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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 - 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 4

Sad to say but it's really better to be careful with Xander and Giles when it comes to demon-Spike.
Oh... Buffy talked to Spike again last chapter, didn't see William after that. And got to know something and accepted it (that she need a bit of demon in her man). And now William smokes like Spike does. *keeps her eyes open for more signs*
And he likes hot food. You need indeed a good stomach for this.
Buffy is right about that: It's just that Spike didn't do it for the reward. ...He sacrificed himself for me. And literally saved billions of lives while doing it. With no thought or hope of reward. But Angel does, it's about what he gets.
And Buffy learned another lesson now unconditional love, she is really getting better. Epiphany that the needs both of them, man and monster.
Ah I wondered about the missing invitation but Buffy said to William Come on in. Connected. :)
Loved Spike's reaction to Angel and Willow's reaction to Spike.
The soul? Didn't expect that.
~ Enjoyed the update, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: You guys are too smart! :D I had fun writing Spike's and Willow's reactions. I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

Reviewer: Gill B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 - 10:01 am Title: Chapter 4

Now this is getting really intriguing... A William who's becoming more Spike-like, and a Spike who has a soul, is becoming less demonic, and more like he was later in the series (selectivly dangerous but less cowed)... Liking this a lot and can't wait for tomorrow's episode!

Author's Response: They're bleeding into each other, which is where the juggling act comes in. :D I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!

Reviewer: PS Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 - 07:15 am Title: Chapter 4

At least William is not as wimpy as before-stoof up to Angel. And Spike -not quite all demon.

Two sides of the same coin..maybe.

Waiting to see if he is just "one"..

Enjoying the banter between Spike/Buffy-and of course his promise of the dance..

Author's Response: Aha! :D I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter 4

Oh annoying, self righteous Angel...how you do entertain. :) What a git. I'm so glad William held his own and wasn't intimidated by the big wanker. And so demon Spike still has his soul huh? I loved the line about a vamp with a soul just being wrong. lol And the Spuffy kissage was hot, he's right something is gonna happen soon. heehee.

Can't wait to see what the answer is to all this...it's so different than any other story...

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I didn't want to take away the soul that Spike had suffered so much to get, but I couldn't resist the joke that, not knowing he has it, he'd be scornful of it.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter 4

Oh......what fun this chapter was! I personally don't dislike Angel (at least in principle) but I always laugh out loud at your characterization of him--he does come off as a self-important doofus :-). And may I just say how hot the Spuffy was in this chapter, loved it!

Author's Response: I don't really dislike Angel either - I enjoyed AtS. But I don't think he's right for Buffy and he does come across as self-righteous, stuck on himself and with a god complex. So I write him that way. :D I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 3

Aww shy William is so sweet, but he does nothing for Buffy. I'm glad she finally realized it's the demon that turns her on. Gee, didn't she figure it out after having months of amazing sex with him,cause that sure as hell wasn't William. ;p Buffy can be so clueless. I love Demon!Spike,,,,he's hot, but he does need a bit of softening.:)

Can't wait to see what the end game is here...it's very interesting. I love it!

Author's Response: You know Buffy and her fixation on 'normal'. She has to be whacked over the head before she will admit that normal doesn't do it for her. :D I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 - 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 3

Willow is quick to say to dust Spike; they don't know what happened yet, if they still need him.
Buffy has met Spike now and William has bleached his hair again - coincidence? Or these two events are linked.
Maybe it's a big lesson for Buffy to learn what she wants of Spike - and it seems it isn't the human form like she believed.
Ah Spike was looking for her and found her home. So he doesn't remember a lot, seems he got from the amulet to Rome.
Mmmh-hmmm Buffy said it herself, she's turned on by the demon, not the human. Perhaps because of her own demon in her, the slayer. Sounds as if she is learning her lesson.
Looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response: Buffy is finally starting to learn. :D Thank you for liking it! More coming.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 - 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is a great story, a new angle of post Series 7 and your characterisation of Buffy is neither the hardnut nor the directionless slayer with a small 's' in some other adaptations. She is both grieving and resilient, hopeful and aware, she is almost equal combination of Slayer and girl. She has been able to not just grab at William just because he looks like Spike facially. And although she clings to the demon as he kisses her and reminds her so much more of Spike, she is still keenly aware that neither one is essentially, her Spike. Somehow, I don't think we are ever going to see them together ...... (the two Spikes, that is).

It's a pleasure to read.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it! And you're quite right, of course. :D

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 - 10:55 am Title: Chapter 3

Of course she feels passion and lust for the demon but she needs William for the love and trust. It is so obvious that they are both Spike only split like what happened to Xander with the Toth demon. I was just hoping that there might have been a little more feelings for William; but then if there was she might not feel the need to keep the demon existing if there was a way to keep William and not have to worry about some kind of link if William was perfect and she felt nothing for the demon.

Author's Response: If William was enough, she'd have no trouble dusting the demon. But Buffy always needs some monster in her man - she just wouldn't admit it, with her hang-up about 'normal'. She's learning. :D Thank you so much for enjoying it!

Reviewer: Gill B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 - 09:58 am Title: Chapter 3

Brilliant as always; I like the way that Spike and William seem different though somehow alike... It will be good to see where this one ends up - but thank goodness we aren't having the 'Spike and Angel see Buffy dancing and can't get to her' scenario...

Author's Response: I hated that scenario too, so it won't happen. The different but alike was the tough part. :D I'm so glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Shay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter 3

I love your idea the way this is going can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 2

This is so ,so good ! 2 Spikes...my fave, YUMMY! I'm even liking Willow and Xander again. I wonder what's going on that both Spikes exist? Was it TPTB? And I can't wait to see Mr. Broodypire when he finds out Spike Shanshued. LOL

Love it dreamweaver!

Author's Response: Yeah, Angel's not going to be happy! :D I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!

Reviewer: fyreburned (Kara) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 - 02:53 am Title: Chapter 3

Well, DUH, Buffy! We ALL could've pointed that out to her! Ah, poor William... the poor cold little fish... still geeky after all these years!
But how odd that his hair is now platinum, and that he doesn't remember how it got that way...hmmmmm.
You paint demon!-Spike's grace, speed, strength and kinetic pacing (like a caged panther) oh-so-very-well!
Can't wait for more!
~~Kara

Author's Response: We knew it, but Buffy never would admit it. :D Now she has to. Spike with his restlessness and his energy, always in motion, always seems like one of the big cats to me and I write him like that. (Angel, on the other hand, always seemed like a mastiff. :D) I'm so glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter 3

Poor Buffy she must feel so confused and conflicted. Enjoying so far please update soon.

Author's Response: She needed to learn what we all already know - that normal is not what she wants. It's the demon side that gets her hot. :D

Reviewer: katamaphone Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2010 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well, I didn't see that one coming. I can honestly say, that I have no idea where you're going to go with this one. I only know I'll enjoy the ride!::))
It's lovely to still see new ideas in the fandom, even after all this time. I really do love the idea of Buffy and Spike, and I hate what Joss has done to her in the comics. Truly, I would much rather read the stories from the Spuffy websites any day of the week.
It's always a pleasure to see you've put up a new story to feed my inner romantic. I'm sure I'll love it, I always do.

Author's Response: Oh, I hate what they're doing in the comics too! I even laid out some of my issues in 'Coming Back Wrong'. Me, I love exploring the Spike/Buffy dynamic and the places it can go. That's what this story's about and I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2010 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you! More up tonight.

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2010 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow! I'm intreged and slightly confused lol Two Spike's?? this should be intresting.

Author's Response: Double the fun, right? :D Thank you for enjoying it!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2010 - 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

Two Spikes.. or a day and night version..

Enjoyed the chapter..

Author's Response: I hadn't tried William before, but still didn't want to give up vamp-Spike. :) I'm so glad you're liking it! Thank you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2010 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter 2

That was a surprise to see a human version of Spike now (but that's why you have two Spikes on your banner, huh?)
So maybe Spike got split into a human William form and the later version, Spike the vamp. Should that be the case I looking forward to see how different it makes them both. Or how familiar.
Ahhh Spike seems indeed to be 'pure' vampire. Maybe the PTBs wanted to show Buffy something.
But doing that - making two of one - doesn't seem right. Hopefully they can fix it again, bringing the 'old' Spike back.

Enjoyed the update. Seven chapters - so maybe I'll read most of them later I guess (regarding at the time they are posted) because I have to work. But now I know what I can be looking forward to. :))
Seems as if not many people read at TSR, more at EF, regarding the count of comments.

Author's Response: That's why there's two Spikes on the banner, yes. :) I hadn't tried William before, but I still didn't want to give up vamp-Spike, so this was a way to have my cake and eat it. *g* Thank you for enjoying it! I don't know whether it's that more people read at EF or that less people are reviewing on TSR and BSV. EF doesn't tell one how many people read, unlike TSR and BSV.

Reviewer: SeaPea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2010 - 06:56 am Title: Chapter 2

Yay, you're back with another story! I think this is a very good premise. I'll look forward to the updates. Love your stuff!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I love trying different variations on their dynamic.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2010 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 1

loving this story, so detailed. Love the self reflection of Buffy on the way she had treated Spike before his death. Love the teaser at the end..more please

Author's Response: I wanted her to finally realize what she had done. I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm so happy to see a new dreamweaver story and this seems to be like another good one. I'm glad Buffy finally realized how much she loved Spike and all that she lost. That last scene in Chosen was pretty callous IMO. And anything that has Spike in "S8" is OK by me, :) And what in the name of pete is going on with Spike? Hide and seek seems like a good title.

Great beginning...I'm hooked! :)

Author's Response: Oh, I felt the same about that last scene in Chosen! It seemed incredibly callous - Buffy smiling and Xander joking about Anya's death and everyone riding happily off into the sunset, not caring that people who loved them had just died for them. I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you!

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 - 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a wonderful surprise--another fic by you! Funny thing is that I was just in the process of re-reading some of your older stories when I noticed this one posted. I love your work and another new fic is certainly welcome reading. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us this time!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoy my work and I hope you like this one. It's more convoluted than usual and I'm not sure whether I've done it right. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 - 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's always good to get a notice from Elysian Fields that you've posted a new story; this way I get to know it quicker (sadly TSR doesn't have it).
BTW if you want to tell it: How many chapters does this story have?
For the lack of a better word: I like the twist of Buffy finally finding out what kind of feelings she has for Spike and regretting lost opportunities.
Hard for her not to have one to talk about it.

Ohhhh ... Spike is back now? Teasing slayers. Makes me wonder why he is back there and what he remembers.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it! Thank you! Everybody joking and being so happy as they drove off into the sunset after people who loved them died for them made me so mad and I wanted Buffy to at least realize what she really feels about Spike. There's going to be 7 chapters - that seems to be becoming my pattern. :)

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