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Date: 01/08/2010 - 10:53 pm Title: For the Sake of the Song

Awe @ William cooking for Buffy and she loved it. :)
Boo for the reason she got expelled. Yeah, someone fighting for her might have changed things.
Wow and Buffy really wants to reveal her secret now (well who maybe was beating her)?
Looking forward to it *is curious*.

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Date: 01/08/2010 - 08:11 pm Title: For the Sake of the Song

Don't stop there! More please!

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Date: 01/08/2010 - 03:02 pm Title: For the Sake of the Song

Please keep writing and update as soon as you can.

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Date: 01/08/2010 - 12:15 pm Title: For the Sake of the Song

I am fascinated. More please!

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Date: 01/08/2010 - 07:19 am Title: For the Sake of the Song

You got on the edge of my seat can't wait for the next chapter

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Date: 12/27/2009 - 10:02 pm Title: Lay, Lady, Lay

Love it a little more about William and Buffy but what is she still hiding?

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2009 - 09:19 pm Title: Lay, Lady, Lay

I forget about the bruises, I don't think a child could have done that. So much for my theory. Maybe married (or with boyfriend)? That's really a riddle. Buffy is hiding something and that's not her age, she didn't let William drive her home.
So William is a teacher... but Buffy isn't in school any longer, right?
Till next part :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2009 - 06:48 pm Title: Lay, Lady, Lay

why do i doubt that she's only 19? this girl lies a lot, there's no telling what's true. i wish she would just tell him the truth already, making him think he could have possibly bruised her is not right. i get that she has problems, but i'm not liking her so much right now, i feel like she's just using him because her life isn't going well, but it's obvious that he really cares about her. i just hope her main problem isn't the fact she's already seeing someone, whether it's a happy relationship or not, i don't like when people cheat.

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Date: 12/27/2009 - 03:16 pm Title: Lay, Lady, Lay

Loved it! Can't wait for more!

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Date: 12/27/2009 - 03:13 pm Title: Lay, Lady, Lay

How sweet I love this romantic chapter but I am curious as to that bruise is it a tale of things to come to explain her background and why she doesn't want him to see where she lives and is she really 19?

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2009 - 10:53 am Title: Lay, Lady, Lay

Merry Christmas. Please keep contuinue with this story. I would like to read how it ends. Update as soon as you can.

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Date: 12/27/2009 - 03:59 am Title: If You're Wondering if I Want You To

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Date: 12/26/2009 - 02:03 am Title: If You're Wondering if I Want You To

Cordy and Buffy seem to know each other quite well. Cant wait for more!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2009 - 05:54 am Title: If You're Wondering if I Want You To

Buffy's crazy family? The other guy? I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2009 - 02:55 pm Title: If You're Wondering if I Want You To

Please don't stop writing this story. I would like to read how it ends.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it. I have a plan and writing's been going well, so keep watching for updates.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2009 - 02:49 pm Title: If You're Wondering if I Want You To

Awe :) Spike was really nervous because of the date.
But Buffy said she doesn't have family around. Makes me wonder ... maybe indeed a child she has. Really not sure.
Sounds as if Buffy won against Cordelia. ;)
~ Merry Christmas to you.

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2009 - 11:17 pm Title: Waiting for the Bus

It didn't suck I love the way William handled Dru and you left us to wonder what is going on with Buffy is there someone else in her life another man a child; what made the noise and why she didn't want him to be able to contact her.

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Date: 12/22/2009 - 10:59 pm Title: Waiting for the Bus

Seems like Buffy is trying to hide something about herself from William. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2009 - 10:44 pm Title: Waiting for the Bus

Hmm, seems to be bad on her end, an abusive father perhaps? How old is Buffy here? I can't remember if it was mentioned before or not. Well, I like that they decided to get to know each other better, instead of jumping right back in to the sex. I don't see that lasting long, but at least we know Spike wants more with her. I'm relieved that he didn't take Dru back, not that I was worried, he already seems to be pretty smitten with Buffy. Can't wait for more=)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2009 - 09:01 pm Title: Waiting for the Bus

Really enjoying your story but what is Buffy hiding with Joyce been dead I'm guessing its bad. And so glad Spike didn't take Dru back.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2009 - 08:22 pm Title: Waiting for the Bus

Good to see an update :)
So Drusilla took her things with her now; even if that is an end for Spike it's also a new start for him. :)
I still wonder a bit about Buffy, her reaction to Spike's offer to drive her. What's her secret.... she gave him her number to call, so no secret there. I thought first of a boyfriend but maybe it's somethings smaller like a baby...
I liked the chapter, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying the story.

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Date: 12/21/2009 - 11:14 pm Title: Do You Realize?

Really liking this! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2009 - 09:01 pm Title: Do You Realize?

Oh I like the start. :)
Hope you can post more.
(The fading bruises Buffy had, I wonder if she got beaten / if that's something important she didn't tell.)

Reviewer: menolly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2009 - 03:46 pm Title: Do You Realize?

i like this story and i can't wait to see what happens next

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