Name: Hostile17 (Anonymous) · Date: 12/09/2009 - 04:02 am · For: Love and That Other Stuff
“You’re the only one who won’t take any of my crap. You know how to knock sense into me when no one else will. When everyone was saying how sorry they were that she was gone and that heaven was a better place if she was unhappy, you told me the truth. That she was a crappy mother who treated me like shit and that I was better off without her. You apologized like crazy a couple days after that but you were right. You never sugar coated it.” -- That was my favorite line! I like how you included that they always have such passion and are great together because they are not normal! Good job!

Name: Roxie (Anonymous) · Date: 11/21/2009 - 08:06 am · For: Love and That Other Stuff
Buffy sounds more like Anya in this's interesting, but it could use a bit of work. I like the premise, though, and the Rock, Paper, Scissors reference. Neat.

Name: Jake (Anonymous) · Date: 11/20/2009 - 08:06 am · For: Love and That Other Stuff
First off, I love it! It really explores the 'after' of a relationship that didn't go quite as planned for either party. It's a hard subject to tackle and you did it with clarity, sensitivity and a certain je ne sais quoi that really brings the characters to a different light and the reader is able to see both sides of the squabble. Second, thank you for the shout out and it was absolutely no problem helping you. Again, it was a great to story to read and explore.

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