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Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2010 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter One

First of all, oh my, what a beautiful banner! The story is cool and interesting so far. It's not easy to come up with original ideas, but you managed to. Poor William's really freaked out about the latest brewin' evil. I can't wait to see what's up with Spike being there at the end of the chapter.

I'm off to read chapter 2! *smoochies*

Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm glad you like the banner. :D

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2010 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter One

this is a totally awesome banner!!!! promise ill be back later with more!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2010 - 02:31 pm Title: Chapter One

Uh-oh, Whats happened to William?

I wonder what the big secret he is hiding her is. Seems like he thinks it could make or break his relationship with Buffy =( He is also really nervous about this thing... maybe he has a connection he isn't saying anything about? Hmm... will read the next chapter and find out! Loving this so far!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: yumimum Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2010 - 10:00 am Title: Chapter One

OMG! I loved this :)
I knew from your lj posts it was gonna be interesting and yay!!!

Can't wait for more. Well done hun.

Author's Response: Yay, am glad you liked it :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2010 - 01:20 am Title: Chapter One

Wonderful chapter! The writing was excellent, particularly the last powerful scene, with great atmosphere. You set the mood very well for how time has passed since Buffy and William met. The hints around William about his fear and nighttime are very interesting but cryptic enough that I'm left as shocked and eager for answers as Buffy. You do a great job at describing the emotions of the characters and I can't wait to see what happens with the vampire with William's face!

Please update soon!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the wonderful review! I'm glad that the passing of time in their relationship worked well; I needed to show how far they had come since meeting but without showing every step of their relationship. Also pleased to hear that you're intrigued and curious as to what's going on - that was the intention with this chapter. Thank you for reviewing, more will be posted later! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2010 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter One

Wasn't sure about the summary yet but indeed it means that William is human. Weird coincidence that there seems to be Spike later. (*thinks after William's ramble* Or maybe it's still one and not two.)
You made me very curious now. :D
Looking definitely forward to more.

Author's Response: Yes, William is human. Hee, am glad you're curious, it was my intention with this chapter! Thanks for reviewing, more will be up later.

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2010 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter One

Very interesting. I'm curious to see why there are two of William/Spike. Can't wait for the next chapter.


Author's Response: Thank you! Things should start making a little more sense in the next chapter.

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