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Reviewer: Jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2010 - 12:31 pm Title: Deathly

Oh no!

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Date: 01/26/2010 - 11:47 pm Title: Deathly

Wait what why this makes no sense why would she leave him. Where is the note I need to understand this. The only thing that comes close is something with Dawn and if she caused Buffy to leave him then she is nothing but a selfish brat and I hate her. Buffy was happy she was in love this doesn't make sense. Poor William my heart breaks for him.

Author's Response: It makes sense in a twisted!Buffy sort of way. You'll see...

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Date: 01/26/2010 - 10:39 pm Title: Deathly

Spike is different - he stays. But Buffy doesn't know a lot of people like him. She never learned to trust people this way.
I wondered if Spike wanting to marry Buffy would make her a bit more confident but it didn't. Well he tried.
Yay for graduation.
But HUH? Where did Buffy go now? The only clue could be Dawn's call. But not 100% sure if it is related.
More please? Looking forward to more information.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing... Sorry for the cliffhanger. oh wait, that's right.. I'm not. ;P

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2010 - 07:21 pm Title: Deathly

Where is Buffy? Where did she go? Please keep writing and update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: Update is on its way in a couple of days. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2010 - 07:12 pm Title: Deathly

Evil. I know it has something to do with Dawn, but your're evil. Please, please update quickly

Author's Response: Bwahaha.... I'll try.

Reviewer: laur Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2010 - 05:24 pm Title: Deathly

I REALLY HATE WHEN SHE DOES SH^&% like that.....can never just talk to him about stuff has to do things the hard way....she better have a really good explaination for this........

Author's Response: I'm sure she *thinks* she does. :D

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2010 - 04:48 pm Title: Deathly

um, okay, what just happened? things were going so well, why would buffy leave? that doesn't make a lot of sense, even if she isn't ready for marriage right now. hopefully there's a good explanation for that.

Author's Response: There is. Really.

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 - 04:24 pm Title: River

I was hoping that his request would be to visit Dawn during Christmas break and then again I had hoped the necklace would have been a ring not that I am disappointed because the story rocks I love the lovingness of them.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 - 02:02 pm Title: River

Awe @ William offering to go shopping. But he regretted it soon enough LOL.
Thoughtful gift - because it was his mom Buffy can't say it's to expensive.
Sweet chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2010 - 11:32 pm Title: Lost Cause

I had forgotten all about Ted I'm glad she got some closure.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2010 - 09:48 pm Title: Lost Cause

Darn... Ted is still around? Not the person Buffy needed to see.
But William made it all better. Buffy telling Spike that she loves him? Best gift she could make him.

Author's Response: I don't know... I think kicking Ted around could be good for the girl. :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2010 - 08:33 pm Title: Lost Cause

Sigh! What a great and to this chapter, it totally made my day. It was awful seeing her have to confront Ted but it was awesome when she kicked him in the balls, totally gratifying. What a bastard! Pure EVIL! But what a sweet ending when she finally said "I love you", couldn't have been done in a better way. :-)

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much.

Reviewer: Tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2010 - 02:15 pm Title: Lost Cause

Loved the update. Great!

Author's Response: Glad you're liking the story. Thanks for reading (and reviewing).

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 - 02:00 am Title: A Place in the Sun

Buffy is so broken by her experiences. I feel bad for her. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you're still with me. Will update shortly!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2010 - 09:19 am Title: A Place in the Sun

Loved this chapter! It was sweet, sexy, and sad. I just loved the end of it when she called him to pick her up. She is so wounded but at the same time she is now willing to start healing, hopefully. I love their relationship in this story and can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks, really glad to hear you like it. Thanks for reading, and for reviewing.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2010 - 10:55 pm Title: A Place in the Sun

i'm glad that she called him, i don't want this buffy to be like the show, thinking she has to be miserable all the time, when spike could easily make her happy.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2010 - 10:43 pm Title: A Place in the Sun

That Ted was like a father to Buffy makes what he did even more disgusting.
Ouch... and no job and now the talk with Dawn? Not a good day.
Awe, but the day ended better than I feared after Buffy wanted to go home.

Author's Response: Thanks... I kind of debated the ending, whether it would be in this chapter or the beginning of the next one... then I thought a positive note wouldn't be amiss after her bad day. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2010 - 04:23 am Title: Dreams

It's coming along awesomely! Just caught up to this story today and I love it! So interesting, just adore William and Buffy is the perfect mixture of sweet and messed up. First real good step was telling him about her family, with trauma like that, it's easy to see why she can't say "I love you" easily, but hopefully she will soon. Can't wait to see what you have planned!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2010 - 02:11 am Title: Dreams

Really loving this! More please!

Author's Response: Thanks... more is on the way. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2010 - 11:16 pm Title: Dreams

Awe :)
At last Buffy tried to cook. Not her fault that she got vanilla in the eggs (*ggg*). And she didn't run when Spike told her he loves her. :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2010 - 11:35 pm Title: Save Me

Buffy's life was hell after her mother died. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2010 - 10:15 pm Title: Save Me

Yuck, it was Buffy's step dad abusing her. But I don't see how Buffy could have gotten away from him with Dawn. At last it's over now. No chance to sue him for rape I fear.
Sadly that isn't something Buffy will forget; poor one.

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2010 - 08:11 pm Title: Save Me

I am so glad that abuse is in the past. I know how hard it must have been for her to give up Dawn even though it made things better for both of them. I can't help but wonder what did she do about Ted did he have him arrested or just kicked him out or is he dead. Although I doubt the last one I just hope there isn't a chance for him to show back up to mess things up with her.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you're liking the story. Hang in there... I think I'm more than halfway done at this point, and all will be revealed eventually. :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2010 - 10:08 pm Title: For the Sake of the Song

So Buffy was/is being hurt! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2010 - 11:24 pm Title: For the Sake of the Song

We are finally going to find out the only thing comes to mind is an abusive older brother or her dad.

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