Date: 09/16/2014 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
I like how you used the last two characters for your ending - especially now that D'Hoffryn is playing such an important part in the comic books.
Also have to say how much I like your treatment for Xander - let him grow up and not be the jerk that he is so often depicted as in Spuffy fanficiton.
Date: 12/06/2009 - 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
I just read this whole story from start to finish and I loved it! I wish that the show went this way. I loved Buffy. Sure she was a jerk but you still let her have a heart and you really displayed the reason behind her faults. And how could i not love Spike in this story! He was sweet, and kind and wonderful! And of course I thought what you did with Xander was also wonderful. So often I read stories that are SO black in white where he is only the asshole jerk and it's frustrating. You actually showed the heart underneath him and the other characters.
Date: 11/06/2009 - 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
Fabulous! Greatly enjoyed from the first words to the last! Thanks!
~~Kara
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Happy you enjoyed it. k
Date: 11/06/2009 - 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
had to read your story from start to finish. TOUCHING.......loved it. From the painful words to the sweet ones all of them wonderful.
Great story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am glad it touched you emotionally. k
Date: 11/06/2009 - 09:33 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm all congested with the sobbing this story incited. I REALLY wish :) that even a brief glimpse of what you gave us in this fic was what the characters admitted/experienced/received. This is out there in the ether for us to all marvel and love in a gift of 6 chapters. Your story was amazing with a poetic title that drew me in right from the start. Thank you so much for this tale.
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you. Thank you for reading and the lovely reviews. I am delighted it captured you and held your interest. K