Date: 04/19/2010 - 06:46 pm Title: Chapter Five
Like that they can be carefree with one another
Author's Response: =)
Date: 04/12/2010 - 06:52 pm Title: Chapter Five
'I love yous' exchanged between them are always wonderful, but it was especially sweet the way you wrote it. And I loved the playfulness at the end, made me giggle :D
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked!
Date: 03/24/2010 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter Five
I'd wondered about the "I love yous," too, so it was wonderful to have Buffy address them. When it happened, it felt organic and prompted that heart felt conversation. These two are still working through their issues and you're making it believable and entertaining.
The aftermath of their romp in the sea was vividly drawn and utterly charming. It's lovely to find them so playful and relaxed in light of Spike's unsure future. That last line made me smile with glee.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it felt natural.
Date: 03/24/2010 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter Five
Like reading this story and how Spike and Buffy get to have "their" moment together without outside demands placed upon them. Very bittersweet at this point. Look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying. :)
Date: 03/22/2010 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Five
I'm really enjoying this one, plus it helps to soothe my "post-"Chosen" fic-jonesing! I can't wait to see where you are going with why Spike can't stay for good/his time w/Buffy is limited, & why he can't 'vamp-out'/go into game-face, can go out into the sun, & generally isn't being very vamp-like. Also, what was the thing about being unable to taste? Will Spike appearing in Angel's office (AtS, S05) 19 days after closing the SD Hell-Mouth come into play in this fic? BTW, you're really conveying the feeling of the more relaxed pace of a get-away/isolated seaside vacation/retreat very well. It feels unhurried, paced, peaceful; I can practically hear the ebb & flow of the ocean as I read, in the background. Thanks again, like I said, am really enjoying it.
~~Kara
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying! Thanks for the great review. :D You've actually been pretty astute with your guessing. ;) I really did want to create the kind of atmosphere you've described, so I'm glad it's working. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03/22/2010 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter Five
I loved this sweet, playful chappie. It made me happy to see them so carefree and Spike enjoying himself. :) And it was so nice to see Buffy just say ILY without thinking about it, just natural.
This makes me happy and sad, knowing Spike will be gone. I can't wait to see what you have planned.
Hope you keep your inspiration for this and will be able to post. :)
Loved it Xaph...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the fic. :)
Date: 03/21/2010 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Five
Lovely, lovely!
Thanks for the update. :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/21/2010 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter Five
Awe I'm glad Buffy was able to say she loved Spike so casual. If she had waited and planned it, not sure how long it would have taken her to say it.
Loved the update and looking forward to more. *fingers crossed* you won't run out of chapters.
Author's Response: I'm glad the 'I love you' seemed natural, that was what I was aiming for. Thanks for the review!