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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 5

Huh.. my old review posted double.
(Regarding the last chapter I went back up to the start of it and checked what Buffy said to William. :D )
And now Buffy did it again. She'll be surprised if demon-Spike visits her again. But I wonder why William is so tired now; haven't figured that one out (except if he goes back to nighttime hours now).
Spike is good torturing Buffy, touching without touching :)
But Spike's tale explains why William was tired.

As Spike explained the Master it sounds a good idea to keep him. He holds the balance; that makes it easier for the slayers too.

I'm glad for Buffy that she gave in to Spike (it was hot, too); looking forward to Spike's reaction. And Buffy didn't notice about the invite.
Looking forward to more even if there aren't that many chapters to come.

Author's Response: Just two more. :) This story was more plotty than usual and I had to keep going back myself to make sure that things didn't get confused. I'm so glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Gill B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 - 11:30 am Title: Chapter 5

Oh, Wow...!

Loved this so much - wobbly William at the door after the disinvite (another inter-character bleed), and then Spike getting in without trouble because of it (though Angel can't - Yay!!). The idea that Spike had been away and William was so tired with no knowledge of why... The cat metaphors for Spike (especially loved the idea of the blue-eyed white leopard - that's exactly what he's like; beautiful, sinuous and dangerous until there's a connection...)

And then the Spuffy - the slow burn all the way from the club, like exquisite foreplay; and you write the sex so well - it's far sexier without the specifics - some authors must have a thesaurus of names for body parts - if I see one more use of nubbins for the clitoris, I'll go mad....

So – off for a cold shower; can’t wait for tomorrow! Gill


Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I've always seen Spike as a leopard from the start (and that prowl up the bed in Harsh Light of Day just cemented it for me), so I tend to write him that way. I think there's actually an online erotic thesaurus around, but I've never liked cute terms for body parts - why not say cock or clit right out? But specifics often get in the way of actually feeling the sex, which is far more important, so I concentrate on that. I'm so glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 - 11:13 am Title: Chapter 5

You know them so well. A great chapter.

Author's Response: I love those characters and I'm so glad you think I'm getting them right. Thank you!

Reviewer: PS Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 - 10:41 am Title: Chapter 5

Poor William-tired, wobbly at the door, but love the way he stands up to Angel..

If indeed, we have the two sides of the coin. I would think William aka Spike would be disappointed that his human self was not man enough to attract fair maiden Buffy-that she loves the demon although she felt the demon was both..

And if they are one in the same - will the stroke of midnight , cause we know how Spike likes to cuddle-give us William? And how human during the day and lack of heart beat and needing blood at night?

Enjoying.. and waiting for the answers.

Author's Response: Spike knows she needs some monster in her man and was never fond of his human side. And the reasons why will come - in the last chapter. :D I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter 5

God what a great chapter...lovely, hot smut as always. YUMMY!
Poor William is tired and doesn't know why huh? Gee I wonder why? I loved the scene on her balcony when you described Spike as looking all demon. It gave me goose bumps. And I love the Immortal story lol. just what the git deserves.
Now what will happen in the morning? Who will she wake up next to?

This story is amazing...can't wait for tomorrow's chappie. :)

Author's Response: That's the fun part to write. :D And after "The Girl in Question" a bit of revenge seemed fair. I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 - 06:36 am Title: Chapter 5



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Reviewer: readergirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 - 06:30 am Title: Chapter 5

Very compelling chapter! Woah, what a lot of heat between Spike and Buffy here. -- I love his reaction to being made love to, and Buffy's insights about his nature. I think I know why Spike can't find that twin, but I'll wait to see if I'm right.

Beautiful "connecting" here...

Author's Response: Don't tell. :D I'm so glad you're liking it! Thank you!

Reviewer: victoria2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 - 04:33 am Title: Chapter 5

GUH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

More please?

Author's Response: Thank you! :D More tomorrow.

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 - 04:06 am Title: Chapter 5

WOW.....WOW am I ever so glad she finally gave in to her own desires and let herself love him. What a night I am extremely curious as to what the morning shall bring. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you! It's very hard to hold out not only against Spike, but oneself. :D

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter 5

At first I was thinking a split like Toth, now I'm thinking a split personality. LOL. You're keeping us on our toes.

Author's Response: Like a shell game - where's the pea? :D I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!

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