stunt like that. But saying all this, it does make the story super interesting and now I have to wait for the next chapter. I hate wait!
Author's Response: Im glad that you like my story. Remember for him to understand her reaction he has to have empathy. NOT a vampire trait. In addition he's been a vampire far longer than a human. Also the time period he hails from, didn't really consider woman anything more than to birth children, clean, cook and be a dutyful wife. Nothing more. Empathy is innate to an extent, the rest has to be taught.
Date: 12/18/2009 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Spike and his demon are acting like children! More please!
Author's Response: Yeah, yeah they are. Maybe I have a child still locked inside, because I'm enjoying writing this!!!