[Report This]Date: 03/24/2010 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter One
I'm already enjoying the set up in this beautifully written start. Buffy seems to be moving in a semi-dream state in the beginning, allowing her instincts to lead her to this charming beach town.
You created a haven of calm and the dream was a jarring brush with reality. Of course Buffy would shoulder the blame for Spike's death. It's what she does.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2010 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter Five
Like reading this story and how Spike and Buffy get to have "their" moment together without outside demands placed upon them. Very bittersweet at this point. Look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/22/2010 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Five
I'm really enjoying this one, plus it helps to soothe my "post-"Chosen" fic-jonesing! I can't wait to see where you are going with why Spike can't stay for good/his time w/Buffy is limited, & why he can't 'vamp-out'/go into game-face, can go out into the sun, & generally isn't being very vamp-like. Also, what was the thing about being unable to taste? Will Spike appearing in Angel's office (AtS, S05) 19 days after closing the SD Hell-Mouth come into play in this fic? BTW, you're really conveying the feeling of the more relaxed pace of a get-away/isolated seaside vacation/retreat very well. It feels unhurried, paced, peaceful; I can practically hear the ebb & flow of the ocean as I read, in the background. Thanks again, like I said, am really enjoying it.
~~Kara
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying! Thanks for the great review. :D You've actually been pretty astute with your guessing. ;) I really did want to create the kind of atmosphere you've described, so I'm glad it's working. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/22/2010 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter Five
I loved this sweet, playful chappie. It made me happy to see them so carefree and Spike enjoying himself. :) And it was so nice to see Buffy just say ILY without thinking about it, just natural.
This makes me happy and sad, knowing Spike will be gone. I can't wait to see what you have planned.
Hope you keep your inspiration for this and will be able to post. :)
Loved it Xaph...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the fic. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/21/2010 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Five
Lovely, lovely!
Thanks for the update. :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03/21/2010 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter Five
Awe I'm glad Buffy was able to say she loved Spike so casual. If she had waited and planned it, not sure how long it would have taken her to say it.
Loved the update and looking forward to more. *fingers crossed* you won't run out of chapters.
Author's Response: I'm glad the 'I love you' seemed natural, that was what I was aiming for. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03/21/2010 - 06:05 am Title: Chapter Four
This is quite enjoyable. It has the atmosphere of an English mystery novel but spuffy which makes it doubly awesome, the genres marry well...buffy is practically Dagliesh like in this one.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/20/2010 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Four
A bit sad that he cant stay.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/19/2010 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter Four
Nice chappie. Poor Spike and Buffy. This is so sad. Spike can't stay.*cries* I hope they can figure something out, but in the meantime I agree with Buffy and they should just be happy to be together.
Lovin this, more soon plz!
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't want to reveal anything so I'll just say keep reading and all will be revealed!
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2010 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter Four
That's bad, Spike being a ghost that can't stay. I hope they can find a solution for this.
It's good that Buffy won't give up (or better: letting Spike give up) and convinced him that she wants him there, too. :)
Author's Response: Buffy doesn't want him to give up. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2010 - 06:06 am Title: Chapter Three
Just started reading this story, really am intrigued on whether Buffy is manifesting Spike with her mourning his demise or just destiny giving her a "crumb" making her walk in Spikes shoes in a role reversal. Look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Everything will be revealed in time.
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2010 - 11:21 am Title: Chapter Three
Really good!
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2010 - 09:21 pm Title: Chapter Three
Great chapter! Loved it! You conveyed their tenderness & quiet emotions very well. Loved that last little bit about their burn scars. Too many people overlook the probability of that. Can't wait to see how it's possible (in your fic) for Spike to be (or manifest) there & seem solid. Thanks for the lovely read!
~~Kara
Author's Response: I kind of like the idea that they would have matching scars from the flames in Chosen. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2010 - 09:06 pm Title: Chapter Three
Beautiful, lovely chappie. Their lovemaking was so sweet. I'm so happy Spike is there, but the line about being as real as he can be has me worried. *bites nails*
Update soon plz, I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you're enjoying. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2010 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Three
BEAUTIFUL
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2010 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter Three
Ohhhhhhhhh it sounds as if Spike is really there now. *fingers crossed* that there is a way that he can stay.
Author's Response: You'll see! ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2010 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter Three
Lovely chapter, xaph. Can't wait to find out what's going on with Spike.
Author's Response: Thank you, Mary! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2010 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter Two
Call me officially intrigued. Definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2010 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter Two
I'm so curious to see where you take this. I like all the clues that Spike is around. The Ramones, and the Billy Idol CD lol.
And Buffy is on the case and won't rest until she finds out what's going on. :)
Lovin this, more soon plz!
Author's Response: She might find out what's going on sooner than she expects... ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2010 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter Two
What a fabulous buildup! Please continue!
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2010 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter Two
There seems to be indeed something leading Buffy, there are so many coincidences.
Looking eagerly forward to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying, more soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2010 - 08:55 pm Title: Chapter Two
It will be interesting to see how the story will go.
Author's Response: I hope you'll like where it goes. Thanks for commenting! :)
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2010 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter Two
This is a very interesting story. I am anxious to read how Spike is making himself known. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! The next update will be Sunday, so keep an eye out. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/10/2010 - 02:56 am Title: Chapter One
Don't stop! It's good!
Author's Response: Hee! Not stopping, just pausing before the next update! ;) Thanks for reading and commenting!
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2010 - 08:45 pm Title: Chapter One
Your words perfectly capture the banner in this story. I like it so far, please continue and update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope the fic continues to do the banner justice.
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